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| About Gilded Folly... |
| 02.19.09 (3:00 pm) [edit] |
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It's a muggy and rainy day here in Auckland. Phew! I was scrolling through my emails today, and found some posts from Terry Odell and Sharon Horton, some of my fellow Cerridwen Press authors. Apparently, CP is having a big sale at the moment. I checked on my books, and sure enough, the paperback copies of Gilded Folly are less than the ebooks (only $3.50!). This is a scary - and funny - fantasy. Very suspenseful at times, too. I've posted 3 excerpts below. I don't know how long this sale will last, so forgive me if it's run its course before you have a chance to get there. Regards, and best wishes, Norah/ND/Melody Review 1 - "Fantastic imagery, suspenseful plot, tension to beat all tension, incites the reader to sit on the edge of the seat and read until the last letter, the last dot, until THE END. ND Hansen-Hill weaves a tale of the battle of good versus evil that seems so real the reader will look askance at his/her neighbor and wonder. ND does a great job balancing the story elements and creating a story worth reading. Unexpected statements are written and/or made throughout the whole story instilling humor and a bit of surprised delight. Great for the fantasy lover, the sci-fi lover, or even the romantic one. What can be more romantic than a woman being protected from an assassin? Loved this story!" Reviewer: Lucille PRobinson http://tjbook-list.blogspot.com/search/label/Authors" title="http://tjbook-list.blogspot.com/search/label/Authors" target="_blank"http://tjbook-list.blogspot.c...:%20H Excerpts It was no longer dark, but Dacey was beginning to wish it were. A subsonic hum vibrated her eardrums and her teeth, the resonance rising into audible range, where it shook her body. Like a microwave. The cooked scenario entered her head, but she wouldn’t let herself think it. It was enough of a prod, though, to get her moving. Her unseen adversaries weren’t entirely stationary. She would like to believe that was more mechanical action, too, like the hum, but the sounds were far too restless—like a multitude of boots grinding and crunching on gravel. Alive. No inanimate pistons or gears. Claws and teeth, restlessly gnawing away at rock... Stop it! Dacey swore right then that no matter what, she wouldn’t give up without a fight. She ran for the steps—for where she hoped they’d be. You fell down them—landed on your knees. Get it right, Girl...last chance... The light was so startling she tripped over her feet and went sprawling. It wasn’t coming from the walls or the ceiling. It was coming from her skin. Her own body was brightening the room, like a white shirt under black light. The sight was so shocking Dacey froze. All kinds of thoughts were running through her head. She was so caught up in confusion, that she almost missed the movement. The walls were losing integrity, as man-size pieces detached and dropped limply to the stone floor. Rustle-thud, rustle-thunk. Now, the pieces shivered and shook, then arose, finding their whole within the fallen tangle of limbs. Skeletally thin beings, with a near-human cast... ...arising out of rock. Dacey backed away, and headed once more for the steps—only to find they’d beat her there. They’ve been in the dark so long... It was almost as though she could read their thoughts. Her light was a lure, to draw them in. They wanted light...and heat. ...but mostly, they wanted food. Dacey opened her mouth and began to scream. AND Humans! he thought, with a sigh. It had been a long time since he’d made any distinction between himself and these others he called friend. Today, it seemed, he was destined to call attention to it, if he were to be of any help to Rom...or the woman. At that moment, in the middle of Wick’s dire reflections, Fitz sat down in a chair, his eyes drooping. Wick held off maybe ten seconds, then slipped one foot out of bed, his toes touching the cold floor. Fitz didn’t stir. Hopeful now, Wick passed a shaking hand over the top of the monitor, effectively silencing it. He was grinning triumphantly at his own success when he twisted his head, and met Fitz’ eyes. Uh-oh... Humans could be truly intimidating at times... Fitz was so angry his face was set, in a way Wick had never seen before. It would appear that however determined Wick was to leave, Fitz was equally determined to keep him here. Plikva! When Fitz turned his back, to fiddle with the machine in a furious, frustrated, what-the-hell-did-you-do- to-it, I-refuse-to-look-at-you way, Wick decided it was time to make amends. He was undervaluing Fitz’ efforts—something he’d never intended. I’m destined to cause trouble wherever I go... Regretful now, Wick reached past Fitz and snapped his fingers. The monitor took up where it had left off. Wick, for his part, was exhausted by the small effort. Shivering, he leaned back on the pillows, desperate to retain any dignity he had left. Fitz was still refusing to look at him. He was watching the monitor angrily, adjusting it with stiff fingers, and ignoring Wick completely. It wasn’t until he noticed something in the readings, though, which alarmed him, that he hastily turned back, and grabbed a glass by the bed. “Drink,” he ordered sternly. Vinegar water! Wick was too weak to argue. He drank deeply, unable to control a shudder which started somewhere in his centre. “Th-Thank you, F-Fitz,” he whispered. “F-For everything.” Fitz continued to watch both him and the monitors. “You’re a damn fool, Wick,” he grumbled, a note of concern in his voice that Wick was certain he must have misheard. This human friend was more right than he knew. As Wick’s eyes drooped closed, he murmured mockingly, “Both a fool, and damned. There was never such a kavlklakt as I...” AND The idea sent a shudder down his spine. A lone bat strayed through the low branches and Wick jumped. Any movement was suspect. Had something chased the bat from its perch? He squatted down, his back pressed against the coarse bark of a Monterey pine. The solidity of it gave him an illusion of safety. The night remained still, as though holding its breath. Sucking in the sound and holding it hostage... It was like a black hole in his surroundings: sucking in sound, and light, and life. When the night quickened once more, and the insect chorus returned to clicked and chirped mating signals, Wick moved on, nesting his feet in the thick needle beds so he wouldn’t accidentally tread upon a branch. He never saw It come. It was camouflaged in the nightsound clutter, which took him by surprise. The night suddenly darkened, and the stars were blotted out. He was slammed back, against a tree. Slammed and pounded to centre the blood beneath the skin. Wick kicked and punched and pounded back, but he was blinded by smoke. It rose around him, while bony fingers raked at his clothes. His eyes ran, his lungs screamed, and a howl was choked off in his throat. He was falling now, dimly aware of pine needles jabbing his skin. Awareness faded quickly, displaced by the lassitude which was filling him. He knew he should fight the feeling; knew what it signified, but all he wanted to do was sleep. It was the Hambre Muerte, the Death Gorge. No! Tradition demanded he lie here and die now, grateful for the mercy of last-moment oblivion. It was the way these things were done... No! Not here! Wick’s fingers were already growing numb. He gritted his teeth, forcing the digits to close on a pointed branch. Then he jabbed it, into the bony head. There was a satisfying crunch and thud. The Mictlampa ripped back, with an audible slurp, its jagged teeth torn away from Wick’s muscle. Its moment was past, and instead of a wily predator, it was confused and disoriented—flailin g and blind. Tastes of a leech, and eating habits to match... Wick lay there limply, worried about the demon’s reputation for persistence, and worrying more about its companions. Was it alone? He recalled another sorry fact from his past. Micts never travel alone... He wriggled his fingers, clenched his fists, bent his toes, and jiggled his limbs—determined to lose the lassitude. The blood scent would bring the others in. No way! He crunched the bloodsucker with his foot, right in the face. The creature flopped back, writhing in agony, all the while making a low-pitched grunting sound. Wick pushed himself up to a sitting position, grabbed another branch, and whopped the thing again. The beast was knocked back, onto the pine needle carpet. Silent now, it did what tradition claimed: melted away, into the undergrowth. At least, Wick was sure that was what it had intended. Its actual disappearance looked a lot more like a wobbling retreat. Wick sat there, in bloodied triumph, listening to the crunch and thud as it ran into branches, shrubs, trees. He wondered if, ten years ago, he would’ve had the balls to offer a challenge. Too indoctrinated. He savoured his victory a few minutes longer. That’s what he told himself, anyway, but himself knew he was actually waiting for his heart to stop that erratic flopping in his chest. He leaned back, impatient, but unwilling to risk his life on a quick escape. If I pass out here, I’ll never get up again... When the stars reappeared in the sky, he tugged himself up the rest of the way, using the trunk for support. Cursing and swearing, he staggered back the way he’d come. http://www.jasminejade.com/pm-3140-223-gilded-fo lly.aspx" title="http://www.jasminejade.com/pm-3140-223-gilded-fo lly.aspx" target="_blank"http://www.jasminejade.com/pm...
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| My 2008 in Excerpts |
| 01.28.09 (12:29 pm) [edit] |
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Hi! This month has been terribly hectic! Eleven book edits, with little else being accomplished, other than work and editing (oh, and the gym! I joined a gym and have actually been going, if only to get away from my computer). These edits are brought on by a very lucky 2008. In Flames, Of Dragons, The Hollowing, GlassWorks, ErRatic, and Emerald City were all released last year. The sequel to ~In Trysts~  REVIEWS In Flames 1 - "Fast paced and edgy tension highlights this passionate thriller. In Flames is a roller coaster ride of secrets and ghosts and sizzling sensuality. The plot line is solid and kept this reader guessing to the dramatic end. Marco and Sophia are likable individuals that I felt an affinity with from the opening. Melody Knight is an author whose back list I look forward to reading." Lettetia Elasser, Affaire de Coeur July/August 2008 2 - "Her combustibility and the secrets of her past form the basis for this intriguing mystery." Literary Nymphs http://literarynymphsrevi ewsonly.blogspot.com/2008/07/in-flames.htmlEXCERPT" title="http://literarynymphsrevi ewsonly.blogspot.com/2008/07/in-flames.htmlEXCERPT" target="_blank"http://literarynymphsrevi ewso... EXCERPT Sophie lost him in the smoke and steam. She screamed, choked on soot and swallowed water—then it was all gagging, paddling, churning her way through the wash. The surge was relentless, all troughs and waves, floating wood and falling stone. She was slammed against the wall and felt her shoulder give. Sophie shrieked and fought for air. “Marco!” He had her. Marco grabbed her, and clung. She held onto him weakly, and opened her eyes to find he was smiling. Sophie lost him in the smoke and steam. She screamed, choked on soot and swallowed water—then it was all gagging, paddling, churning her way through the wash. The surge was relentless, all troughs and waves, floating wood and falling stone. She was slammed against the wall and felt her shoulder give. Sophie shrieked and fought for air. “Marco!” He had her. Marco grabbed her, and clung. She held onto him weakly, and opened her eyes to find he was smiling. Sophie lost him in the smoke and steam. She screamed, choked on soot and swallowed water—then it was all gagging, paddling, churning her way through the wash. The surge was relentless, all troughs and waves, floating wood and falling stone. She was slammed against the wall and felt her shoulder give. Sophie shrieked and fought for air. “Marco!” He had her. Marco grabbed her, and clung. She held onto him weakly, and opened her eyes to find he was smiling. Sophie lost him in the smoke and steam. She screamed, choked on soot and swallowed water—then it was all gagging, paddling, churning her way through the wash. The surge was relentless, all troughs and waves, floating wood and falling stone. She was slammed against the wall and felt her shoulder give. Sophie shrieked and fought for air. “Marco!” He had her. Marco grabbed her, and clung. She held onto him weakly, and opened her eyes to find he was smiling. Sophie lost him in the smoke and steam. She screamed, choked on soot and swallowed water—then it was all gagging, paddling, churning her way through the wash. The surge was relentless, all troughs and waves, floating wood and falling stone. She was slammed against the wall and felt her shoulder give. Sophie shrieked and fought for air. “Marco!” He had her. Marco grabbed her, and clung. She held onto him weakly, and opened her eyes to find he was smiling. A death’s head grin. It was Gerald Beaumont. “Sophie!” he cried, clawing at her head, her shoulders, climbing her like a bobbing tree. She was going under, down, when Marco snatched her out of Gerald’s grasp and flung him aside. But Marco’s hold on her was tenuous, and Beaumont’s frantic antics cost him. Scratch, tear, rip, fling, but in the wildly swirling muddle, of dirt and bone, ash and wood, filthy foam and churning backwash, Sophie was jarred loose from Marco’s grasp once more, out of his reach. He heard her choked off “Marc-!” as she vanished beneath the rising waters. http://www.lindenbayromance.com/product-inflames-144- 149.html" title="http://www.lindenbayromance.com/product-inflames-144- 149.html" target="_blank"http://www.lindenbayromance.c... Of Dragons It'll eat you alive...
Nominated for Best SF/Fantasy Book of 2008 by LRC Nominated for the Sir Julius Vogel Award 2008 REVIEWS 1 - "The story is filled with adventure, danger, and conflict. Now that Ryon and his friend know about Glynt's world can they just ignore it or should they get involved? Is Ryon really human as he believes or something more as Glynt believes? If you are looking for an unusual tale of adventure, the strength of the human spirit, and love all rolled into a fantasy story about other dimensions, then you will enjoy Of Dragons.
Reviewed by: Stephanie B." http://www.fallenangelreviews.com/2008/April/StephanieB -OfDragons.htm" title="http://www.fallenangelreviews.com/2008/April/StephanieB -OfDragons.htm" target="_blank"http://www.fallenangelreviews... "Of Dragons is a story that tells of how worlds are connected to each other and how love can become a reality for those who want it. " Literary Nymphs http://literarynymphsrevi ewso... EXCERPT
She was nearly dressed when she heard them. The vibration rattled the shiny Christmas ornaments on her dressing table, making the glass ping harshly against the table top. No! Her fingers clasped the adamantine dragonfly encircling her neck, as terror quickened her heartbeat. Chills raced down her limbs in spiky little arrays. That sound—that horrifying, buzzing thunder—was one she recognized, deep inside. The fear of them—and their appetites—had been bred into her through a hundred generations. Glynt ran. Panicked, she fled the bedroom with its flimsy-looking glass and raced for the balcony doors. They were thick fire doors—surely, they could resist the impact? Ten thousand dragonfly wings… The daylight went. The thickness of the horde—the sheer mass—was blotting out the sun. Desperate, near-petrified, she yanked the curtains closed. The ramming slam of ten thousand exoskeletonned bodies splintered the glass, but it didn’t stop the beating—that horrific, mechanical swish of their wings. They were driving themselves at the doors, at the glass, frenzied. Day sounds were lost in the ceaseless roar of overlying wing beats. In the bedroom, the glass imploded. Shatters of refracted light caught her eye, as they showered the door jamb. As they blasted through, onto the carpet. I didn’t close the door. Her eyes widened in horror, and she raced for the exit. She was nearly to the front door when it began vibrating. They were in the hall, in hunting mode, and desperate to get to her. Hide. Where?! Frantic, she ran back to the curtained windows, in hopes of fooling Them. She was out of her element, and hidey holes were nowhere to be found. She cowered down, wrapped herself in curtain fabric, and scrunched into her smallest form. Already, she knew it wouldn’t help—couldn’t help. They were lured. Starving. Driven. Those multifaceted eyes would find her. Ever hungry, they’d hunt her…on the wing. http://redrosepublishing.com/bookstore/index.php?manufacturers_id=83" title="http://redrosepublishing.com/bookstore/index.php?manufacturers_id=83" target="_blank"http://redrosepublishing.com/...
The Hollowing Nominated for the 2008 Sir Julius Vogel Award REVIEW 1 - "This is an exceptionally, spine-tingling, gut wrenching thriller that takes you by the seat of your pants and have you gripping your chair while you turn each page. From ghosts to time-traveling you are always entertained by the adventure and excitement of this plot excellent dialogue and fabulous description gives you a great seat up front to all that is happening. This is a phenomenal read, and I recommend it highly. Wateena " http://www.coffeetimeromance.com/BookReviews/Thehollow ing.html" title="http://www.coffeetimeromance.com/BookReviews/Thehollow ing.html" target="_blank"http://www.coffeetimeromance.... 2 - "The Hollowing is a well-written novel involving the modern day conclusions drawn from a long history of paranormal events coupled with the age-old theories of time travel. Here is an old idea presented in a new and spell-binding story that will surely be of interest to fans of any genre. " Reviewer: Lucille P Robinson http://tjbook-list.blogspot.com/search/label/Authors" title="http://tjbook-list.blogspot.com/search/label/Authors" target="_blank"http://tjbook-list.blogspot.c...:%20H EXCERPT Open the door. But he couldn’t. His arm was rigid, his fingers clenched. And he couldn’t make himself touch the knob. Safe. Stay where you’re safe… There was something waiting for him on the stairs. His impression of darkness—of The Hollowing—hadn’t been exaggerated. He stood there, shaking, and listened. Beyond the wooden partition the thick silence was giving way. Breaking down the barriers. Little whispers, small thuds, soft rustling cascades of movement. Rats. Only rats. Thuds and thunks. Rattles and clatters. And then a sound Shawn couldn’t attribute to anything else—the squeak and echo of a heavy tread on wood. Someone was ascending the stairs. Shawn was holding his breath so he could listen. He didn’t even realize it until his heart started throbbing in his ears. He stood there stiffly and listened to it coming. The door’s unlocked. An invitation if ever there was one. The knob was ice-cold beneath his fingers. The chill spread up his arm but he didn’t let it sway him. He squinted his eyes and yanked open the door. The noise swept through him, carrying with it a rancid stink and a flurry of movement. He couldn’t see anything but darkness and there was noise all around him. It was a fire. The crackling flames leapt up, roaring, popping, hissing. Screaming sizzles, mini explosions, whines of venting gas. And then it was merely screams. Shouts that escalated to howls and shrieks. Terror. That’s what this was—terror. Old emotions, dredged up and waiting. The stink of must mingled with the rancid odor of burning hair. Shawn dropped to his knees, sick and sweating. He fell down the stairs, hitting the landing with a gigantic crash. He couldn’t hear it though—couldn’t hear anything over the cacophony in his ears. In a half roll, half dive he splatted to the bottom floor and crawled, then pushed himself to his feet and staggered for the outer door. It was closed. Locked. He yanked on the knob, fumbled with the lock but it wouldn’t give. He couldn’t get the hinges loose on the door. The pins were as tight as the lock. No way out. He ran to the window and slammed the glass with a chair. Glass gave, bars didn’t. He rattled and shook and pounded. Phone. He yanked out his cell phone. It was dead. Like me. Around him the air seethed. It was transmitting itself to the furnishings. Chairs scraped, dust spiraled, papers flew. Shawn barely noticed over the smoke pouring into his eyes. There was only one way out. The upstairs room with its cool moonlight and empty spaces. Shawn flattened his hands over his ears, squinted his eyes and headed for the steps. His flesh was burning as he crawled, clambered and wriggled up the stairs. At the top he slammed back the door and dove… Onto a pyre of flame. Open the door. But he couldn’t. His arm was rigid, his fingers clenched. And he couldn’t make himself touch the knob. Safe. Stay where you’re safe… There was something waiting for him on the stairs. His impression of darkness—of The Hollowing—hadn’t been exaggerated. He stood there, shaking, and listened. Beyond the wooden partition the thick silence was giving way. Breaking down the barriers. Little whispers, small thuds, soft rustling cascades of movement. Rats. Only rats. Thuds and thunks. Rattles and clatters. And then a sound Shawn couldn’t attribute to anything else—the squeak and echo of a heavy tread on wood. Someone was ascending the stairs. Shawn was holding his breath so he could listen. He didn’t even realize it until his heart started throbbing in his ears. He stood there stiffly and listened to it coming. The door’s unlocked. An invitation if ever there was one. The knob was ice-cold beneath his fingers. The chill spread up his arm but he didn’t let it sway him. He squinted his eyes and yanked open the door. The noise swept through him, carrying with it a rancid stink and a flurry of movement. He couldn’t see anything but darkness and there was noise all around him. It was a fire. The crackling flames leapt up, roaring, popping, hissing. Screaming sizzles, mini explosions, whines of venting gas. And then it was merely screams. Shouts that escalated to howls and shrieks. Terror. That’s what this was—terror. Old emotions, dredged up and waiting. The stink of must mingled with the rancid odor of burning hair. Shawn dropped to his knees, sick and sweating. He fell down the stairs, hitting the landing with a gigantic crash. He couldn’t hear it though—couldn’t hear anything over the cacophony in his ears. In a half roll, half dive he splatted to the bottom floor and crawled, then pushed himself to his feet and staggered for the outer door. It was closed. Locked. He yanked on the knob, fumbled with the lock but it wouldn’t give. He couldn’t get the hinges loose on the door. The pins were as tight as the lock. No way out. He ran to the window and slammed the glass with a chair. Glass gave, bars didn’t. He rattled and shook and pounded. Phone. He yanked out his cell phone. It was dead. Like me. Around him the air seethed. It was transmitting itself to the furnishings. Chairs scraped, dust spiraled, papers flew. Shawn barely noticed over the smoke pouring into his eyes. There was only one way out. The upstairs room with its cool moonlight and empty spaces. Shawn flattened his hands over his ears, squinted his eyes and headed for the steps. His flesh was burning as he crawled, clambered and wriggled up the stairs. At the top he slammed back the door and dove… Onto a pyre of flame. Open the door. But he couldn’t. His arm was rigid, his fingers clenched. And he couldn’t make himself touch the knob. Safe. Stay where you’re safe… There was something waiting for him on the stairs. His impression of darkness—of The Hollowing—hadn’t been exaggerated. He stood there, shaking, and listened. Beyond the wooden partition the thick silence was giving way. Breaking down the barriers. Little whispers, small thuds, soft rustling cascades of movement. Rats. Only rats. Thuds and thunks. Rattles and clatters. And then a sound Shawn couldn’t attribute to anything else—the squeak and echo of a heavy tread on wood. Someone was ascending the stairs. Shawn was holding his breath so he could listen. He didn’t even realize it until his heart started throbbing in his ears. He stood there stiffly and listened to it coming. The door’s unlocked. An invitation if ever there was one. The knob was ice-cold beneath his fingers. The chill spread up his arm but he didn’t let it sway him. He squinted his eyes and yanked open the door. The noise swept through him, carrying with it a rancid stink and a flurry of movement. He couldn’t see anything but darkness and there was noise all around him. It was a fire. The crackling flames leapt up, roaring, popping, hissing. Screaming sizzles, mini explosions, whines of venting gas. And then it was merely screams. Shouts that escalated to howls and shrieks. Terror. That’s what this was—terror. Old emotions, dredged up and waiting. The stink of must mingled with the rancid odor of burning hair. Shawn dropped to his knees, sick and sweating. He fell down the stairs, hitting the landing with a gigantic crash. He couldn’t hear it though—couldn’t hear anything over the cacophony in his ears. In a half roll, half dive he splatted to the bottom floor and crawled, then pushed himself to his feet and staggered for the outer door. It was closed. Locked. He yanked on the knob, fumbled with the lock but it wouldn’t give. He couldn’t get the hinges loose on the door. The pins were as tight as the lock. No way out. He ran to the window and slammed the glass with a chair. Glass gave, bars didn’t. He rattled and shook and pounded. Phone. He yanked out his cell phone. It was dead. Like me. Around him the air seethed. It was transmitting itself to the furnishings. Chairs scraped, dust spiraled, papers flew. Shawn barely noticed over the smoke pouring into his eyes. There was only one way out. The upstairs room with its cool moonlight and empty spaces. Shawn flattened his hands over his ears, squinted his eyes and headed for the steps. His flesh was burning as he crawled, clambered and wriggled up the stairs. At the top he slammed back the door and dove… Onto a pyre of flame. Open the door. But he couldn’t. His arm was rigid, his fingers clenched. And he couldn’t make himself touch the knob. Safe. Stay where you’re safe… There was something waiting for him on the stairs. His impression of darkness—of The Hollowing—hadn’t been exaggerated. He stood there, shaking, and listened. Beyond the wooden partition the thick silence was giving way. Breaking down the barriers. Little whispers, small thuds, soft rustling cascades of movement. Rats. Only rats. Thuds and thunks. Rattles and clatters. And then a sound Shawn couldn’t attribute to anything else—the squeak and echo of a heavy tread on wood. Someone was ascending the stairs. Shawn was holding his breath so he could listen. He didn’t even realize it until his heart started throbbing in his ears. He stood there stiffly and listened to it coming. The door’s unlocked. An invitation if ever there was one. The knob was ice-cold beneath his fingers. The chill spread up his arm but he didn’t let it sway him. He squinted his eyes and yanked open the door. The noise swept through him, carrying with it a rancid stink and a flurry of movement. He couldn’t see anything but darkness and there was noise all around him. It was a fire. The crackling flames leapt up, roaring, popping, hissing. Screaming sizzles, mini explosions, whines of venting gas. And then it was merely screams. Shouts that escalated to howls and shrieks. Terror. That’s what this was—terror. Old emotions, dredged up and waiting. The stink of must mingled with the rancid odor of burning hair. Shawn dropped to his knees, sick and sweating. He fell down the stairs, hitting the landing with a gigantic crash. He couldn’t hear it though—couldn’t hear anything over the cacophony in his ears. In a half roll, half dive he splatted to the bottom floor and crawled, then pushed himself to his feet and staggered for the outer door. It was closed. Locked. He yanked on the knob, fumbled with the lock but it wouldn’t give. He couldn’t get the hinges loose on the door. The pins were as tight as the lock. No way out. He ran to the window and slammed the glass with a chair. Glass gave, bars didn’t. He rattled and shook and pounded. Phone. He yanked out his cell phone. It was dead. Like me. Around him the air seethed. It was transmitting itself to the furnishings. Chairs scraped, dust spiraled, papers flew. Shawn barely noticed over the smoke pouring into his eyes. There was only one way out. The upstairs room with its cool moonlight and empty spaces. Shawn flattened his hands over his ears, squinted his eyes and headed for the steps. His flesh was burning as he crawled, clambered and wriggled up the stairs. At the top he slammed back the door and dove… Onto a pyre of flame.
Reflected Moments...Refracted Terror REVIEW
"I have to say I've read this one and LOVED it. " Debbie
Author of Infidelity (www.deborahgould.com ) EXCERPT
Cate picked up the slab of glass from its tilted resting spot. It had dropped nearly intact. Her fingers shook as the first tracings of shimmery silica began to move beneath the surface. All those crystalline lattices somehow rearranging themselves… She froze, her breath frosting the glass from the sudden chill. Gooseflesh rose on her skin as the air around her grew cold. It had never happened this way before. The man was lying there, in the glass, his body sprawled with the indignity of all things dead and unburied. Cate's breath caught in her throat, the unspent fog almost choking her. Oh, God! It wasn't here—hadn't happened here—but it was happening now. There was an argument lingering, on the air. She couldn't see the moment of confrontation, or the altercation, but it had been about the mutilated body on the ground. About how to deal with it, to cast off blame with as much ease as they'd cast away his life. Only, they didn't realize he could hear them still. Hear them and hate them. Because it had always been about his looks. His looks, and justifying what he was. The grave they were giving him, the twisted notoriety they were planning, would leave him neither looks nor justice. Cate's eyes focused on his face. What they'd done, what they were doing to the rest of him didn't bear watching. But, apparently, she did. Bear watching, that is. The corpse's eyes opened, to stare straight at her. Cate flinched, twitched, recoiled, but she couldn't let go. Some part of her was screaming, but she was no longer sure whether it was her...or him. She clung to the pane, trapped. When, a forever it seemed, later, she freed her fingers enough to fling it, she remained there rigid, staring, as the moonglow image shattered in a hundred spiky shards. Some part of her was still recoiling, as if in reflex to a striking snake. God help me! In those instants of metaphysical contact, she felt as though one shriveled digit had touched her. Spanned the gap between life and death— I'm not a medium! She'd never been a medium—never even come close. It had been the one blessing, in an otherwise twisted gift, that however conversant she might have become with a dead person's past, she was never conversant with the dead! Until now, it seemed. Cate backed away, panted white puffs coiling and twisting in the otherwise still air. I'm not alone. It should have been comforting, that there was a taxi driver waiting just outside, but somehow, it came out differently. That "I'm not alone" was filled with horror. The taxi driver might be outside, but something else moved within. In a dreadful moment, she knew she'd brought this on herself—that by coming here she'd been willing, demanding almost, a contact with his person—had wanted so badly to save him, that she'd drawn in a soul barely severed from its body. Cate backed, tripped, twisted, and ran. She tore the length of the room as though the Devil were at her heels, and slammed open the end door with a loud squawking thunk. Using two hands, Cate wrenched the door closed again, locking evil within. She stumbled back, the small door pane fixing her into its framed panel. He wasn't within. Behind her, his hatred ever so much more pronounced in proximity, was the mutilated visage of the recently deceased.
*** http://redrosepublishing.com/booksto" title="http://redrosepublishing.com/booksto" target="_blank"http://redrosepublishing.com/... re/product_info.php?products_id=161 Reviews 1- "I just finished reading ErRatic and must tell you I enjoyed it IMMENSELY!" Ruth 2 - "A thoroughly enjoyable and entertaining tale that offers as much thrill as it does amusement, ERRATIC is not to be missed.
Kathy Samuels Romance Reviews Today" http://www.romrevtoday.com/" title="http://www.romrevtoday.com/" target="_blank"http://www.romrevtoday.com/ EXCERPT Emma glanced blearily at the clock. Three a.m., and Studley obviously needed to go out. He was whimpering, deep in his throat, and his cold nose kept nudging her arm. Damn dog! She reached out and gave the silky coat a pat. Zombie-like, she stumbled across the room, to the front door, and unfastened the lock. “Out!” she commanded, punctuating it with a squeaky yawn. When she opened her eyes again, the man was standing on the grass, just off the porch. It was a very small porch. She slammed the door and locked it, then raced through the house. She kept picturing Him running, trying to beat her to the back door. It’s locked. It’s got to be locked. It was, but she didn’t feel any better. No one had any business standing there, on her property, at three in the morning. He was up to no good. She ran for the kitchen and picked up a knife in one hand and the phone in the other. The knife shook in her frozen fingers. Not a good thing. He’ll use it on me. He damn well better not try. Her shadowy reflection in the window glass was that of a madwoman, brandishing a blade. Her staccato movements glinted across the toaster face, and she jumped, slashing the air. Hysteria burbled up, like an unwanted belch, before sense clunked in with a nearly audible jolt. Window. Nightlight. He’ll see me. Frantic, she dropped onto the floor, and punched in a fumbling “911”. If he saw me, I hope he saw the knife, too. She shouted into the phone, “There was—!”, realized she was shouting, and quickly
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| New Release - THE HOLLOWING |
| 04.19.08 (2:46 pm) [edit] |
AUTHOR: N. D. Hansen-Hill GENRE: Fantasy/Time Travel PUBLISHER: Cerridwen Press ISBN: 978-1-60202-061-0 RATING: PG
BLURB: Shawn Walsh's problems don't arise from his own troubled past but from someone else's. Fires, floods, battles, bone-rattling quakes — he's frequently an unwilling and horrified participant in events long gone. For when The Hollowing claims him, his present dissolves.
Unfortunately, his problems have everything to do with family and his rather questionable heritage — with a birthright he'd rather know nothing about. Lost and tossed about by destiny, trapped and extorted by those long deceased, he's tired of playing a victim.
And he refuses to give up hope. There is still a chance he'll be able to resolve his issues without dying, given the right place… And enough time. BOOK LINK:>>http://www.cerridwenpress.com...;< AUTHOR WEBSITES: N. D. Hansen-Hill | Melody Knight EXCERPT: Open the door. But he couldn’t. His arm was rigid, his fingers clenched. And he couldn’t make himself touch the knob. Safe. Stay where you’re safe… There was something waiting for him on the stairs. His impression of darkness—of The Hollowing—hadn’t been exaggerated. He stood there, shaking, and listened. Beyond the wooden partition the thick silence was giving way. Breaking down the barriers. Little whispers, small thuds, soft rustling cascades of movement. Rats. Only rats. Thuds and thunks. Rattles and clatters. And then a sound Shawn couldn’t attribute to anything else—the squeak and echo of a heavy tread on wood. Someone was ascending the stairs. Shawn was holding his breath so he could listen. He didn’t even realize it until his heart started throbbing in his ears. He stood there stiffly and listened to it coming. The door’s unlocked. An invitation if ever there was one. The knob was ice-cold beneath his fingers. The chill spread up his arm but he didn’t let it sway him. He squinted his eyes and yanked open the door. The noise swept through him, carrying with it a rancid stink and a flurry of movement. He couldn’t see anything but darkness and there was noise all around him. It was a fire. The crackling flames leapt up, roaring, popping, hissing. Screaming sizzles, mini explosions, whines of venting gas. And then it was merely screams. Shouts that escalated to howls and shrieks. Terror. That’s what this was—terror. Old emotions, dredged up and waiting. The stink of must mingled with the rancid odor of burning hair. Shawn dropped to his knees, sick and sweating. He fell down the stairs, hitting the landing with a gigantic crash. He couldn’t hear it though—couldn’t hear anything over the cacophony in his ears. In a half roll, half dive he splatted to the bottom floor and crawled, then pushed himself to his feet and staggered for the outer door. It was closed. Locked. He yanked on the knob, fumbled with the lock but it wouldn’t give. He couldn’t get the hinges loose on the door. The pins were as tight as the lock. No way out. He ran to the window and slammed the glass with a chair. Glass gave, bars didn’t. He rattled and shook and pounded. Phone. He yanked out his cell phone. It was dead. Like me. Around him the air seethed. It was transmitting itself to the furnishings. Chairs scraped, dust spiraled, papers flew. Shawn barely noticed over the smoke pouring into his eyes. There was only one way out. The upstairs room with its cool moonlight and empty spaces. Shawn flattened his hands over his ears, squinted his eyes and headed for the steps. His flesh was burning as he crawled, clambered and wriggled up the stairs. At the top he slammed back the door and dove… Onto a pyre of flame.
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| Visiting with Rose Marie Wolf, Excerpts |
| 04.03.08 (4:22 pm) [edit] |

News & Networking
It's been a busy week as usual. Of Dragons was released by Red Rose last Thursday, and it's been full on ever since. I have to admit I've learned a fair bit about promotion this week, and networking with other authors and author sites. Some of the romance sites, like Simply Romance , are extremely generous with both their time and their space. I finished the first round of edits on Gray Beginnings, and will be hastily contriving a suitable blurb. The edits for GlassWorks should be in the Inbox shortly, too. In a few minutes I'll be posting on Tales of the Trade. My blog post is due there today.
WIP & Other Things: Only a thousand words added this week to my "Nocturne Bites" effort, but I did submit a blurb for Art & Soul to the open call at Nocturne. This is a quick in effort, with decisions being made by April 16th. I love these mini subs and competitions because they spur me on either to try new genres or venues or to finish what I began months ago. The Nocturne "call" only lasts until the 8th, I believe, so it's time for a quick decision if you're a paranormal pennist.
A new, and quite exciting, Yahoo loop opened this week called "Paranormal Monday". Enthusiasm by authors, with excerpts being greeted enthusiastically by readers.
Oh, wrote an interesting poem this week entitled, "Fragile". I'm in the finals for the Poetry.com Editors' Choice competition, and to qualify, I needed another poem. It was the second poem for the week—the first being the one for Gray Beginnings. I was waxing poetic all over the place, LOL!
Authors of Note: Today's Author of Note is Rose Marie Wolf. Why does Rose enjoy writing? In her own words:
"I began writing on the day I first learned to spell the simplest words. It was in crayon, and the jumbled words made little sense, but that didn't matter. I was going to write.
Over time, the words began to form sentences and make sense. I was writing stories right and left. My second grade teacher, Mrs. White, loved my work and she was the first one to encourage me. She told me one day I was going to be a writer.
Well, I guess she was right about that.
People from all over have asked me when I began writing, or how I got started, but very few have asked me WHY.
Now that's a question I have to think on for a few minutes.
Why do I write? Well, it could be because writing is a release for me. It's how I convey my emotions when I might not be able to do so otherwise. I write to have fun, to create worlds. I write to let the world know I can do something, that I am something. I write to feel.
I write because it's who I am. I write because it's in my blood, it's my passion.
I write because I want to.
I think those are all pretty good reasons.
Here is an excerpt from my latest release from Samhain Publishing. Hunter's Moon, book Three of the Moon Series, is about Rose and Jason Barnett—two werewolves who have tried to put the past behind them, only to discover that there's something else waiting to disrupt their lives."
Excerpt:
"I don't want to hear about Simon any more. That's behind us, love. Even if there's some slim chance he is alive," Jason shot her a look but she didn't see it. "I don't think he would come after us again. I mean, we completely ruined him."
"Rose, I know what it is I feel, and I know Simon is out there. I can't rest until I find him."
Rose took a deep breath and finally looked up at him. Her blue eyes were wide, almost fearful, but there was a touch of anger there. Jason thought he could almost smell it.
"You are letting Simon continue to destroy us," She said in a whisper. "I'm scared, love. I'm afraid that, if you go on like this, he will tear us apart."
& nbsp; &n bsp; &nb sp; Instead of reaching out to comfort her, as he might've done in the past, he turned from her and looked toward the window. The sun was up and there wasn't a cloud in the sky.
& nbsp; &n bsp; &nb sp; "You have to listen to me, Jason. I'm sorry I hit you." She touched his face and her hand was warm, as he expected. His jaw no longer throbbed, but he wouldn't have been surprised if her hand had left a large red print. "I was just so angry with you."
& nbsp; &n bsp; &nb sp; "I know. I don't blame you," he drew away from her and walked across the floor. He began to work the coffee maker, putting in a new filter and filling it with coffee. He poured the water in, switched it on. Rose still stood where she was.
& nbsp; &n bsp; &nb sp; "Can't you just forget about him, and move on with your life, our lives?"
& nbsp; &n bsp; &nb sp; "Is that why you came here, to argue with me, to change my mind?" He reached for a mug in the cabinet. When Rose didn't say anything, he turned to look at her.
& nbsp; &n bsp; &nb sp; Her cheeks were red and wet from tears freshly fallen. He made a move forward, but Rose signaled for him to stop and he came no closer.
& nbsp; &n bsp; &nb sp; "I didn't come here to argue with you," She began in a soft voice. She wiped at her eyes with the palm of her hand. "I came because I want you to come home and forget about Simon. Put the past behind you and focus on our future, our family, our pack. We all need you."
& nbsp; &n bsp; &nb sp; Jason could only stare at her. He breathed in deeply, caught a whiff of that strong scent once more. This time he recognized it. It was the scent of female arousal, musty and strong. It was almost maddening, this scent, now that he was aware of it. She was in heat.
& nbsp; &n bsp; &nb sp; He took a deep breath before he could say anything. "Rose," He said softly. Once he recognized her scent for what it was, it was overwhelming. He had to look away, as if that would help. "Rose, I can't do that."
Much Love Always,
Rose Marie Wolf
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Excerpts: From ErRatic
Emma glanced blearily at the clock. Three a.m., and Studley obviously needed to go out. He was whimpering, deep in his throat, and his cold nose kept nudging her arm.
Damn dog! She reached out and gave the silky coat a pat. Zombie-like, she stumbled across the room, to the front door, and unfastened the lock. “Out!” she commanded, punctuating it with a squeaky yawn.
When she opened her eyes again, the man was standing on the grass, just off the porch.
It was a very small porch.
She slammed the door and locked it, then raced through the house. She kept picturing Him running, trying to beat her to the back door.
It’s locked. It’s got to be locked.
It was, but she didn’t feel any better. No one had any business standing there, on her property, at three in the morning. He was up to no good.
She ran for the kitchen and picked up a knife in one hand and the phone in the other. The knife shook in her frozen fingers. Not a good thing. He’ll use it on me.
He damn well better not try. Her shadowy reflection in the window glass was that of a madwoman, brandishing a blade. Her staccato movements glinted across the toaster face, and she jumped, slashing the air.
Hysteria burbled up, like an unwanted belch, before sense clunked in with a nearly audible jolt. Window. Nightlight. He’ll see me. Frantic, she dropped onto the floor, and punched in a fumbling “911”.
If he saw me, I hope he saw the knife, too.
She shouted into the phone, “There was—!”, realized she was shouting, and quickly hissed, “There was a man!”
Why the hell hadn’t Studley barked?! The damned dog had practically dumped her in the killer’s lap!
The Police Operator was offering instructions now, and Emma listened to them blankly. She’d just recalled something very pertinent to her case.
“N-Never mind,” she said, replacing the receiver with shaking hands.
A dream. It had to be a dream.
But it wasn’t and she knew it. It was what she’d tell them, though, when they asked.
She sat there, huddled, too scared to challenge the near-dark. Her eyes were already scrunched closed, but now she drew up her knees and buried her face in her arms.
Shielded. Safer.
Not really.
She couldn’t afford to move now, even if it meant lighting the house. She was too afraid of what she might see.
She nestled her head deeper, to block her ears.
Too afraid of what she might hear.
She hummed a little whimper, deep in her throat the way Studley had. Just enough noise to challenge any other whimpers in the room.
When they came with the squad car to check out her call, she’d have to get up—but not till then. Then, it’d be okay—maybe even safe.
Why hadn’t Studley barked? That one was easy—now that she’d remembered.
About Studley.
He’d been dead—for almost a week.
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| New Release: OF DRAGONS |
| 03.29.08 (9:53 am) [edit] |
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AUTHOR: Melody Knight GENRE: Mainstream Romance Sci-Fi/Fantasy PUBLISHER: Red Rose Publishing ISBN: 978-1-60435-077-7 RATING: Explicit sexual content BLURB: Ryon Colley can't understand what's happening to his life. This morning, he was a policeman investigating a potential hazard: a sparking, flashing, rainbow-spitting light show in the sky overhead. The source of the odd light appeared to be an unruly-haired blonde hellion, who couldn't figure out what normal was. Her radiant display scared him, but his physical reaction to it scares him more. By lunchtime he's gone from having coarse brown hair, to sporting a head full of blond locks—and from facing felons, to fending off thousands of voracious dragonflies. & nbsp; &n bsp; Glynt has been sent to Earth to guard the dimensional gateways, but her arrival spawns nothing but trouble. Quite accidentally, she's summoned swarms of dragonflies, and lured in captors determined to return her—clearly a mischief maker—to her own world. Only Ryon—her gilded hero and the object of her newfound dreams—can rescue her from certain death. BUY LINK AUTHOR WEBSITES: N. D. Hansen-Hill | Melody Knight EXCERPT: She was nearly dressed when she heard them. The vibration rattled the shiny Christmas ornaments on her dressing table, making the glass ping harshly against the table top. No! Her fingers clasped the adamantine dragonfly encircling her neck, as terror quickened her heartbeat. Chills raced down her limbs in spiky little arrays. That sound—that horrifying, buzzing thunder—was one she recognized, deep inside. The fear of them—and their appetites—had been bred into her through a hundred generations. Glynt ran. Panicked, she fled the bedroom with its flimsy-looking glass and raced for the balcony doors. They were thick fire doors—surely, they could resist the impact? Ten thousand dragonfly wings… The daylight went. The thickness of the horde—the sheer mass—was blotting out the sun. Desperate, near-petrified, she yanked the curtains closed. The ramming slam of ten thousand exoskeletonned bodies splintered the glass, but it didn’t stop the beating—that horrific, mechanical swish of their wings. They were driving themselves at the doors, at the glass, frenzied. Day sounds were lost in the ceaseless roar of overlying wing beats. In the bedroom, the glass imploded. Shatters of refracted light caught her eye, as they showered the door jamb. As they blasted through, onto the carpet. I didn’t close the door. Her eyes widened in horror, and she raced for the exit. She was nearly to the front door when it began vibrating. They were in the hall, in hunting mode, and desperate to get to her. Hide. Where?! Frantic, she ran back to the curtained windows, in hopes of fooling Them. She was out of her element, and hidey holes were nowhere to be found. She cowered down, wrapped herself in curtain fabric, and scrunched into her smallest form. Already, she knew it wouldn’t help—couldn’t help. They were lured. Starving. Driven. Those multifaceted eyes would find her. Ever hungry, they’d hunt her…on the wing.
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| Interviews and Articles |
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News & Networking Shelley Munro was kind enough to request an interview with me last week on her blog. I've dropped out of promo a bit this week to write, but have answered the call for a few interviews and blogs. Check out Shelley Munro's blog, where I wrote a tongue-in-cheek article about my writing journey, and Tales of the Trade, where I added my weekly half cent. WIP: I finished my ghost story last week, and decided to name it "A Spirited Encounter". This is my first finished book for 2008, and I'm quite happy about it. I also finished a novella and want to get it re-written fairly quickly, so I can submit it to Nocturne's open submissions call (Nocturne "Bites"). Definitely worth looking into if you're a writer, aspiring or established. If you're seeking an agent, pop over to BookEnds this week, and pop in 100 words in the appropriate category. You never know what will transpire.
Other things: My short story, Cut & Polish, came out early from All Romance eBooks! Oh, and I finished the second round of edits for The Hollowing last week and now have an April 17th release day. Joy!!! Teasers (interesting facts that might stir a story some day soon): Plasmons may provide the key to making objects invisible—if not to the naked eye, at least to longer wavelengths. Plasmons are "tiny electronic excitations" found on "the surfaces of some metals". Unless objects are very tiny, they cannot be completely cloaked, and the technology behind this technology is still under development. Complex objects would require more working knowledge, but the idea of eventually being able to become "invisible" is fascinating stuff. To read more, visit: http://www.livescience.com/technology/050228_inv isible_shield.html" title="http://www.livescience.com/technology/050228_inv isible_shield.html" target="_blank"http://www.livescience.com/te...
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Excerpts: From Gilded Folly
& nbsp; &n bsp; It was no longer dark, but Dacey was beginning to wish it were. A subsonic hum vibrated her eardrums and her teeth, the resonance rising into audible range, where it shook her body. & nbsp; &n bsp; Like a microwave. The cooked scenario entered her head, but she wouldn’t let herself think it. It was enough of a prod, though, to get her moving. Her unseen adversaries weren’t entirely stationary. She would like to believe that was more mechanical action, too, like the hum, but the sounds were far too restless"like a multitude of boots grinding and crunching on gravel. & nbsp; &n bsp; Alive. No inanimate pistons or gears. Claws and teeth, restlessly gnawing away at rock... & nbsp; &n bsp; Stop it! Dacey swore right then that no matter what, she wouldn’t give up without a fight. & nbsp; &n bsp; She ran for the steps"for where she hoped they’d be. You fell down them"landed on your knees. & nbsp; &n bsp; Get it right, Girl...last chance... & nbsp; &n bsp; The light was so startling she tripped over her feet and went sprawling. It wasn’t coming from the walls or the ceiling. It was coming from her skin. & nbsp; &n bsp; Her own body was brightening the room, like a white shirt under black light. & nbsp; &n bsp; The sight was so shocking Dacey froze. All kinds of thoughts were running through her head. She was so caught up in confusion, that she almost missed the movement. & nbsp; &n bsp; The walls were losing integrity, as man-size pieces detached and dropped limply to the stone floor. Rustle-thud, rustle-thunk. Now, the pieces shivered and shook, then arose, finding their whole within the fallen tangle of limbs. Skeletally thin beings, with a near-human cast... & nbsp; &n bsp; ...arising out of rock. & nbsp; &n bsp; Dacey backed away, and headed once more for the steps"only to find they’d beat her there. & nbsp; &n bsp; They’ve been in the dark so long... & nbsp; &n bsp; It was almost as though she could read their thoughts. Her light was a lure, to draw them in. They wanted light...and heat. & nbsp; &n bsp; ...but mostly, they wanted food. & nbsp; &n bsp; Dacey opened her mouth and began to scream.
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News & Networking
It's been an absolute incredible month! The contract's official - I can now announce the publisher for BoneSong and Relic: Drollerie Press. Red Rose Publishing also signed Of Dragons and Emerald City this month, and All Romance eBooks contracted a short story called Cut and Polish. Phew! Only BloodWorks is waiting in the works. If I have any time left, I'd like to get Art & Soul, Artifact, and Sqweams rewritten and out to publishers this month, but the month is going quickly... WIP: my haunted house story is sitting at 38,400 words, and I only plan on bringing it up to just over 50K. You'd think I'd be able to just whip that out, wouldn't ya? It's going veeeerrry slowly. Other things: I have interviews this week on both Crystal Adkins' new interview site, and the Fallen Angels Review Blog (scroll down until you find my work). The FAR blog has numerous excerpts from my books, so if you'd like a sample of my writing, please pop over there in thanks to Cindy for doing such a nice job. Crystal is also working hard to develop her two sites (interview and review), so please consider paying her a visit. 
Friends of Note: Yvonne Eve Walus has made the grade! She's one of the Amazon Finalists. A bit about her, and her book, Substitute Wives (in Yvonne's own words): "I'm one of those women who are unable to have one night stands. Sex is a very intimate thing for me. So the idea of selling it to strangers has always puzzled me: what circumstances would make a woman go through with it on a regular basis? That's how "Substitute wives" was born, a literary novel that claims marriage is prostitution dressed up. Joy is a twenty-three year old sex worker who has over a million dollars of inherited money in her bank account. She donates all her earnings to charity, goes to church and is counting the days she has left as a sex worker before she can return home to reconcile with her family. When a married client declares his love for her, Joy tries to let him down gently, and falls for his clichés in the process. Joy's friend and co-worker, Caro, refuses to take her stalker seriously, even though she knows that her past is bound to catch up with her and endanger the safe haven Caro has created for her daughter. Theirs is not the world of drugs or pimps or backstreet quickies. They charge top dollar, they are in control of their lives and of the choices they've made and they realise that the glitter that surrounds them is only skin-deep. Based in Auckland, New Zealand, the book delivers emotional punch by telling the story of everyday ever-important relationships: between a father and a daughter, between a daughter and a mother, between husbands and wives and substitute wives. You can find my entry on Amazon.com via the following link: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B001200CFK" title="http://www.amazon.com/dp/B001200CFK" target="_blank"http://www.amazon.com/dp/B001..." Please consider visiting Yvonne's entry and voting. Every opinion counts! Yay! *** Tempter (I may want to stick this in a book some time): functional Magnetic Resonance Imaging scans indicate that culture has a physiological impact on the brain, that can be seen in brain activity patterns. Culture has long been thought to affect development in terms of eating patterns, environmental influences, and tastes, but it can now be seen to affect perspective and judgment. Alterations to brain activity occur in exposure to other cultures for as little as six months. Read more. Sounds like an excellent reason to travel, and definitely contradicts the "old dogs can't learn new tricks". It may never be too late to change our outlook! Save Your World: learn and donate at the same time. Free rice is donated for every correct word. I LOVE this charity! Now, an excerpt from one of my books - Static (paperback), methinks. Enjoy! Today he'd found a path he'd never taken before—and he'd already promised himself he'd never take it again. Nature had been communing with him big time. He'd been tramping for less than two hours when the skies suddenly opened. Rain and hail—and they were coming down so hard it hurt. Nate was soaked before he could drag his rain gear out of his bag... Good thing Aje isn't here, Nate thought. I'd never hear the end of this… I probably won't, anyway. Aje, despite his protestations, would have half an ear tuned on the weather report. Nate had never expected him or Brandon to come along. It was just a way of covering his ass, without sacrificing his pride. Brandon always insisted he needed to tell someone when he was going hiking on his own, and Aje had been adamant about it since that ledge goof-up. So, he'd tell them, they'd give him a hard time, and that was that. Except he'd always get a call on Sunday—just in case. In Aje's words, "If I have to save your stupid hide, I want to know before I make other plans." Nate's thoughts were interrupted by a loud rumble, and a flash of brilliant white, that lit up half the sky. Lightning! No! It was the thing that terrified him more than anything else. The thing that sometimes invaded his dreams. There was probably some name for it—for this kind of irrational terror, but right now, he didn't know—or care. The lightning was coming—heading his way. A burst of adrenaline shot through him and he started to run, slipping and sliding in the muck and leaves. Panicked, he ran off the trail, heading toward an overhanging knob of rock. Solid. Safe. It can't get me there. It's okay, Leighton. You'll make it… Only, he wouldn't. It was at his back, watching him ominously from the skies, and it was going to get him. There was a tingling in his shoulder blades. It was going to stab him, right in the back. He'd never told anyone. How, when a lightning storm came, he'd hide behind the door, or in a closet. Deep in his house, or burrowed beneath the desk in his office. His mother had said he'd been struck once, when he was little. A baby. He didn't remember it, but some part of him did. He'd been running from the stuff ever since. It was coming. His hair was standing on end and his gooseflesh was doing a shivery dance. The pressure in the air was so thick he couldn't breathe… The next moment, his world exploded, and was gone—in a massive blast of overwhelming white. Cheers, ND | Melody Thanks, www.mikesfreegifs.com and www.wilsoninfo.com, for the animations!
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| New Contracts, Lonnie Cruse Drops By, Excerpt from ErRatic |
| 01.12.08 (11:50 am) [edit] |
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This month has been one of the most thrilling in my writing career. Not only was In Flames released on January 1st, but that same day I received a contract offer for both Relic and BoneSong! Now, in the dozen days since, I've also been offered a contract for one of my Melody Knight titles, Of Dragons, and a contract for a short story for All Romance eBooks, Cut and Polish. The only one with a release date so far is Cut and Polish, which will go live March 14th.
I'll wait for all the contracts to arrive before I post the detail s here. Still... Yay!
Author Friend: A Few Words from Lonnie Cruse, author of Fifty-Seven Heaven "I began writing Fifty-Seven Heaven after hubby bought a '57 Chevy to restore and joined a car club. I wondered what would happen if a club member found a dead body in the trunk of a pristine, trophy winning car. Knowing how car club members feel about their babies, writing the book was great fun. I love my character Kitty because she's who I'd like to be when I grow up. Never mind that she's younger. She gets to do a lot of things I'd like to do, and a few I've already done.
The setting for the first book which just came out in December is Metropolis, IL, the small town where I live. It's a fun place to live and write about. The next book, which is finished but not yet contracted for, is set at a car show in Pigeon Forge, TN. I love that area and enjoyed spending time there again, even if only inside my head, writing the book. I'd had the idea for a long time, and even took pictures to inspire me on a visit. I'm writing the third book now, set in Metropolis again, where a new character is wreaking havoc on my lead characters, driving them to consider murdering her. Muwhahaha!
For more information, please check out my website: http://www.lonniecruse.com/" title="http://www.lonniecruse.com/" target="_blank"http://www.lonniecruse.com/ and you'll find links to my blogs and websites where I hang out. http://www.lonniecruse.blogspot.com/" title="http://www.lonniecruse.blogspot.com/" target="_blank"http://www.lonniecruse.blogsp... and http://www.poesdeadlydaughters.com/" title="http://www.poesdeadlydaughters.com/" target="_blank"http://www.poesdeadlydaughter...)" Thanks for this, Lonnie! Lonnie's one of my fellow Five Star authors. *** Tempter (I may want to stick this in a book some time): CT scans are being used to study ancient tumours in dinosaur bones. Palaeontologists and med students are working together to gain a better understanding of tumour origins and growth patterns. Amazing! Save Your World Stuff: If you're looking to give world-saving a "personal touch", why not your bone marrow to someone who needs it? Check to see whether you're compatible with a simple blood test. More info is available at The American Bone Marrow Donor Registry. Now, an excerpt from one of mine - ErRatic, methinks. Enjoy! Emma glanced blearily at the clock. Three a.m., and Studley obviously needed to go out. He was whimpering, deep in his throat, and his cold nose kept nudging her arm. Damn dog! She reached out and gave the silky coat a pat. Zombie-like, she stumbled across the room, to the front door, and unfastened the lock. “Out!” she commanded, punctuating it with a squeaky yawn. When she opened her eyes again, the man was standing on the grass, just off the porch. It was a very small porch. She slammed the door and locked it, then raced through the house. She kept picturing Him running, trying to beat her to the back door. It’s locked. It’s got to be locked. It was, but she didn’t feel any better. No one had any business standing there, on her property, at three in the morning. He was up to no good. She ran for the kitchen and picked up a knife in one hand and the phone in the other. The knife shook in her frozen fingers. Not a good thing. He’ll use it on me. He damn well better not try. Her shadowy reflection in the window glass was that of a madwoman, brandishing a blade. Her staccato movements glinted across the toaster face, and she jumped, slashing the air. Hysteria burbled up, like an unwanted belch, before sense clunked in with a nearly audible jolt. Window. Nightlight. He’ll see me. Frantic, she dropped onto the floor, and punched in a fumbling “911”. If he saw me, I hope he saw the knife, too. She shouted into the phone, “There was—!”, realized she was shouting, and quickly hissed, “There was a man!” Why the hell hadn’t Studley barked?! The damned dog had practically dumped her in the killer’s lap! The Police Operator was offering instructions now, and Emma listened to them blankly. She’d just recalled something very pertinent to her case. “N-Never mind,” she said, replacing the receiver with shaking hands. A dream. It had to be a dream. But it wasn’t and she knew it. It was what she’d tell them, though, when they asked. She sat there, huddled, too scared to challenge the near-dark. Her eyes were already scrunched closed, but now she drew up her knees and buried her face in her arms. Shielded. Safer. Not really. She couldn’t afford to move now, even if it meant lighting the house. She was too afraid of what she might see. She nestled her head deeper, to block her ears. Too afraid of what she might hear. She hummed a little whimper, deep in her throat the way Studley had. Just enough noise to challenge any other whimpers in the room. When they came with the squad car to check out her call, she’d have to get up—but not till then. Then, it’d be okay—maybe even safe. Why hadn’t Studley barked? That one was easy—now that she’d remembered. About Studley. He’d been dead—for almost a week. From ErRatic Cheers, ND|Melody 
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| From crocs to book contracts to book excerpts - go figure |
| 12.04.07 (9:45 am) [edit] |
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I was just reading about terrestrial crocodiles which used to live in the Bahamas, until the advent of humans. This isn't that unusual. On some of the Pacific islands, remains from species of birds and reptiles have been found in ancient ovens. Apparently, on many islands, besides the plants and animals the people brought with them, the newcomers took advantage of game already abundant on the island. In the West Indies, human bones were found in a sinkhole among bones of the crocodiles, lizards, snakes, birds, and bats. Other things: The Hollowing has a cover, and will join Gray Beginnings in Cerridwen Press's 2008 lineup. In Flames, the sequel to In Trysts, is now looking at a January 1st release date, so we're in countdown mode. I received a big box of ARCs for ErRatic (Feb release), which is absolutely thrilling for me! Sending them out to the local newspapers this week. Oh, and Red Rose Publishing has signed GlassWorks! I'll leave you with an excerpt, this one from Gilded Folly, from Cerridwen Press. They were all overlain with the prints of a predator. Judging from the depth and clarity, Glys guessed the marks were nearly as recent as her own. And she’d studied too many casts of ancient beasts to err on the identity of this one.
These were the deep prints of a Snotzil. The pattern was easy to detect: not only were Snotzil seven-toed, but their tracks were interrupted frequently by the impression of a flared rostrum, sniffing eagerly at the ground. Like the Derytzvoz, the Snotzil relied largely on its smell-brain to track its prey.
Gooseflesh rose again on Glys’ arms, defying the heat. Apparently, at least one Snotzil was alive and well, somewhere on this plateau. She tilted her head to listen, but all she could hear was a repetitious crackle. She sat there, as cast in stone as the statues at her side. There was a theory that the Snotzil’s nasty incisors clacked and rattled as it hunted. The sound chased the prey, cornering it and rendering it more tasty. The Snotzil enjoyed the proteins stimulated by adrenaline surges. Terrified prey made the tastiest meals. Glys hastily crept backwards, out of the cave, reluctant to stop until her feet hung over the edge. She huddled there, one leg over the drop, and tried to control her breathing enough to listen. I need time to think this through. If a Snotzil was the guardian for the Gilded Folly, she had big trouble. Worse than having an assassin at your back? Clatter…crack&hell ip;clatter. Most definitely...yes. Unconsciously, Glys wiped dried blood from her face. Her nose had stopped leaking, but the traces were there. Bloodlust…slaughte r. Yaz help her! The Snotzil was tracking something. It was too much to hope it had nothing to do with her. From Gilded Folly Cheers, ND | Melody
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| Frustrating morning, playing at MySpace! |
| 09.07.07 (9:54 am) [edit] |
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I should have been writing, but I'm attempting to learn to manipulate my MySpace profile (http://www.myspace.com/ndmanu...). It's fun and I'm meeting lots of great people, but my computer's still on dial up, and it's all soooo sloooow.
Working on a YA novel and an erotic novella. How diverse is that? Not sure I can pull off the second one, but it's for the Brava competition, so I'd at least like to give it a try.
Other things: new covers (ErRatic), new contracts (Gray Beginnings), new edits (The Hollowing)
Considering all that, maybe it's back to work time!
Cheers,
ND/Melody
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| Had a birthday, plus finished some edits |
| 06.13.07 (7:40 pm) [edit] |
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It's been a fantastic week! I had a birthday, and everyone's been celebrating with me for the past 4 days! I've been taken to dinner, and out for coffees, plus lovely presents, and greetings from around the world. I'm so happy! I finished the first lot of edits from Five Star for ErRatic. I'm expecting some for The Hollowing (published by Cerridwen Press) and In Flames (published by Linden Bay Romance - the sequel to In Trysts) any day. I still have 3 essays to finish for Uni. One's due tomorrow, so I shouldn't be blogging, but... I've managed to get all my books out to publishers, and just have #29 and #30 to finish to wrap everything up (and start again, of course). Still, I promised myself I'd finish and farm out to publishers everything on my desktop in 2007...and I'm DOING it! I'll leave you with a brief excerpt from Gilded Folly. Cerridwen Press is releasing it in paperback soon, so watch for it on Amazon. In the meanwhile, it's still in e. Cheers, ND/Melody “Find her. Rom’ll be heading her way—” Wick ordered, then froze, listening to something in the distance. It was a series of shrill notes, just barely within the range of human hearing. Gooseflesh danced across his skin and he backed away, shamed by what was about to happen. Phil reached for him, but Wick only shook his head in dismay. “Yaz!” he whispered, his face ashen. The pitch changed, and the peak of it went into rapid oscillations, from subsonic hum to microwave frequencies that vibrated through his brain. Wick slammed his hands over his ears, but it didn’t help. His blood was boiling and his brain was on fire... He howled, and his male tones suddenly became a shrill scream of agony. His eyes rolled up in his head, his legs were water, and his insides were about to explode... He never felt Phil catch him, or Fitz clamp hands over his ears. Never knew that Dacey had opened the trunk and Phil had dropped him in to shield him. Never realised that Phil had hopped into the driver’s seat and torn out of there like hell. The next time he awoke, Fitz’ worried eyes were peering down at him. “Wick?” he whispered. “Can you hear me?” Wick gave a barely perceptible nod. It was the best he could do. He tried lifting his hand but he was too weak. Fitz noticed. “I’m not surprised,” he said conversationally, but he couldn’t quite hide the tremor in his voice. He continued sponging off Wick’s face, then started in on his chest. “I’ve heard about people sweating blood for a cause, but this is the first time I’ve seen it.”
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| ErRatic sold + In Trysts released + |
| 01.30.07 (2:14 pm) [edit] |
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Busy days on the writing front at the moment. ErRatic has sold to Five Star, and Linden Bay Romance has requested the sequel to my 1 December release, In Trysts. That one, to be called In Flames, will be released in July, if I can finish it next month. ErRatic is a Feb 2008 release (tentatively).
Other things: I am painting again, and will have one finished today! Yay! I didn't know whether I was still able to paint - I just have been 'blocked' for so long! Also, artistically speaking, I've been doing book trailers. Check out
http://flash-movies.toufee.co... and http://flash-movies.toufee.co... One I did for me, and one for my friend's book, Be My Valentine. It's really fun, but my computer can't quite handle the sound aspect. Still, check them out and let me know what you think.
If you want to read an excerpt from ErRatic, go to my website (www.NDHansen-Hill.com), or from In Trysts (http://MelodyKnight.com). Sorry, but I'm not posting excerpts here right now - no time. Just pop over to my website if you want to read one. They're quite large. The one on Melody Knight is R17, so be warned.
That's all for the moment. Wish me luck in getting everything finished before postgrad archaeology classes begin again. Phew!
Cheers,
ND/Melody
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| Finished #25, on blogging, driven people, STATIC (ch 3)! |
| 07.16.06 (7:58 pm) [edit] |
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I've been doing too much, which has rather robbed me of time to do much blogging. It's another thing I promised myself I'd do - like writing emails to all the family and friends when you don't really have time - so I don't lose track of everyone. I read an article yesterday about how driven people are today - how they need to be superpeople, and set themselves almost impossible goals. How they thrive on people's reactions (how did you manage it? or I don't know how you do it!). It's a matter of pride to list the numbers of jobs, organisations, committees you belong to. How strange we are! Definitely a need to compete with each other. It's not enough to be successful - your success has to put others to shame (LOL!)! We've probably always done it, too. H. erectus no doubt competed to see who could kill the biggest mammoth, or collect the most tubers. I've been doing it to me, but I've mostly been competing with me, myself, I, yours truly, and moi. That's because I'm working on 5 books right now - going for a competition finish (I want to enter them all in at the end of July - and I need to have enough on each of them to feel confident I can finish them up by mid August). I'm having fun with it, but it's also a stretch for me. I'm doing 4 SF/fantasy/romantic suspense, and one SF/horror. Enjoying it heaps because I can do the jumpy thing of 1000 words here, 1000 words there, as long as I come close to my 5000 words a day. Only averaging 3000, but that's still not too bad. As always, I'll leave you with an excerpt...and try to get back to you sooner next time! Cheers, and regards, ND N. D. Hansen-Hill EXCERPTS http://ndhansen-hill.com" title="http://ndhansen-hill.com" target="_blank"http://ndhansen-hill.com EBOOKS http://www.fictionwise.com/ebooks/NDHansen-Hille books.htm" title="http://www.fictionwise.com/ebooks/NDHansen-Hille books.htm" target="_blank"http://www.fictionwise.com/eb... PAPERBACKS www.lulu.com/NDHansen-Hill GILDED FOLLY http://www.cerridwenpress.com/productpage.asp?ISBN=1-4199-0409-4" title="http://www.cerridwenpress.com/productpage.asp?ISBN=1-4199-0409-4" target="_blank"http://www.cerridwenpress.com... (entry in) THE COMPLETE WRITER'S JOURNAL http://www.redenginepress.com/" title="http://www.redenginepress.com/" target="_blank"http://www.redenginepress.com...
Static Chapter Three "You look good." She looked lousy, but Jim knew better than to tell her so. She was white and her eyes were watery from coughing. The dark circles underneath didn’t help much, either. Still, it beat the blue colour she’d been when he’d pulled her out of the water. Or that dead white he’d seen outside the emergency room. "Feeling great," she croaked. Jim pushed the chair forward with his foot, then plopped into it. "Donna’s gonna come see you tomorrow. She would’ve come tonight, but Kirsten’s got the sniffles." Chaz blew her nose loudly. "I can sympathise." Jim grinned. "‘Better out than in’. Want a bucket? Maybe a big towel to hang under your chin?" "You’re disgusting. Thank God Donna doesn’t know what you’re really like." "Oh, she knows." He booted the bed. "Says she pities you, and that I’m only allowed to ‘inflict my company on you for fifteen minutes at a time’." "She does know you," Chaz said tiredly. Jim noticed. "My fifteen minutes’re up. I’ll report to Hollebeck that you’re feisty, but unfit." She frowned. "Are you serious?" "About the reporting? No." He grinned. "But maybe if I file one I’ll get paid for that gagworthy meal I just ate." "Get out, Casavas." She smiled. "Tell Donna I can’t wait to see her—but to leave you at home." She added with a grin, "It always amazes me how a woman with so much taste found someone as tasteless as you." "Hey, I’m not the only one who knows how to pick ’em. Hollebeck’s checking out your two-legged defibrillator." She sat up abruptly, which started her coughing. She finally managed to choke out, "What?" Jim pushed her back against the pillows. He’d been wondering how to bring it up. She needed to hear what had happened—and it was better coming from him. He sat down again. "Do you remember much?" Her eyes darkened. "Delgado’s face. Air bubbles streaming past my head." Tears welled up in her eyes, and gooseflesh danced on her skin. Casavas saw, and put a hand on her arm. "You were dead, Chaz. I could’ve sworn…" He sounded choked, and he gave her arm a squeeze. "I couldn’t find you at first—then, when I did—" She laid a hand over his, in an effort to reassure him. "I don’t remember any of it." "We—they&mdash ;did CPR for twenty minutes, Chaz, before the helicopter got there. I rode back with you, so they could treat my hand." She knew it wasn’t the only reason. He was her partner, and he’d gone with her as a mark of respect. The way I would have if he’d been the one to die… Dead. Her limbs went icy, and her heart started pounding. "Jim—" He looked at her—at the pasty lips and the white face. "Fuck it!" he said, pushing the bell for the nurse. "Sorry, Chaz," he muttered, fussing around. He tossed another blanket over her, then took off his jacket and plunked it onto her feet. "Sorry I said anything…" She didn’t remember him leaving, but he must have hung around outside, because she was almost asleep when he came back in. "I’m sorry—" he began again. "Tell me about—my ‘two-legged defibrillator’." "Word is, he shot off lightning bolts all over the ER." She thought he was kidding. "Lightning bolts?" "Arcs or bolts, or whatever they’re called. He dove on top of you—" he chuckled at her expression, "—then proceeded to fry both your brains out. A real ‘shocker’, I heard. Whatever he did, it woke you up." She lay there for a moment, staring at the wall but not really seeing it. "He was in a red robe." "Yep. Bright red and dressed for action. Only action he got, though, was taking up where you’d left off. They managed to resuscitate him, but everything else they’ve done has backfired." "Is Hollebeck going to drop it?" Jim shrugged. "Maybe. Depends on what he finds out." "I owe him." "Hollebeck?" Jim grinned. "Very funny." "You don’t owe him any ‘action’, if that’s what you mean." Jim snickered. "Tell Donna I pity her. Get out, Casavas." "Gone." As he reached the door, he turned back. "By the way, I’m with you, Chaz—on the Leighton issue." She looked at him blankly. "The guy in the red robe." He hesitated, not wanting to upset her again. "Without his little energy blast, all that hot air I gave you would’ve been wasted. I owe him, too." She smiled. "Jim—thanks. For everything." "My pleasure," he told her lasciviously, wiggling his eyebrows. Then, grinning widely, he waved and went out the door. * Brandon took a generous swig, cleared his throat, then told Aje, "I had a talk with Angela." Aje looked at him pityingly. "A lo-o-ng talk, I’ll bet." "Long enough." How do I say this? It was one thing deciding to spill Nate’s guts, and another doing it. Maybe I should have told Aje over the phone. He would never have believed me. "He’s been hit before," Brandon blurted. Aje looked at him blankly. Brandon frowned. "By lightning." "Talk about your world’s records," Aje joked. "Anyway, I was talking with his mom—" Jeez, this is hard, Brandon thought. "You two’ve been getting pretty chummy since you played ‘rat droppings’ with Rita," Adrian commented. "People are beginning to talk." Brandon looked at him dourly. "No people worth listening to." "Go on. You were about to tell me how you’ve been nosing around in Nate’s business." "There’re some things you should know." "The biggest one being why one of his ‘friends’ is prying. Second one is why you’re narcing on him." "I’m not telling anybody," Brand replied with some asperity. "First, I’m not worth listening to. Then, I’m a nobody. You have no people skills." "Shut up, Aje, and listen. Nate has real problems." Aje sobered. "Not that I’ve noticed." "Have you ever noticed he has no computer? Pretty weird for a scientist." "Why should he? The labs must be full of ’em." "No TV, no radio—that work, anyway. He’s the only person I know without a microwave." Aje was silent, but his expression was grim, his eyes narrowed. "It’s not because he’s poor," Brandon went on. "He has plenty of money floating around." "Checked into that, too, did we?" Aje retorted sarcastically. "What about his lights? And the way they’re always going out?" "You said yourself it was a bad neighbourhood." "But maybe not so bad for him…" "How convoluted!" Aje’s voice was dripping sarcasm. "What the hell is that supposed to mean?" "That Nate knows he’s got a problem." "If you mean he’s scared of electricity or something, it may be a little weird, but it’s not sick." "I’m not talking phobias, Aje. Nate’s problems are bigger than that." "So, he’s been struck by lightning twice. Wrong place, wrong time. Big deal." Adrian’s face was flushed, his eyes angry. "Did you ever think your policeman’s brain is making you read this all wrong? Maybe Nate’s house’s in one of those weird places where gravity or the magnetic field throws everything off—" Brand looked at him shrewdly. "All I mentioned were the lights." Aje frowned. "Is this the way you cops work? Picking apart everything anyone says?" He added, "No wonder they used to call detective-types ‘dicks’." Leave it to Aje. Brandon’s smile flickered. "His mother said—" "Now there’s a reliable source!" Aje commented brightly. "So glad you questioned her." He lowered his voice. "Just to remind you—this is also the woman who named him Hubert." "It’s serious, Aje!" Brand told him impatiently. "It’s not just the second time Nate’s been struck by lightning." It was Aje’s turn to look impatient. "You said—" "It’s the ninth." * "So, give me your best explanation, Doctor." Damn the man. Adam Saracen had suspected nobody would let the incident rest. Wasn’t it enough for Hollebeck to know his agent was alive? Why did he have to pursue this into the ground? Because he’s wondering whether there’s something about Leighton he or his department can use. Or need to protect themselves against. For the tenth time, Saracen wondered how fate could have tossed things this way. Why did Leighton have to "help" the one person on hospital grounds who could draw the most attention to something he desperately wanted to hide? Adam was suddenly glad he wasn’t working upstairs. He’d have had a difficult time controlling his curiosity where Leighton was concerned, or his resentment toward Ransford. He couldn’t believe the woman’s ingratitude. How could she dismiss what Leighton had done so lightly? If it were me, I wouldn’t tell anybody. Just like he didn’t intend to tell Hollebeck now. Adam was incredibly curious about the source of Leighton’s energy, and he would have loved to discover whether it was internally generated, or more of a channelling exercise. But, there was no way he was going to follow up on it until Leighton was no longer the centre of attention. The man had been in critical condition ever since he’d collapsed in the emergency room. He’d been so depleted that he’d gone into arrest, and they’d had to resuscitate him twice before they could move him. Once he was upstairs, they couldn’t monitor him properly, because he kept throwing off the machines. Something about his chemistry was wrong, and his electrolyte balance was way off. When they’d tried to bring it into normal levels, he’d almost expired once more. He’d been in and out of coma for the past ten hours. His family was really worried, but silent. There’d been an unending stream of visitors to the ICU, and not one had mentioned anything weird. Adam was just glad there’d been no repetition of the rat-mouse incident. Everyone on staff knew about it, and he wondered when Hollebeck was going to hear. "Simple case of electrocution," Adam said. "That’s what’s going on the record." Hollebeck looked at him shrewdly. "What record? Apparently, until he was blown off a mountain, Hubert Leighton had never been to a doctor." "No medical history?" Adam couldn’t quite conceal his surprise. "No immunisations or ‘well-child’ checks?" Hollebeck shook his head. "Not that we can find. Believe me, we’ve looked." "What does his family say?" "Just that he had all the ‘normal’ things done." Adam considered it. Leighton’s records could be really important right now in determining treatment. If they were going to stabilise him, it would help if they didn’t have to rediscover the quirks in his physiology. Hollebeck suspected the doctor was being deliberately evasive. What he couldn’t understand was why—unless Saracen thought what had happened in the ER would reflect badly on him. The family was another matter: "silence unto death" may well have been their motto. That’s what it was going to be, too, if Leighton didn’t get the appropriate treatment soon. Does it matter? Leighton had, in some bizarre way, saved Chaz Ransford’s life. Saracen might not be reporting it that way, but the two nurses and the security man were. And I saw Chaz at the lake. In Hollebeck’s mind, she’d been dead without question, and he and the rest of the team had already begun to mourn her. Now, she was back, and there was no "medical" solution for it. Only a man with an overdose of electricity at his fingertips—and who’d had no business downstairs, in the Emergency Room. Leighton lived on the fringe. He had a modern occupation, but few of the modern conveniences. Jim Casavas had been appalled at the lack of TV or stereo, toaster or microwave in his home. No modern conveniences, and half the lights out of commission. Jim had even suggested that Leighton must actually live somewhere else, and that this was some extension to his "lab". The dung collection had really thrown him. Jim had called Hollebeck in personally to take a look. It seemed they were dealing with some weirdo with a particularly odd fetish. Hollebeck had almost left it at that. Put it down to a series of bizarre circumstances that weren’t worth investigating. But Chaz had insisted that they do something to help the man out. In her mind, Leighton had given his life for hers—or nearly. "I owe him," she’d said. Which meant Hollebeck owed him, too—at least to the extent of rooting out his medical records. Something which would give his doctors a place to start. Adam Saracen was still thinking things over. Hollebeck waited patiently, but no suggestions were forthcoming. His lips quirked in what could have been a smile. "I was thinking about giving his mother our standard treatment for acquiring more information. You know—beating the soles of her feet with sticks, bamboo under the fingernails—not to mention ‘drug therapy’…&qu ot; Adam Saracen scowled at him. Grudging co-operation. Hollebeck suppressed his amusement. "Anything to add, Doctor?" "Some of Leighton’s friends were here for hours. I could ask one of them. See if he knows the name of Leighton’s doctor." Vague, non-committal. It was about what he’d expected. "Any names you’d like to give me? So we could do the asking?" "With sticks and bamboo?" Adam’s lips creased in a smile. "No thanks. Might ruin my reputation." Duncan Hollebeck grinned. "You’ll let me know what you come up with?" Adam told him honestly, "No." He leaned back in his chair. "It’s on a ‘need to know’ basis only, Hollebeck. I’ll tell the people who need to know." * Brandon felt like a fool playing all these surreptitious games. He wondered if avoiding the people who were investigating Nate was the same as obstructing justice. If so, he’d overstepped the bounds. Still, the doctor, Adam Saracen, had seemed to agree with him. He’d been damned surreptitious, too. "If you know anything about his medical records, or the name of his doctor…" he’d begun. And Brandon had found himself volunteering. "I’ll do my best to find out," he’d said. Now, sitting here talking to Nate’s mum (this is Angela Leighton—not some kind of Mata Hari), he felt as though he’d entered the Twilight Zone. "It was easy," she admitted, shrugging. "I just took Hubert into the receptionist’s office, where they kept the computer. One of my cousins lifted the hard copy." No problem. Brandon’s eyes had widened slightly. The ease with which she discussed it told him it wasn’t the only time the family had covered for little "Hubert". No wonder Nate had moved away. "He shouldn’t have left home," she said now, upset. "But he was so set on being a scientist. I tried to tell him it wouldn’t work—that it would only get him into trouble." "He was doing fine until the ‘accident’,&q uot; Brand reminded her. "It must’ve been hard on him." She nodded. "Not so hard now as it used to be, when he was a kid. As long as he stays on his meds he can get by." She looked worriedly at the clock. "He needs them, Brandon. They’ll never stabilise him without them." "What ‘meds’?" For the first time she wondered if she was making the wisest decision in telling him all this. She lowered her head, avoiding his eyes. "He thinks his liver doesn’t work right—that he needs medication." "Angela, he must’ve figured out his electrical problems by now," Brand told her sarcastically. "He’s a smart guy." "Which is probably why he lives in that hovel," she admitted. "But he thinks it’s limited to buzzy TVs and messed-up computers." Brandon looked at her doubtfully. How could a guy get struck by lightning that many times—especially someone as smart as Nate—and not figure it out? Angela told him earnestly, "He doesn’t know how bad it can get. And we never told him about all the lightning strikes." She looked slightly embarrassed. "He’d never remember much afterwards, so I let him think it was some kind of transient seizure, brought on by his liver trouble." "Shit!" Brandon couldn’t totally conceal his shock. Here, I thought I knew these people so well… "Exactly." Misinterpreting his reaction completely, she flashed him a smile. "I told him he should have stuck to a mechanical field—that some people just can’t use computers. We never had TV or radio, so he really didn’t know what he was missing. He got that scientist idea from reading." "He still doesn’t have TV—" "Of course not," she said, as though he were being deliberately obtuse. "He interferes with them. Not even the meds can totally stop that." Her eyes darkened. "He learned pretty early that he couldn’t go visiting, like other kids." She added, a little bitterly, "Most of them preferred their TVs to his presence. I tried to make him believe that was normal, too, but I don’t think it helped." She sighed. "We tried everything—did all the reading we could on bioelectric fields and feedback. Gave him all kinds of ‘medicine’, just to see if something would work." Brandon paled. Angela didn’t notice. "Finally, my cousin came up with a mixture that seemed to help. After that, Hubert could sometimes go to school. It didn’t help with the lightning, though. After the fifth time he got hit, I used to keep him home whenever there was a storm warning." She smirked. "Or whenever someone got suspicious." "Did he get to play football, or anything like that?" She shook her head. "I wouldn’t let him. You can see why, can’t you, Brand? Why I didn’t want him to have too much contact with other people? To be labelled a ‘freak’? School was pretty safe because they didn’t know he was ‘special’. If he’d start to feel sick, they’d call me, and I’d adjust his medication. His electrolyte balance is still really sensitive, which makes it stupid for him to live alone." Her jaw shook, and Brandon knew she was close to tears. "He thinks he’s ‘normal’&mdas h;but he could die so easily." Wiping her eyes with the back of her hand, she added, "I hated it when Hubert started taking those long hikes into the mountains. Teenagers do that kind of thing, but I didn’t know he was still into it. There’s not only the lightning, but …" Brandon was no longer listening. He was thinking how it must have been for Nate, growing up with this woman—and her family. Everything hidden, and all those "adjustments" to whatever medication they’d come up with. It also did a lot to explain Nate’s solitude. He’d probably learned a long time ago not to "inflict" his company on other people. Suspected in some way he’d be hazardous to either their health, or their prized possessions. But, it didn’t stop the people from coming to Nate. Maybe it was because he’d been alone for so long, that he’d been forced to develop more personality to compensate. He was well-read, interesting, and could talk about anything. What got people the most, though, was Nate’s smile. Now that he knew Nate’s background, that smile made Brandon feel as though he’d been gut-punched. Nate always found something to smile about, or joke about—something to enthuse over in the ordinary. Maybe because he’d never had any "ordinary"&mdas h;and he was just so glad to be alive, and away from everyone "protecting" him. Angela was still talking. "…If I can get him his meds, they might put yesterday’s incident down to some stray electrical charge." She looked at Brandon a little desperately. "They’re watching me, Brandon. Closely. If Hubert doesn’t get this stuff, he’ll die." "What’s in it?" "Sodium and some metallic salts to balance his electrolytes. Otherwise, the electricity will start to burn him up, from the inside out." "Like a short circuit." She fidgeted nervously. "More like a short starting a fire." Something else occurred to Brandon. If Angela was telling the truth, there was a good chance Nate didn’t know what was in his "meds". After so many years, he might assume they were something he needed for maintenance, the way some people needed insulin or thyroid pills. "Does Nate know what the meds do?" "He thinks they stop the seizures," she said dismally. Brandon must have looked as appalled as he felt, because she reacted defensively. "What would you do, if he were your son? Tell him the truth? What do you think that would do to him?" "Don’t you think—after last night—he may’ve figured it out?" He tried to imagine how Nate was going to feel about all this, when he woke up. If he wakes up. "If he doesn’t get his meds, he’ll die," she insisted. Nate grinning, and offering them a snack. Fixing it in an old gas oven, because he couldn’t use a microwave. Joking about Aje’s Playstation games, when he’d probably never even seen one. No TV. No radio. Nothing but long nights with his books and his fungus—and the lights popping off all around him. Yet the idiot still smiled. Thought he was lucky, to have gotten as far as he had. Shit. "I’ll do it," Brandon said. * Aje had been angry for hours. It didn’t help that he was tired. Tired always made him irritable. God knows he hadn’t slept much since Nate’s escapade in the mountains. He’d been too worried about the damn fool. Not the only fool… He thought about all the hours he and Brandon had spent with Nate. How the man had lied to them—taken them in. Was there anything about him that was real? Yeah, he decided bitterly. His admiration for dung. No one could fake that much fanaticism for faeces. Or that degree of weirdness. Brandon’s words: No TV. No stereo. No microwave. I wanted to believe he was eccentric. That he’d chosen to live a little strangely—not that it was built into his character. Or his lack of it. Despite his anger, Aje felt a grudging admiration for the way Nate had pulled it off. His "friend", Hubert Leighton, was apparently a master of deceit. And so ballsy he’d even take on a policeman. He wondered if it had given Nate as much gratification to mislead Brand, as it did Aje to insult him. The difference being—I don’t mean it. Obviously, Nate does. The thing that ate at him most was Brandon’s warning, that Nate might be lethal, given the right—or wrong—circumstances . Circumstances being lightning storms, or any time he was set on "surge". Brandon hadn’t been able to tell him exactly when those times were—but, he’d had his information straight from Nate’s mom. Unless she’s a pathological liar, too. Maybe it’s a family thing… Nate had never said a thing to warn them. Never indicated that it might be a good time to bail, because his ions were getting a little overeager. Never cared whether he was being hazardous to his so-called friends’ health. Now some government people were after him, and Aje had been warned by Brand to "watch his step". It just gets better and better. As Nate’s friend, he might inadvertently be involved. Aje felt the wariness most people do when confronted by a government agency: he was caught somewhere between ridicule and respect. All he knew for certain was that he didn’t want them focusing on one Adrian Morton. He couldn’t help but recall all the times he’d fibbed on his tax forms, or run a red light. Knowing surveillance was a possibility, made it suddenly a probability, and expanded the time frame. How long had he known Nate? Years. What the hell had Leighton done to invite a government agency into all their lives? Murder and mayhem… Whatever it was, Aje didn’t want anything to do with it. Aje picked up the book he’d bought for Nate—before his early-afternoon discussion with Brand. That was one thing about Nate: he always appreciated a good book. Next to his fungus, his mini-library was his most prized possession. More lies. Aje angrily snapped the volume closed, then threw it furiously at the wall. The spine broke, and pages went sliding across the floor. Aje’s jaw tightened at the destruction. If he’d felt like a fool before, he really felt like one now. I could’ve returned it, he thought. Too late. Everyone knew that once things were broken, there was really no way to put them back the way they were before. Aje stomped out, and closed the door with a decisive click. * "I need your help." "Don’t you have a police force you can call on?" Aje replied. He wasn’t much happier with Brandon right now than he was with Nate. There are times when ignorance is bliss. All that Brand’s warning about the Feds had done was make Aje see people tailing him at every intersection. "This is serious." "First my day, now my week. Get lost, Weisner—" Brand was silent. Aje stared down at his phone, wishing he could toss it and all the day’s revelations out the window. My cellphone. Another thing that doesn’t work when Leighton’s around… "What?" It sounded surly, even to him. "Meet me—" "Hate to have to remind you, but I’m heterosexual." Brandon grinned. Aje was beginning to get his sense of humour back. "So am I. It’s no excuse." "What d’you want, oh Grim and Morbid One?" "To give a helping hand to a friend, Aje." It was Aje’s turn to be silent. Brandon was about to hang up when Aje came back on the line. "Are you sure about this?" All traces of humour were gone from his voice. Brandon sighed. "Yeah," he said. "I blew it. There’s a ‘situation’, but I understand it a whole lot better now." Aje smiled for the first time in hours. "Nice to know you can extenuate the circumstances." "Hey—let&rsquo ;s be positive. At least you won’t be feeling guilty alone." "I wanta make sure I have this right. Are you actually admitting you made a mistake? A ‘boo-boo’?&qu ot; "First time ever." "Don’t tell me: that’s why you didn’t recognise it. Such humility deserves a reward. I’m buying—" "Just try to remember you said that when they bring you the tab." * "You’re out of your mind! How could he not know?" "Nate thinks he gets seizures—that the medicine controls it." "What does it really do?" "Brings him into chemical balance—so he doesn’t burn himself up." "Like one of those people who self-immolates?" Aje sounded horrified. Brandon shook his head. "I don’t know. The way I heard it, he saved someone’s life in the ER. A woman who turned out to be a Fed." "Talk about your boo-boos." Brandon’s grin flickered. "He put on some kind of electrical show—arcs and lightning bolts. Warned everyone to stay back, then fried her and himself. Brought her back from the dead—" At Aje’s shocked expression, Brandon nodded. "Yeah, they were about to call it. Anyway, what worked for her nearly burned him out. His heart stopped twice, right in the ER. They got him going, but that’s why he’s back in ICU." Brandon took a small vial out of his pocket. "These are his ‘meds’. His twisted family’s been giving him this stuff for years, just to control him. He doesn’t know any better, Aje. He takes it, just like a diabetic would insulin." Aje looked shocked—and sick. Sick enough, in fact, that he excused himself and disappeared to the Men’s room. When he came back, a couple of shades paler, Brandon remarked. "Didn’t know you were so sympathetic. What would you have done if it’d been a syringe?" Aje grunted. Brandon shook the vial, watching the glints through the glass. "No telling exactly what’s in it, but it seems to keep him from ‘burn-out’. Angela thinks that’s what happened in the ER. His system went into overload." Brand added, "She also swears if he doesn’t get the stuff soon, he’ll die." "What about the electrical problem? Don’t tell me he hasn’t figured it out." "He must know about the interference. Hell, look at his lights. But ‘Mom’ insists that’s all he knows. She also says there’s no danger unless someone’s with him outside, during a thunderstorm." Brandon had to clear his throat before he went on. He lowered his voice. "Nate’s so scared of them that he hides in a closet, or under a desk, until it’s over." Aje remembered a time he’d gone to visit Nate at work. Nate had claimed he was searching for a slide he’d dropped, under the desk. There’d been a weird look in his eyes, though, that he hadn’t quite been able to disguise. Now Aje knew it for what it was: terror. "He thinks he’s been hit twice. The other times, the family put it down to ‘seizures’." "If he didn’t know what he was capable of, he wouldn’t have warned them to stay back," Aje reminded him. "In the ER." "Unless Nate felt it coming on." Brandon looked at his hands. "The security guard said he was screaming and writhing—like he was in some kind of agony—" "Oh, shit—" Aje buried his face in his hands. "Nate’s gonna die unless he gets this stuff. It may be no good in the long term, but it’s what he needs right now. For all we know, he’s a junkie on this shit, and withdrawal’s putting added strain on his system." "You can’t just give it to him." Brandon frowned. "It’s decided, Aje. Seems to me it’s worth the risk. I just need you for distraction." "Method?" "What?" "How the hell’re you gonna give it to him? Intravenously?" "Fuck." "Yeah. We’re fucked. You can’t expect an unconscious man to drink it." "I wonder if Nate’s family runs to medical types—" "Only lunatics and morons. It’s time, Mr. Cop, to dig up someone else we can trust."
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The discussion today was on Egypt, mid-Dynasty XVIII. We talking about the obscurity of some archaeological references on stela, and how circuitous the route to understanding can be. Apparently, the only true co-regents of XVIII were T2 and A2 (Thutmose 2 and Amenhotep 2, his son)...and the way of determining this is the mention of A2's second accession day. The accession day usually only happens once in a Pharaoh's life - the day he or she takes the throne. In Amenhotep 2's case, it happened twice. Easy to explain, really - once someone else has explained it to you. A 2 took the throne while his father was still alive...then took it again when his father died. What amazed me was the way this could be determined from a few lines carved into two ancient stela, placed far apart. Fascinating! It's always interesting to explore the social side of anthropology. This week's topic was about bodily shapes. Interesting that the availability of home scales signalled the beginning of eating disorders like anorexia and bulimia. Before that, people may have worried, but they didn't have evidence of their own weight, or tables of "average weights" to compare themselves to. On the writing front... Working on book #25...still! I'm 1/3 finished, which is much more positive than admitting I have 2/3 to go and only 13 days to do it! A writer intro today: Jane Beckenham. Great lady is our Jane - smart, funny, kind. She's the kind of person you want to know, but since she can't be everywhere at once, and NZ is her home, you'll have to settle for reading her books! In Jane's own words: As always, I'll leave you with an excerpt... Excerpt: STATIC, Chapter Two Chapter Two No! Bubbles of thick, gurgly sound streamed by her, racing to the incredibly distant surface. A surface that shivered and shook in the moon's reflective wash. Then it was all kicking and clawing, as Delgado fought to get past her—to use her as one more piece of leverage in the fight for his life. My life! She was trying to help—to haul him towards the surface. But he was too gone on coke dust and water. He was choking, and she didn't think he knew any longer which way was up. "Let me go!" She bellowed the words, in a blast of bubbles. He was still screaming—or maybe it was her. He had her by the hair, and he wouldn't let her go. A death lock, that even death wouldn't break. She punched him, but it was no use. She could see it in his eyes. Those wide-open staring eyes that mocked her. You're next… She twisted and jerked, but he had her tangled. Panicking, desperate, she kicked at him, and clawed at his outstretched arm—the one that had her trapped. She tried to yank away—better bald than dead—but there was nothing to push against but his lifeless form—and he co-operated with justice as little in death as he had in life. Through squinted eyes, she caught a glimpse of those ascending bubbles—taking her life with them. "No!" she screamed again. Casavas was up there. He'll come… Fury filled her at the futility of it all. "Jim!" she screamed, willing him to hear. He was her partner. Her back-up. He'll be here… As the last of the air bubbles left her throat, she closed her eyes against the encroaching darkness. It was the only way to separate the water from her tears. * Someone's knocking. Bump. Bump-bump. "Come in," Nate said drowsily. Only, the damn fool wouldn't enter. He just kept pounding on the door. Can't he figure it out? "Come in!" he repeated. Did I lock it? He couldn't remember locking it. But then, he couldn't remember much of anything at the moment. His brain felt as numb as his body. He's not gonna stop till I answer the door. Nate sat up, and rubbed his eyes. And remembered where he was. It was the first time he'd awakened in the dark, since those terrifying moments in the gully. I didn't think it was real. And what could be ignored or discounted in daylight, took on a terrifying intensity at night. His room was aglow with a weirdly fluxing radiance. It had taken forever and some painkillers to get him to sleep. He body was still set on "slumber", and he wished he'd stayed there. To pretend this is all some nasty dream… It might have been possible if it hadn't been for the knocking. Nate flopped back, and gawked, with a kind of dulled wonder, at the brightest object in the room. Only, it's not in the room, he realised. It was right outside it. The glimmering intensity of its fretful flight sent little ricochets of light flickering through the air. It was a bat. A big one. Beating itself against the glass. Beating itself to death. It was so vibrant—so alive with its flapping wings and shimmery light... He flinched at the thought of it battered and broken on the ground. Like me. Yawning loudly, he shook his head to clear it, and threw back the covers. There must be something I can do... Nate limped heavily along the wall, grateful for the painkillers that kept him numb. There was a dull ache in his gut, and a matching one in his leg, but nothing he couldn't handle. He stumbled cautiously toward the window. The bat was drenched in its white-orange light. Every time it thumped the glass, the rostrum would flicker a dense red. The vibrant light would dissipate down the body, until it disappeared. Pain? Nate looked down, and was only moderately surprised to see a similar colour ensheathing his left leg. Pain, he verified, nodding stupidly. That moment of shared suffering did it. Nate opened the window as far as the latch would allow. "Go," he urged, reaching out his hand to the poor beast. His anxiety had been replaced by an almost desperate sadness. This reminded him of the rodents that had invaded his room. Not their fault, he suddenly knew. Then whose? Suddenly, he was desperate for the bat to go. He swung his hand a little wildly, inadvertently slapping one wing. Not leathery. It was neither coarse nor leathery. More like the webbing on a duck's foot. What bothered him most was the reddish cast along the creature's wing—pain he'd inflicted. It was a lot easier when I was oblivious… Stop it! The drug's doing your thinking for you, Moron. A flicker of anger stirred. "Go!" he said again. This time, as he touched the bat, a spark jumped from his fingers. The bat jolted and dipped, then lost its lift and plummeted towards the ground. What have I done? Horrified, he watched the bat's bright trail as it tumbled downward. "Fly!" he yelled. The bat fell, landing with a crackling of branches in a stiff-branched Abelia bush. An Abelia that—to Nate's eyes—also glowed in luminescent glory against the backdrop of night. Murderer. He watched for a few seconds—hoping to see the bat's bright energies lifting skyward. Nothing. He had his hand on the call bell before he realised how stupidly he was acting. What're you gonna tell her, Nate? "Could you run downstairs for me, and check on my bat?" The hospital was already buzzing over the rat incident. One more rodent escapade, and they'd be ready to lock him up. In the shrub, there was a flicker of shifting light. It's alive. Nate watched, but other than a few odd flickers, nothing came of it. It's stuck. And so am I—in this room. Not necessarily. Not like the bat. A quick trip down in the elevator, a rummage in the bushes, then a quick trip back up. No one would be the wiser. Except me. Next time I'll be wise enough to look and not touch… Nate rummaged in the closet, and out of frustration, opted for the robe. "Leave it to Aje," he muttered. It was a garment which would have done a pimp proud. All red satin, with gold embroidery. "Impress your guests," Aje had said. He'd burst out laughing, and Brandon had made a hasty exit, which meant he'd been in on it, too. Now, Nate looked at it, and wondered how the hell he was going to be discreet. Your mind's gone, Leighton, to be doing this at all. But, then, there was the bat. Abelia was one of those shrubs with branches going every which way. Scratchy, sometimes brittle. No way to spread those wings... Nate remembered the way they'd felt—and how the radiance of that flapping, furry body had filtered through the glass, to brighten his room. He couldn't just lie here, and pretend it hadn't happened. Nate grabbed the crutches and slipped his arms through the supports with a trace of excitement. As a youngster, he'd envied all those broken kids who got to hop around with crutches. It always looked like such a great game. And, of course, in those days, anything anyone else had always seemed like more fun that what you had yourself. Kids! he thought, grinning foolishly. He yawned, then realised he'd lost track of things again. Damned drugs. Focus, Nate. Time to try these babies out. Gripping the crutch grips tightly, he gave an experimental hobble. Not too bad, he decided, swinging the cast high in his enthusiasm. Too high. He was surprised to find himself sitting on the bed. Oops. Not a good exercise when you're operating "under the influence". Nate snorted with suppressed laughter. Be discreet, you fool. Crutch-Man to the rescue. He did another practice hobble toward his door. Not too bad at all. Grinning, Nate peeked out, into the hall, then disappeared cautiously through the door. * "Fuckin' hell!" He'd been battling it out with Delgado's hired hands. And now Chaz was missing… Jim Casavas wrapped his fist in a cloth to stop the bleeding, as he raced along the dock. It was the last place she'd been, and she, like he, had been fighting for her life. Now, there was no sign of her. A boat. There must've been a boat. No one was crazy enough to corner himself on a dock, with no exit except through your enemy. No one could be that stupid— Or want to take out his enemies that much… Delgado could. Because they'd busted him and destroyed his operation. And because he was too far gone on his own product to care… No! Jim didn't want to believe it. He looked out across the water, desperate for some sign of a getaway. At that moment, several air bubbles sifted to the surface. Oh Jesus fuckin' Christ… Jim hit the button on his phone that would bring Hollebeck running, and tossed it onto the dock. Then, with dread weighing heavily in his gut, he jumped off, into the water. * By the time he'd reached the exit, he'd remembered the other thing about crutches—they were damned painful on your arms. They could also make you damn tired. He'd managed to avoid the orderly in the hall, and the two nurses at the nurses' station, but now he almost wished he'd run into someone. Someone who could have advised him on a more sensible course of action, like returning to his bed. The vision of the bat's finer points was fading fast. Nate leaned against the building, and searched for the guilty shrub. Any awe he'd felt for the glowing leaves, or the weird colours the night had taken on, was long gone. It had never occurred to him he'd have trouble telling one shrub from another. The problem was, the landscaper had made his shrub-of-choice Abelia. The darned stuff was everywhere. Very picturesque, I'm sure, Nate thought tiredly. It would have helped if he could locate his window. The truth was, he couldn't even remember what floor his bed was on—or what room. Everyone who'd come to visit him had known where he was, so he hadn't bothered to think about it. And this was the first time he'd been up since he'd arrived. And the last for a while, he vowed. If I make it back to bed, I'm not moving for a week. The shrub to his right gave a suspicious wriggle, and Nate pounced. He bent and broke and pawed at branches—until he realised he'd never even thought about rabies or plague or anything else the bat might be carrying. That's what you get for letting them dope you up—then acting like a dope… He'd left his hesitation till too late. The bat came crawling out—walking forward on those bent wings that acted like legs. Nate could see it clearly in its haloed light—right down to the blindly beady eyes, squashed snout, and vicious mouth. In the eerie glow, it looked far from the elegant creature that had fluttered outside the glass. It looked much more like a squat gargoyle, with evil on its mind. It scuttled forward, and Nate let the bushes go with a horrific twang. Which made the bat sproing outward—right into Nate's horrified face. Nate flopped over backwards—feeling the crunch in his leg and gut as he went. Moments ago he'd come close to feeling no pain. Now it seemed like his world was full of it. The bat reacted to his agitation. It clawed and scratched and danced its devil dance on his face and hair, all the while making these high-pitched squeaky-squawks and gyrating around on those stiff, flappy armwings. The bat-stench was unbelievable, and Nate began to gag—at the same time fighting not to open his mouth. It'll blind me! It'll bite me! In a panic, Nate ripped the bat off his face. It turned on him, squirming to get at his hand. Howling now, he flung it skyward. After that, he couldn't do anything. He was gone. Used up. Spent. Flopped where he lay. And praying like hell it wouldn't topple anywhere near him. Something swooped past his head, coming in low—a glowing gargoyle straight from Hades. It was the last thing he remembered for a while. * Duncan Hollebeck stood on the dock and looked out at the water. All he could see in the wavery chop was the eerie reflection of the half moon. He felt a brief spasm of pity for Casavas, and how it must have been for him. Finding her had been a mission in itself. I failed her. Hollebeck had known how quickly this one could turn bad, and he should have shortened the time frame. Casavas would hold it against him forever, but not nearly as much as Hollebeck would hold it against himself. Live and learn. Only, Chaz Ransford would never have the chance to learn more. Hollebeck didn't want his lessons to come at the cost of his operatives' lives. He'd read it wrong, opting for clandestine, even when it forfeited security. I should have taken the chance on wiring them both. I backed her up—but not till she had her back to the wall. Not until they'd had to fish her out of the water. Then there'd been twenty minutes of CPR—a useless gesture, because they knew she was already gone. The farce had continued as they'd loaded her onto the helicopter. It was an act of respect, but more than that, it was a necessary illusion—to convince Casavas and the others that Duncan Hollebeck had done everything in his power to offer her his support. Without the power of the illusion, he would have forfeited the power of his command. However strong the illusion, Hollebeck knew it would never have the strength to conceal his shortcomings—from himself. * Nate opened his eyes and saw it, far in the distance. It was coming for him—its glow flickering uncertainly in the roar of its arrival. Not the bat. He lowered the arm that had been shielding his face, and blinked to clear his vision. It was a helicopter, and it was about to land. A helipad. They must have a helipad. He just hoped it wasn't anywhere near him. He latched onto the Abelia, and tried to pull himself to his feet. The next moment, he was sitting in the Abelia, much as the bat had a short time before. Only, he didn't fit nearly as well as the bat. Spent, he perched there and waited for the helicopter traffic to hustle by. This could be really embarrassing, he thought, discouraged. His room was seeming further away all the time. There was someone on the stretcher. He froze, watching with his newly heightened perspective. It was a woman. She was drenched—and to his eyes, her skin wore a glaze of blue marble. Near her heart, her head, though, some sparkles of light lingered. "She's gone…" Nate heard the words, and stiffened. It was too close to the time when he'd been the one on that stretcher. He looked regretfully at the red glow that was now ensheathing his leg. He realised what a fool he'd been, to take a chance like this—to take his survival so lightly. I'm sure she'd think so. His eyes went to the woman's still figure once more. And was stunned to find a heated yellow glow surrounding her—a response to the man's words. She heard him, Nate realised, shocked. She's angry, because they're ready to give up on her, before she's ready to die… The thought filled him with a grim horror. Almost involuntarily, he put out his hand in her direction, and a stray glint of her light—of that pulsingly heated glow surrounding her—passed into his skin. He gasped at the sensation—at the tingle of warm energy running up his arm. "She's gone." They were wrong, but they were going to call it, as soon as they got her inside. It shocked him, in some fundamental way, to realise that they really didn't know. Didn't know she was still here. Didn't know they hadn't lost her after all. They still had a chance, if only they'd take it. They were moving swiftly now, away from him. Anxious to get this done; eager to get past their failure. Too swiftly for him, but too slowly if they were going to save her. Not the way they would have moved if they'd thought she stood a chance. But there wouldn't be any more attempts at saving. Buried alive. And, by the time her coffin was lowered into the ground, it really would be too late. Nate clawed his way out of the shrubbery, yanked up his crutches, and hobble-hopped after them into the building. * "I'll call it." Adam Saracen looked at the clock, then at the still figure on the table. Some kind of cop, they'd said. He tried not to react—not to let the pity in. Keep it light. No sense in bemoaning what you can't change. Think of the ones you've saved. "Time of death—" A man pushed—no, almost fell—through the swinging door. Kate Morgan was arguing with him. "You can't go in there! If you want to see the doctor—" Dan Yergano, from Security, latched onto the intruder's red robe. At that, the man on crutches nearly lost his balance. He started to topple forward, and Dan let go—undoubtedly seeing visions of lawsuits dancing through his head. "Problems?" Adam asked. Jude Lawson caught the man's arm and steadied him. "He's got a bracelet," she said. Adam nodded. The garish garb had thrown him off. This was the one who'd been brought in the other night. The one who'd toppled off a mountain. "Shouldn't he be upstairs?" Kate shrugged. "I'll ring up to three." "Let me take a look at him first," Adam told her with some asperity. He caught the warning glint in her eye. He was letting his impatience show—and his intolerance for fools who were patched up, then proceeded to damage themselves again in a repeat performance of their stupidity. So, Adam made an effort. He squared his shoulders and pasted on a polite smile. "What's your name?" Adam asked Mr. Red Robe. Red Robe didn't seem to hear him. Jude looked at the bracelet. "Leighton, Hubert N." "Mr. Leighton?" No response. Adam turned to Jude. "Check on his meds. Could be some kind of reaction." "They didn't even know he'd left," Kate said, putting down the phone. "Ben's coming down." * Nate wasn't listening—no, the truth was, he could no longer hear what they were saying. His eyes were focused on the drenched figure lying on the table. The radiant lights surrounding her were pulsing dimly now. Something stirred inside him, and at first he thought that it was pity, or horror, or even some remnant of the tingling buzz which had entered his skin in that moment of contact. Then he was afraid, because he suspected it was something else. He wanted to turn away then, before it could happen. The sensation building in his chest was familiar. It was a heat, that turned his limbs to ice. Molten, and roiling—almost alive. He'd been afraid, all his life. Afraid that it would build like this—and somehow get away. The worst part of it was that it somehow belonged to his past. To the blasts of static electricity that sent him scurrying under the bed. Only, this time, I'm not gonna be able to run and hide. Because it's not coming from the sky... He stood there, leaning on his crutches, and unaware that he was wobbling. His balance was the traitor, and he had to shift his feet in order to stop from toppling. In that instant, he heard a crackle of static. * The man was oblivious to their chatter, and Adam's eyes met Jude's. "Mr. Leighton?" he tried again. Then, he noticed where Leighton was looking—at the dead woman. "Cover her up," Adam ordered. The man was suffering from shock, all right, but he'd misjudged the cause. And the fool's gawking irritated the hell out of him. "Let's get him out of here," he said abruptly. At that, Jude fluffed around—did everything, in fact, but cluck disapprovingly. Adam's annoyance faded. "But first, we'll put Mr. Leighton in two, and make sure everything's okay before we send him on his way." * That crackle of static terrified him—as though it were telling him more than he'd ever wanted to know. Go! Now! While you can… In that instant, he was tempted. Tempted to walk away before they knew what he was seeing—before he could act on his vision. Before he'd be forced to admit what some part of him already knew: that something about him—some innate part of him—had changed. Nobody walked out on you, Nate. When you fell off that mountain, they kept looking, until they found you. And when the helicopter failed, they still brought you out. Those glints brightening her heart, her brain, were drifting. The white blanket enfolding her body was rapidly becoming a shroud. Bring her back, Nate… He gulped, and a sensation like heartburn ate at his chest. He had the sensation of being burned alive. From the inside out. * The lights flickered. "Not again," Adam said. All eyes followed his—to gaze at the ceiling. * Nate moved. He shoved the doctor to one side, and launched himself at the table. In his efforts to offset the cast, he overshot his mark. He landed right on top of the dying woman, and sent the gurney rolling across the floor. It was obscene. Appalling. And it was obvious the doctor felt the same way. His "What the hell!" reverberated through the room. And twanged the tension in Nate's already-overwrought nerves. The trigger for the cataclysm. Stop! Nate clung to the table—curling up in a ball; fighting the hot wires screaming through his middle. He was being burned in a thousand places… And now all he could hear was a crackling rush of sound—white noise with a signature. The hush before a strike. Every hair on his body was dancing… Run! The white hot wires singed his heart—his lungs—any more and he'd self-immolate…or explode… And all he could see were those damned lights, jiggling and dancing everywhere he looked. "Don't touch me!" he screamed. Don't take them with you. Just her… Nate pulled her chilly flesh against his own—knowing a momentary relief at that instant of cold—and let the explosion come. * The lights flickered, buzzed and went out. One of the bulbs blew out of its socket, but nobody noticed. Blue arcs of light warred with white lightning bolts across the ceiling and floor of the emergency room. The man, Leighton, was screaming—a hoarse cry of agony that got shriller as the arcing went on—and on. Electrocution. Adam tried to tell himself that's what he was seeing. Somehow, an unseen source in the floor had been tapped, and the wetness of the women's clothing was acting as a conduit. He also told himself he should be finding some way to cut the power—to push the bodies out of reach—to prep the crash cart—but he couldn't seem to move. Those white and blue arcs held him and his co-workers as tightly bound as Leighton's arms did the dead woman. The room was filling with misty smoke. Adam heard the drone of Dan's voice in the background, as he rang the fire department. It was Jude who first saw the "smoke" for what it was—the humidity being generated by the moisture rising off the woman's clothing. It was enough to make Adam sure that what he saw next must be a mistake—had to be a mistake. For, as the last of the crackling died from the air, the woman in Leighton's arms opened her eyes. Adam nearly lost it then. Gooseflesh danced down his arms and legs, and he gave an involuntary shiver. Not dead. All he'd ever read as a kid about zombies and voodoo came back to haunt him. In that moment of time, he was no longer a doctor—and he was as horror-stricken as any of his co-workers. Until she began to cough, and was, once again, simply another human being. She shivered and gagged, then vomited water, across the floor. Across Leighton, who still held her loosely in his arms. Across that improbable red robe and its even more improbable owner. Adam had this weird feeling he was in some other reality, characterised by garishly bright red brocade garments, resurrected bodies, and people who could shoot lightning bolts out of their fingers. If it weren't for the stench of singed hair… The woman coughed again, then wheezed, sucking in big deep breaths of steamy air—air that had risen from her own dead body. The lights came back on in Emergency, but Leighton was as oblivious as he'd been before. No, Adam thought. That's wrong. The man turned to look at him, pain and despair in his gaze. Horror, at realising what he'd done. Adam recognised the look. He'd seen it in his own face, the first time he'd messed up a diagnosis. The man was as terrified of himself, as he was of other people finding out. Adam realised he'd come to some conclusion about Leighton—and about what he'd just witnessed. It was no bare wire, or electrical short… Leighton wanted to leave now—was desperate to leave. He pushed himself up, off the gurney. Off the woman who was still silent and damp. Only, the man had no strength left. It was as though he'd tapped his inner reserves, and had left nothing for himself. Adam got the impression Leighton was fading, right before his eyes. Adam's still-stunned, and inanely inadequate "Are you all right?" was met by that frightened stare, until the man's eyes lost focus and he sagged against the gurney. Until he accidentally touched the woman's hand, and jerked his own away. Almost like someone afraid of getting burned. It was the last gesture he was to make that night. As Adam watched, Leighton sighed, then toppled over onto the floor. * "Take it." The phone's blipping sounded unnaturally loud, now that the last helicopter had left. Ian Termill nodded. Duncan Hollebeck was in no mood to be diplomatic, and he knew better than to argue. Ian listened for a moment, then promptly dropped the phone. When he picked it up again, he was looking a little stunned. He held out the phone to Hollebeck. "What is it?" Duncan asked coldly. At the same time, his stomach sank. Another emergency. His own failure was too close for him to interpret Termill's actions in any other way. "It has to do with Chaz—" At the mention of her name, Hollebeck felt a qualm he had trouble concealing. The last thing he needed now was information on some needless suffering—some useless input into how she'd died. There'll be plenty of time for that—too much. Hollebeck's expression hardened. "Keep it brief." Ian Termill sighed, then gave what may have been a smile. Hollebeck could have pounded him. Until he heard the man's next words. "Chaz is alive, Duncan—and she's asking for you." * "Brandon? It's Angela." Nate's mom. "Do you need a ride back to the hospital?" "It's not that, Brand," she admitted. She was hesitant; reluctant to talk. Not like Nate's mom. Usually, she yakked his ear off. "What's up?" he pushed. "There were some people here asking questions—about Nate." She paused. "I didn't tell them much." "Didn't tell them much." Brandon's police instincts took over. "About Nate?" What was there to tell? "What kind of questions?" "There was an incident at the hospital last night. Did you know he's back in ICU?" "No," Brandon said, concerned. "I saw him yesterday. He was doing great." "Brand, are you and Nate still pretty close?" Brandon smiled at her choice of words. He was just glad Aje wasn't here, to twist them. "We're friends, yes, if that's what you're worried about." "Nate's never going to forgive me for this," she said worriedly. "But it's for his own good—and his safety." Shit! What the hell was the dung-lover into? Brandon's mind jumped to drugs, theft, larceny. He catalogued Nate's minimal belongings. If he was living a life of crime, he sure as hell wasn't benefiting much from it. Therefore, whatever it is, it can't be too bad. She's exaggerating again. Dramatics. One of the reasons Nate had moved so far away. Maybe not the only reason, Brandon's logic supplied. Shut up, he told it. "I'll come to your hotel," Brandon offered. "Not the room," Angela said quickly. Too quickly. Brandon frowned. What'd she think? They'd have it bugged or something? "I'll meet you in the restaurant," he said. Unable to resist, he jokingly added, "I'll take a cab, just to make sure I'm not followed." "Make it the restaurant near the hospital," she told him. "And it might be better if you switched cabs halfway there. Eleven sound okay?" His job had been eating at him lately. It was getting harder all the time to believe that the pimps, the pushers, the gangs, the thieves and the murderers were in the minority. That the majority of people didn't have any urge to beat their neighbours to death, or club their wives. That most people wouldn't cheat or steal, pound on their children, or vandalise other people's property, if given the opportunity. Brandon had a sudden urge to hang up the phone. If one of his friends was involved in something "shady", he'd prefer blissful ignorance to guilty deceit. He'd learned a lot about flexibility since he'd started this job. If the rules needed to be bent a bit, he'd prefer it to be painless—so he wouldn't have to live with either the stress of deceit, or the discomfort of guilt. It was the only way he could reconcile his job with his life. And there was enough of him in both things to make the reconciliation necessary. It didn't sound like the reconciliation, when it came to Nate, was going to be an easy one. He had an uncomfortable feeling that after today, his and Nate's friendship would never be the same. "Brandon?" Angela. Worried about her son, and what he was into. Worried about protecting him. Brandon felt weighed down—and nearly as bad as he had when Nate was lying in that gully. He sighed. "Eleven will be fine," he said. * Not only Nate's safety. Aje's. In the four hours since Brandon had seen Angela, he hadn't done anything constructive. Instead, he'd gone back to the mountains, and sat for a while, trying to imagine what it must be like to be struck by lightning. Then he'd driven to Nate's house, and checked out the cars assembled there. They were undoubtedly searching the premises, and Brand was tempted to storm in there and demand to see a search warrant. He would have, too, if he hadn't already known how little there was for them to find. I wonder what they'll make of his dung collection? Brandon had smiled at that one, and he realised things might not be as grim as they seemed. It was all a matter of coming to terms with these new aspects of Nate's personality. Nate had been living a lie for years. Either that, or he was in some weird form of denial. Brand idly noted a few of the licence plate numbers on the otherwise unmarked cars, knowing it wouldn't do him much good. He was angry at Nate for hiding his handicap, if that's what it could be called, but maybe Nate didn't see it as such. Yes, he does. How could he not? The amount of innovation it would take to get through even a single day at work was mind-boggling. What bothered Brandon the most was the lying Nate had done. Lying by omission. Omitting to tell his best friends about his problem. Endangering them rather than admitting the truth. Well, Brandon'd be damned if he'd be guilty of the same kind of omission when it came to Aje. Adrian Morton deserved to know what was going on, if only to protect himself. Brand picked up the phone, and punched in Aje's number.
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Prejudice
is a strange thing, and so location-dependent. Changing your environment
suddenly points out your weaknesses - your bias - your prejudice. Whatever the
basis for your bigotry at home, once you're transplanted elsewhere you'll see
similar antagonism for reasons which are difficult to understand...and for
people with whom you have no grudge whatsoever. Your own bigotry is suddenly put
into perspective. It's a real eye-opener to see the parallels.
Same argument, different context.
Very strange...to be invalidated by distance.
Thoughts like these are arising out of my anthropology studies. I'm really
enjoying it, and my brain feels like it's buzzing.
The oddest type of prejudice, in my mind, has to do with that against
indigenous people. There's a lot of resentment by latecomers, against those who
were there first. The resentment is frequently sustained by government
intervention, but I'm not sure that's a bad thing, at least as far as stirring
public awareness goes. Most of the time the antipathy seems to arise out of some
demand for land, or at the very least, respect. Respect is a commodity which
can't be bought, but some of these groups must have earned it - wouldn't you
think???- by survival. Instead, because their technology is frequently less
well-developed, they are weighed on a world scale, and found wanting.
Interesting...
On the writing front: I'm working on a romance - actually writing for the
market. The disadvantage is that I'm not very familiar or good with writing in
this genre, but there is an advantage, too, in that the book only needs to be
around 60,000 words. I'm going to try to finish it by the 15th April.
As always, I'll leave you with an excerpt...
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Excerpt:
STATIC (a Sir Julius Vogel Award
nominee!)
Prologue
The fluffy white
cumulonimbus was a wisp of vapour in the air. No traces yet of billowing grey,
lashing black streaks of rain onto the land. No signs of the hardened
hailstones, or hints of the electrical turmoil which would soon be stirring
within. Like a newborn infant, the growing beast had no idea of its future.
No suspicion of the
latent energy that rested in its mass.
In the house, far
below and as yet, far distant, a man lay in restless dreams. The clues had all
been there, but he'd never read them. Never understood his past, nor the dormant
power which lurked within.
His dreams were of
hot light, and roiling energies.
A nightmare. Only a nightmare.
He sat up and checked the windows,
seeing only a clear night with a sparkling of stars.
Calm, peaceful. He
relaxed, and wiped the sweat from his face with the sheet.
Safe—for
now.
It was the best he could do.
Take the now as it comes and
don't sweat the future.
He smiled, a little
foolishly. Only a
dream.
He, more than most, should have
realised that all things change...
Chapter
One
Nate Leighton chucked his day pack
onto the worn sofa and made a big point of tossing in a pair of socks.
"I'm not looking,"
Aje Morton warned him. "I don't want to know." Behind Nate's back, he gestured
to Brandon Weisner. There was a lot of wild pantomiming, but Brand had no
trouble interpreting the mouthed "no fuckin' way!".
"I saw that," Nate
told them, grinning. "Think of the hike—"
"I am. That's the
part I don't want to know about."
"Up in the
mountains," Nate continued, "away from all this city air." He smiled, then shook
his head disparagingly. "Damned sceptics. It's a pollution survey, pure and
simple."
Brandon Weisner
snorted. "'Pure'? If it's so far away from all that pollution, why are you
surveying for it?"
"Because he's
simple," Aje supplied.
Nate smirked, then
turned quickly, to stuff a shirt into his pack. "Lichens are a great monitor of
air qualit-"
"I knew it was a
crock! This is one of your 'collecting' trips." Aje shook his head disgustedly.
"That's my cue to
leave," Brand said. "See ya."
Aje leaned against
the door, to block Brandon's exit. "No way you're leaving first. Then he'll
expect me to come along."
"The
last thing I'd expect—hell! The last thing I'd want is
to haul your big, dumb ass up a mountain—" Nate began.
"So now it's mountain
climbing, is it?" Brandon lifted one eyebrow.
"And if I don't come
along, then I'll get a phone call later. 'I'm stuck on a ledge, but don't tell
anyone'," Aje mimicked.
Nate said reasonably,
"That only happened once. It could've happened to anyone—"
Brandon looked at him
pityingly. "'Anyone?'"
"He was just lucky
his phone wasn't out of range or he would've been out there all
night."
"Go to hell, Aje,"
Nate said genially.
"You're telling me
his phone was charged? It actually worked?" Brandon asked dryly. "Only thing I
find surprising."
"Who the hell
dumps on a ledge, anyway? What'd you think you were doing there?" Aje gave him a
mocking smile. "Brandon really wants to
know."
"Brandon doesn't give
a shit," Brandon replied, "so long as Brandon doesn't have to winch you off any
ledges."
"Pollution studies.
Measuring lichens." Nate grinned. "No coprophilous fungi involved."
"Whatever—Hubert." Aje grabbed his coat off
the rack. "Let's just say I have plans for Saturday."
"Anyone I know?"
Brandon asked him.
"Known her for
years," Nate supplied. "First name's Play. Last name's Station."
"You should be so lucky," Aje retorted. "Not
that it's any of your business, but her name's Antoinette—"
"First name Marie?"
Nate offered helpfully.
"—and I met her at
the Club."
Brandon grinned, and
yanked open the dilapidated door.
Aje peered out.
"Damned streetlights are out again." He scowled at Nate. "Why don't you
complain?" Then he flicked the porch light switch, only to find it was out, too.
"Is this thing broken again?"
"Surges?" Brand
suggested. "Lights in your house, too?"
"Pop all the time,"
Nate admitted.
"Damned fire trap,"
Aje complained. "Let me out of here."
"You should move to a
better part of town," Brand said.
"And have you guys
visit me more often? No thanks. Besides," Nate added, munching on an apple he'd
taken out of his pocket.
"I've seen him put
other stuff in that pocket," Aje muttered distastefully.
Nate grinned. "Relax.
It's been washed."
"Besides—?" Brandon
prompted.
Nate looked at
him blankly for a moment, then remembered. "Some
neighbours might object to my hobby."
"I can't understand
why you don't keep that crap at work, with your other stinking
fungus."
"Contamination." Nate
took another noisy bite. "Nobody wants dung in their lab."
Brandon looked at the
apple, and shook his head. "I'd better go before my nachos do." He rubbed his
stomach. "Thanks for the snack—I think."
*
Communing
with nature. Nate loved these times, when he could get
out, and see only open spaces around him. As much as he liked working in the
lab, there were too many constraints—like being in a box. Not only the
workspace, but the protocols—the procedures. All systematic, all carefully
mapped out. All scientific, and all about proof. Repeatable, verifiable,
measurable proof. Proof that frequently required analysis on a computer.
Which is why he
relished the freedom of his coprophilous studies. They were a type of
systematics research he'd been introduced to as an undergrad, and that he'd
really enjoyed. No matter how well he could predict what kind of fungus would
grow out of a piece of rat or dog or elephant dung, there were always surprises.
So far, he'd discovered eleven new species.
In contrast, now that
he knew which techniques he could use, there wasn't all that much that was "new"
about the stuff he was doing down at work. Mostly verifications of plant
diseases. Testing for specific proteins. They'd learned early on not to let him
near any of the computers, spectrophotometers, or electrophoresis gels.
Despite what Aje and
Brandon had said, there wasn't that much of the "stinking" or "dirty" about his
dung studies, either. Each specimen was in a covered container, and he discarded
the source material as soon as he'd isolated its fungi.
It's just
the whole idea behind it, he reasoned, grinning.
But if it really
grossed them out, they wouldn't drop by so damn often…
His first year at his "hobby" he'd
had a standing order at the zoo, for samples of dung from different animals. A
lot of the results had been standard stuff—nothing to rattle the systematics
texts. But there had been that one new species, and it was enough to get him
hooked. A few months later, when the zoo had started contracting all their dung
out to a fertiliser company, Nate had been forced to go further afield. So he'd
started taking these hikes up into the mountains. It was something he'd done as
a teenager, years before, and he'd forgotten how good it felt to visit all that
fresh air. Now, he got away at least once a month if he could. He'd already
decided that some day, when the labs turned fully computerised, he'd go from
specialist, to generalist—opt for being a field biologist, and turn the analysis
over to someone else.
Today he'd found a
path he'd never taken before—and he'd already promised himself he'd never take
it again. Nature had been communing with him big time. He'd been tramping for
less than two hours when the skies suddenly opened. Rain and hail—and they were
coming down so hard it hurt. Nate was soaked before he could drag his rain gear
out of his bag.
Good thing
Aje isn't here, Nate thought. I'd never hear the end of this…
I probably won't,
anyway. Aje, despite his
protestations, would have half an ear tuned on the weather report.
Nate had never
expected him or Brandon to come along. It was just a way of covering his ass,
without sacrificing his pride. Brandon always insisted he needed to tell someone
when he was going hiking on his own, and Aje had been adamant about it since
that ledge goof-up. So, he'd tell them, they'd give him a hard time, and that
was that. Except he'd always get a call on Sunday—just in case. In Aje's words,
"If I have to save your stupid hide, I want to know before I make other plans."
Nate's thoughts were
interrupted by a loud rumble, and a flash of brilliant white, that lit up half
the sky.
Lightning!
No! It was the thing that terrified him more
than anything else. The thing that sometimes invaded his dreams. There was
probably some name for it—for this kind of irrational terror, but right now, he
didn't know—or care. The lightning was coming—heading his way.
A burst of adrenaline
shot through him and he started to run, slipping and sliding in the muck and
leaves. Panicked, he ran off the trail, heading toward an overhanging knob of
rock.
Solid. Safe. It can't get me
there.
It's okay, Leighton.
You'll make it…
Only, he wouldn't. It was at his
back, watching him ominously from the skies, and it was going to get him.
There was a tingling
in his shoulder blades.
It was going to stab
him, right in the back.
He'd never told
anyone. How, when a lightning storm came, he'd hide behind the door, or in a
closet. Deep in his house, or burrowed beneath the desk in his office.
His mother had said
he'd been struck once, when he was little. A baby. He didn't remember it, but
some part of him did. He'd been running from the stuff ever since.
It was coming. His
hair was standing on end and his gooseflesh was doing a shivery dance. The
pressure in the air was so thick he couldn't breathe…
The next moment, his
world exploded, and was gone—in a massive blast of overwhelming
white.
*
"Brand?"
Brandon looked
at his watch and growled into the phone, "It's eight-thirty am—on a Sunday.
This better be good."
"I think he's been
out there all night."
"Nate?"
"Yeah."
"D'you know
where?"
"You were there. He
didn't say."
Brandon was already
yanking on his pants. "Did you check his house?"
"What d'you think?"
Aje said sarcastically. "I'm here now."
"What about his
cellphone?"
"Not in service." Aje
hesitated. "I could be wrong. Maybe he just took off to have breakfast or
something."
"Any sign of his day
pack, or other gear?"
"Nope."
Brandon nodded. He
knew Aje wouldn't have called him unless he thought there was something to worry
about. The storm the night before had been the biggest in years. A bad night to
be out in the weather.
Maybe we should have checked a
little sooner.
"I'll be right there. I'll call in
his plates on the way. Maybe somebody's seen his car."
"Nate's gonna love
that. An APB on his hide."
"Better than a DOA."
Brandon slammed down the phone, gave Rita an apologetic nuzzle, and tore out the
door.
*
It was the cold that
nudged him awake. Invasive, numbing his body—
Like a slab of meat in the deep
freeze. He'd gone
beyond shivering, and his first thoughts were nigglings of panic. Too cold.
Gonna die if I don't get warmer.
There was a heaviness
in his chest; in his limbs. If it weighed him down any more, he'd never get up
again.
Gotta move.
Only, moving was synonymous with
pain. With a sharp, stabbing pain in his chest, and a nasty pang in his gut.
With the throb in his head, and the twanging aches in his leg.
Don't move the patient.
Better to stay
here…The cold could numb him
again, and then it wouldn't hurt. Some part of his brain assured him it was
sensible, and he started to drift. He was almost there, in that chilly darkness
once more, when the chills began.
He shivered, and
groaned. His damned metabolism had been stirred up by those brief moments of
wakefulness. The shivers were never going to let him have any rest. And the
irregular movements were sending jolts of agony through his chest, his leg.
Hey—better I can feel. With the
kind of stunting I must've done, it coulda been a helluva lot
worse…
His headache was tightening his
cranium like a vice, and he kept his eyes scrunched closed. He tried to force
himself to relax, to ease the pain in his head…
Think about something else. Like
where you are.
There were wet leaves. Under his
face. Something was crawling across his neck. A whole lot of somethings.
Ants.
Hope they're not the
stinging kind.
Negative thinking,
Nate—
He heard something buzz his
head.
Yellow-jacket. Nate remembered catching a fish as a kid,
and finding it later, covered in wasps. They'd stripped the flesh, and eaten
their way down to the bones.
Nate for dinner.
Nate-carcass—stripped down to
the bones.
Nate au
tartare.
He realised he was drifting again,
and brought himself back on track. It was time to get into action, and find his
way home.
He opened his eyes,
but everything was blurry. He fought to focus, and was rewarded with a painfully
haloed version of his world.
It's the best I can do.
He wasn't on the trail, or even
near it. Bleary-eyed, he sought the big chunk of rocky overhang he'd been
heading for, and saw it far above him, and way to his right. In dawning horror,
he realised how far he'd flown.
Hey, Leighton—on the plus side,
you're a lot further down the mountain that you thought. And, you're still
alive.
He tried to gauge by the
light how long he'd been out. The air held a residual chill, although the storm
had apparently passed. Maybe an hour, he thought.
Be home before dark.
He grabbed a branch,
and tried to pull himself to his feet. Home before dark.
The sun was growing hotter, and he
was getting confused, but he couldn't read his watch. Something was wrong with
the sun and the time. Something was wrong with his head, too, because he wasn't
moving. He suddenly realised he was lying on the ground once more, and he didn't
remember getting there.
Then, for a long
time, he didn't remember anything at all.
*
When he opened his
eyes again, everything was strange. He guessed that he'd missed dinner. The sky
was dark, but it was the only thing that was. Everything else was sheathed in
colour. He lay there stupidly, his eyes blearily studying his surroundings.
Until he reached out his hand—and saw a bright white light emanating from his
skin.
I'm dead…
His heart pounded, and his
throbbing head kept time. In the next moment he vomited.
Dead people don't
hurl.
I'm alive.
There's something
wrong with my eyes. He started
to panic again.
They can fix it. A little laser
treatment and you'll be good as new.
But only if you're
around for it. He shuddered,
and groaned. Only if you can
get out of this cold.
His eye was caught and held
by a brighter patch in the near distance. Someone has a light
on, he thought.
A light. People.
Warmth.
Nate began to crawl.
*
"They're waiting on
satellite recon, but they don't hold out much hope. Too much
overcast."
"Did they try the
dogs?"
Brand nodded. "The
rain washed away most of his trail, but they managed to track him nearly to the
ridge. We've covered this side."
"Where
next?"
Brandon donned the
professional look he always used when he was trying to deliver bad news. "Down
in that gully."
"Down there?" Aje
squeaked. It was such a long way down. He didn't see how Nate could have
survived a fall like that. He had a sinking feeling in his gut.
Brand nodded. "Yeah,
dammit."
*
They were watching
him. Nate opened his eyes to bison and woolly mammoths—lions and crocodiles and
men dressed in animal skins. They were snagged in an eternal hunt upon the
walls. It was only that weird light sheath—the one that pulsed in time to his
headache—that made them seem to dance and shift.
Amazing, he thought, momentarily forgetting his
discomfort in his astonishment.
Cavemen.
No. That was wrong. He was lying on the dusty
floor, in touch with the pressure of their final footprints in this place.
Not cavemen. He closed his eyes, and saw a score of
tunicked and cloaked intruders passing through. Fair, tall, robust.
It was a
flicker—there, for a moment only, then vanishing as quickly as it had come. He'd
had flashes before, but never taken them seriously.
You don't run your life on
superstition and daydreams.
Only now, it seemed like daydreams
might well be all he had left.
*
"W' f'd 'm." It was
staticky, and Brandon could barely make out the words.
"What's that?" Aje
released the branch he was holding, grabbed Brandon's arm, and forcibly yanked
him around. "Did they find him?"
"Shut up! I'm trying
to listen—"
"Can't you just call
'em back? You're a cop, for crissakes!"
Brandon gripped the
front of his shirt. "Shut
the fuck up!"
He listened for a minute longer.
There was a garbled conversation going on—something about mice or deer or
something. He lifted the radio higher, hoping that he'd get a little better
reception. "They're going to bring a helicopter in as close as they can," he
told Aje. He shrugged, and shook his head. "I just can't get the rest."
"Is he alive?" Aje
whispered.
"He must be.
Otherwise, they wouldn't take a chance on bringing in the helicopter at
night."
Aje nodded. "They'll
take him to Central?"
"Yeah."
"See ya." Aje turned
and started climbing rapidly back up the slope.
He heard Brandon
scrambling up behind him. "We'll take my car."
"No, thanks."
"It'll get us there faster."
Aje didn't say
anything, but when they reached the top he just kept going—in a determined stomp
toward his car.
Brandon caught up
with him, and gave him a shove. "I'm a 'cop'—remember?"
Aje hesitated. "Red
lights?" he asked. He knew this was as close to an apology as he was ever likely
to get from Brandon. "What about the siren?" he pushed.
Brandon clenched his
teeth. "Whatever it takes," he replied, opening the rear door.
"I'm not a prisoner—"
Aje argued.
They'd been
searching for nearly thirty-six hours, and Adrian Morton looked it. He was
unshaven, dirty, ripped and scruffy. Damned unsavoury. Brand hid his smile. His temper had already snapped, back there on the
mountain. He knew Aje's wasn't far behind.
"Get
in, you dumbass.
Otherwise, it'll be lights, siren—and cuffs
—if that's what it takes."
*
Aje was at the
hospital by seven the next morning. They hadn't let him or Brandon or any of
Nate's well-wishers in to visit him the night before. Aje hadn't paid much
attention at the time, but it seemed the numbers in search parties had tripled
as soon as Nate's name was released on the news.
Aje wasn't surprised.
Nate was one of those people everyone wanted to know. Not even his "hobby" was a
deterrent. His personality drew people like a magnet.
Hell, look at Brand and
me, Aje thought, amused.
One thing he was sure of, though: if it had been him or Brandon out there, Nate
would have been out searching, too.
After he and Brand
had reached the hospital, it had taken an unbelievable three hours for Nate to
arrive. By that time, Aje was sure they were waiting in the wrong place, and
Brand had made a couple of calls. But it was Nate who was in the wrong place at
the wrong time—in every way.
When they'd finally
wheeled him in, the little Aje could see had scared the shit out of him. Nate
was white and drawn and bloody. One side of his face was bruised, and his left
leg was in a blow-up splint. They'd immobilised his head and neck.
It appeared that
nothing had gone right with the rescue, either. The helicopter which had
airlifted him out of the gully had nearly gone down before it cleared the pass.
Something about the instrumentation going haywire and having to make an
emergency landing. They'd taken him by ambulance from there.
It didn't get any
better. The gauges in the ambulance were screwed, and none of the monitors
worked. They were blaming the faults on surplus electromagnetism in that
area—maybe even some remnant of the storm. Aje blamed it on the faults in the
system.
Brandon wasn't so
sure.
Things hadn't
improved when they'd reached the hospital. The monitors kept screaming, and the
third time the crash cart had come running, they'd turned the damn things off.
There were complaints of "trying to work in the dark", and then they were all
yelling when the lights in the room flickered out, and they actually
were working in the dark.
"What the hell's
going on?" Aje had asked Brandon. "It's like some kind of sabotage."
Brandon shrugged, and
gave him a grim look.
The silence began to
play on Aje's nerves. He paced, then found he was just too damn tired after all
their mountain-climbing. "Leighton finally got us out there to do some hiking,"
he mused.
"At least we didn't
have to gather any specimens," Brand murmured, with a smile.
"Think he'll be
okay?"
Brandon nodded. "As
long as it's not his spine." He stretched out his left leg across several of the
chairs. Brand had been shot in the thigh three years before. He never
complained, but Aje knew it stiffened up on him sometimes.
"Leg
hurting?"
"Nope."
Of course, he
wouldn't admit it. Wouldn't do anything that might prematurely curtail his
police work, or stick him behind a desk. He loved being out in the field.
Like Nate.
Aje grinned. Brandon like to think
of himself as a rock—igneous and staunch as hell. Right now he looked like he'd
have trouble routing a pebble. Just then Brandon sighed, and his head tipped
forward in a doze.
A few minutes later,
Aje stuck a steaming cup of coffee into his limp hand. "Wake up, Brand. Quit
drooling on the furniture."
"I wasn't
drooling…"
"Just snoring. The
patients were starting to complain." Aje gave him a nudge. "We're going.
Hospitals suck."
"What about
Nate?"
"Surgery. He won't be
out for hours. The nurses begged me to take you home, so they can get some
sleep. You're too close to the staff room."
"Very
funny."
Aje jiggled some
keys. "My big chance. I've always wanted to drive a police car." Brandon tried
to snatch them, but Aje was already heading toward the exit. "What button was it
that made the siren go?" he threw back over his shoulder.
Brandon grunted, and
stumbled after him down the hall.
*
Aje sat impatiently
in the chair next to Nate's bed. He'd told his boss he'd be an hour late for
work, but he was having trouble sitting still. It was damn boring watching
someone just lie there. He was sure Brandon could do it all day.
A stake-out.
"Wake up, Nate!" he
muttered, just loud enough for Nate to hear him, but not loud enough for any of
the nurses outside to claim he was bugging him.
He sat there for a
moment longer, then casually booted the bed—gently at first, then with a
repetitious thunk-thunk-thunk. "Wake up, you dumbshit!"
He remembered Nate
calling him a dumbshit a few days before, and sentimental tears sprang to his
eyes.
It was what they were
worried about—the waking-up bit. That, and the fact Nate couldn't be monitored
by a machine. A staff member wandered in every five minutes, just to check his
vitals.
Aje wiped his
eyes. He'd be damned if they'd catch him weeping. Thunk-thunk. "If you don't
wake up," Aje said solemnly, "I'm going to personally dump out your latest batch
of cultures. Take 'em out of that stupid incubator, and flush 'em down the
sewers. After that—" thunk-thunk, "—I'll start in on those crocks of shit. Too
bad." At this he managed to invest a little enthusiasm into his tone. "One of
them had this really interesting purple mould on it
this morning—"
"Which
one?"
Aje grinned
widely. Leave it to fungus. "I lied. So, shoot me."
He plopped a newspaper onto Nate's chest. "Did you know you're famous?"
Nate opened one eye,
then quickly closed it against the light. "Can you whisper?" he
pleaded.
"You're famous," Aje
told him in a loud whisper. He punched in a number on the phone by the bed.
"Hey, Brand—yeah, it's a bad connection," he said loudly, and Nate groaned.
"Here—talk to someone."
"Arrest 'im," Nate
pleaded. Nate opened one eye and looked at Aje. "I can't, Aje," he whispered.
He'd gone really white around the mouth. "Sorry—"
"Talk to you later,"
Aje told Brandon abruptly, and slammed down the phone. "You okay, Nate? Want me
to call the nurse?"
"No." It seemed like
he slept for a while, but when he woke up, he realised someone was still there.
"Aje?"
"Yeah?"
"Why'm I famous?" He
smiled weakly. "My prat fall?"
"Your discovery."
This time Aje was quiet as he moved the folded newspaper to the bedstand. "The
cave paintings. Leave it to you to go hunting for faeces, and find some
Neolithic art."
"Not cave men," Nate
told him earnestly.
"What do you know
about it?" Aje retorted sarcastically, then remembered where they were, and
Nate's diminished condition. "What do you know about it?" he asked again, but
this time, in a whisper.
"Vikings," Nate told
him, his eyes becoming distant. "Norsemen."
"And my ass is
brass," Aje scoffed. "Speaking of which, my ass is going to be canned if it
doesn't get a move on." He was about to head out the door when he stopped.
"Brand and I must've climbed forty mountains searching for your worthless hide.
So don't do anything today to wreck it," he warned. He sounded slightly choked.
Nate forced open his
eyes, and grinned weakly. "No way."
"And—don't let this
go to your head—but it's damn good to have you back." Aje was smiling as he went
out the door.
*
Brandon was going in,
just as an orderly came tearing out of Nate's room.
The man's obvious
panic made his stomach sink. "What's wrong?" Brandon asked. Something in the
guy's reaction didn't sit right. He was definitely distressed—but there was
something else there, too.
Revulsion.
"Rats," he gasped,
pushing Brandon aside.
Wuss. Brandon shook his head in disgust, then
pushed open the door.
And froze when
he saw the company Nate was keeping. "Holy shit!" he
whispered.
Nate's bed was
littered with furry brown bodies. There were a few restless newcomers scurrying
across the floor, but the rest were curled up on the bed, in a kind of soporific
disarray. One fat sewer rat had so forgotten himself as to lie on his back,
mouth hanging open.
Brandon had never
seen anything like it.
And I never want to
again.
His eyes went to Nate's face, but
he appeared to be sleeping, as peacefully as the rats. Sleeping or passed out.
Brandon didn't have to wonder which it would be if it were him.
I hate rats…
A few of the smaller ones had
crawled onto Nate's chest. Brandon wondered if any had found their way under the
covers.
They might be chewing on him,
even now.
Jesus
Christ!
Brandon couldn't control his
shudder.
Bubonic plague. Rabies.
Vermin. Brand's lips curled
back in disgust. What kind
of hospital is this? How could they let this happen?
"Nate!" he whispered, wondering if
it was the safest move.
Maybe the rats won't want to go,
Brandon. Maybe they're perfectly happy clinging to that cushy bed.
"Nate!"
The giant sewer rat twitched.
Brandon took a wary step back, and rested his hand on his gun. Some of these
fuckers were mean. If it went for Nate's eyes—or any other vital bit—he'd let
the ugly fucker have it.
That's right, Weisner. Shoot off
a few rounds in the hospital. I'm sure the captain won't mind…
Brandon stood there blankly—the
only weapon he had that could safely deal with that ugly rat was the only one he
couldn't use.
It took him a
moment longer to make up his mind. Open the windows and go for
broke. If he didn't, he'd lose his nerve. He could
picture himself jumping around on a chair while rats and mice seethed around his
feet. No good to anyone.
Brandon tightened his
jaw and grabbed a newspaper off the table. Determined now, he rolled it
up.
This is pitiful, he thought, looking a little desperately
from his pathetic weapon to the fat piece of vermin lying near Nate's feet.
There were a couple of others, too, that were nearly the same size. Somehow,
though, Brand was sure the fat one was gunning for him.
It had this
look…
He gulped. Its eyes
were open. Staring right at him. Showdown time.
"Two things wrong
with this scenario, Weisner," he muttered in a soothing monotone. He even
smiled, so the damned rat would get only good vibes. "One, your 'weapon' would
barely flatten a housefly. Two, it means you have to get close enough to beat on
the damned thing." He gave the rat a particularly sweet smile. "Of course, you
could always smash it with the chair. Nate might object to that, though…" Brand
moved closer; trying to shift sinuously like a snake, in hopes of mesmerising
his victim. "When I get to you," he warned it cheerfully, "I'm gonna bash you
off the bed, then crunch you with my boot…"
At that moment, Nate
woke up.
*
"How did he take
it?"
"How do
you think? How would you take
it, if you found yourself buried under a tonne of stinking rats?!" Brandon
smirked as he recalled the scene. "Nate started yelling and kicking—rats and
mice flying everywhere." He chuckled. "One of 'em ran up my pant leg, and I
couldn't get it out. I was hopping around and shaking my leg, until—wouldn't you
know it?—I hopped right onto the big one." Brandon shook his head. "I'll never
forget that squeal till the day I die."
Aje snorted with
laughter. "What was Nate doing?"
Brandon
grinned. "Going nuts. He kept shouting, and chucking things. Here I was, trying
to shake the mouse out of my pants, and all this stuff flying my way. I didn't
mind his pillow and cup, but he got me with the water
pitcher. The last thing to go was his IV."
"Where'd the rats
go?"
"I opened the
windows," Brandon admitted.
"Three storeys?" Aje
asked. He wasn't exactly a rat lover, but he looked slightly shocked. "Anybody
get 'rained' on?"
Brandon looked a
little sheepish. "Rita," he admitted.
Aje looked
blank.
"My girlfriend. She
was coming to meet me for lunch when 'the skies opened'."
Aje's lips twitched.
"Does she know it was you?" he asked seriously.
"Could be," Brand
said dryly. "My yells of 'take that, you fucker!' just might've given me
away."
"A little thing
like that." Aje was trying to stifle his laughter. "You'd think she'd be more
understanding." Brandon was silent, so Aje added, with mock seriousness, "I know
you don't give a rat's ass for my opinion—"
"Shut up, Aje,"
Brandon said.
*
"Get 'em off me!"
Clawed feet and
fanged teeth. They were crawling all over him—trying to squirm in, under the
sheets—wanting to slice and bite his skin on their way to gnawing off his toes.
Nate lashed out in a panic, and somebody grabbed his arms.
"Relax, Dipshit!
They're gone!"
Aje. Nate stopped thrashing, but it wasn't so
easy to rid himself of the nightmare. He lay there, panting slightly; unaware
that he was trembling. "Just a dream," he muttered. "Sorry."
"Yep," Aje said in a
voice that was just mocking enough to be soothing, "you owe it all to Brando.
He's giving up police work to go into rat wrestling."
"Half the time that's
what I'm doing anyway. Only, the rats are a lot bigger." Brandon grinned and
relaxed his grip on Nate's other wrist. He lowered the arm with the IV back onto
the bed. "Thought they were gonna have to redo it again."
"Sorry," Nate muttered. "Caught a
whiff of Morton, and thought it was rat."
"Everyone disparages
my character—"
"It wasn't your
character I was disparaging."
Aje smirked. "That
means so much coming from a man who plays with faeces."
Brandon grinned. "Did
you do any damage this afternoon?"
"Not as much as you
did." Nate grinned. "That room was a mess."
"I meant to
yoursel-"
He was interrupted by
a knock. Nate's co-workers had arrived.
More
well-wishers arrived moments later, as Nate's friends and neighbours descended
en masse.
"They shouldn't let
so many people in," Aje complained. "He looks wiped."
"If they decide to
de-select people, I'll remind them to start with you," Brandon
whispered.
"And I'll remind them
the rats arrived about the same time you did." Just then Nate's obese supervisor
stepped crunchingly onto Aje's foot.
"Oh—sorry." The man
shifted out of Aje's way.
Aje grinned his okay,
but Brand noticed he was limping a little as he moved over against the wall.
"Anything about this remind you of this afternoon?" Aje whispered jokingly.
"Want me to open any windows?" Aje waited for Brandon's response. At his
continued silence, Aje told him, "In that case, I'll just use the door."
Brandon would
never tell Aje, but his own thoughts were running in a similar direction.
Something about all the people crowded around Nate's bed did remind him of the rats.
A magnetic
personality.
For just a second, he wondered
whether he and Aje were just two more rats in the pack.
No way, Weisner, he decided, remembering with amusement the
fat rat, lying there in open-mouthed slumber.
And I'd be damned if I'd ever
consider curling up on his bed…
Brandon gave an
involuntary snort of amusement, that made Nate's boss look at him strangely.
Probably thinks I'm telling
"fat-man-on-foot" jokes.
Brandon decided to go before any
more unfortunate comparisons sprang to mind. Still grinning, he waved to Nate,
and followed Aje out the door.
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I'm planning on venturing soon into "Contest enrolment mode". This is the
crazed frame of mind in which all formal writing is abandoned, and a furious
search is made for any word form which offers fame or money. You'll notice I
place fame first, because as a writer, I can't afford to think about money. If I
were to dwell, for even a little while, on the unpaid hours I've spent...
ARGH!
Don't go there, ND. Go instead to those competition pages, where the
promise of fame might lead to eventual fortune. Submit. Submit. Submit.
Small problem with writing competitions these days: most of them charge to
enter. They charge to pay for their prize at the end. It may be called a
"reading fee", but we all know better. You're paying for your road to
glory...
And some of the biggest competitions, with the world-renown-type outcomes,
charge outrageously.
That does limit the competition a bit - not exactly a level playing ground,
though.
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I am so sick of me and promoting me, myself, and I. Despite the multiple
pronouns, it can be a very tedious and lonely place.
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ahead!
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Excerpt: TROLLS (EPPIE Award Finalist), Chapter 3
Chapter Three
ohn Colton watched as Luke Hamilton played out his
explanation in his head. It was obvious he found it lacking.
Colton had some theories of his own. Hamilton had been picked
up in an alley, and his gun, phone, wallet, and watch were missing, but his
injuries weren’t consistent with a mugging. Besides the concussion, he’d been
badly scratched and bitten by something. The lab was still trying to make sense
of the dust and dirt particles trapped in his clothes.
It may have been a kidnapping. The Hamilton clan could
singlehandedly bankroll a small nation, and their heir apparent had just
returned to the fold. At that, Colton felt a twinge of guilt. He’d manipulated
Hamilton Senior as much as the man had manipulated him. Colton knew he’d been
acting for the good of the ISEA, but whether he’d actively considered Luke
Hamilton’s welfare was another matter.
Nor was Luke doing much talking this morning. He had an
excuse, but so far his only questions had involved Sebastian Devery. He wanted
to know whether Devery had sought medical treatment during the last twelve
hours, and the name of the admitting physician. Since Devery had neither been
seen in the Emergency Room, nor admitted to any local hospitals, Colton couldn’t
help him. On a hunch, Colton had included a photo with his inquiry, but the
results were still negative.
Luke had been insistent enough that Colton had ordered an
agent to pay Devery a visit, but there was no one home—because Devery was at
work. He’d answered his own office phone on the second ring.
After his report, Luke had refused to say any more. Other
than exchanging pleasantries, he’d just lain there silently. There was a look in
his eyes which Colton put down to amusement. He’d seen it too often over the
years, and it usually meant Luke was admiring someone else’s technique.
It also usually preceded a breakthrough on one of their
cases.
Colton nodded to him, said, "I’ll be in touch," then walked
quietly out of the room.
Sometimes, it was better just to leave a man to his
thoughts.
*
Zeb glanced at his watch—for the tenth time. He sensed
Ephron’s eyes on him again, and headed for the inoculation room. None of the
techs were doing agar pours today, and it was one place he could get some time
alone. Good excuse, and the best one, for having someone else catch the phone.
Once there, he sank onto the stool, and leaned his head
against the side of the cabinet. He would have dropped his head onto the
benchtop if the idea of bending that far hadn’t made him shudder.
He shuddered anyway, then just kept on doing it—unable to
stop.
With a shaking hand, he dug out two more aspirin and chewed
them down. Not the best way to handle it, maybe, but he knew if he tried to get
to the coffee room right now he’d never make it.
My fault. His mind kept replaying bits and pieces of
last night’s fiasco, that had culminated in Rio’s announcement that Hamilton was
government issue. All the hype over family connections, and him launching out on
a business proposition of his own was just so much talk. The gun was what had
tipped him off, but the ID had finished it. Zeb didn’t know how Mario knew, but
he’d claimed Hamilton’s affiliation with Atherton Traders was a direct link with
the ISEA—the Investigative Security and Enforcement Agency. If any of them had
had any doubts, Mario had finished them with a quick scan before they’d left the
cave. Hamilton had two transponders—one in his upper arm, and another in his
thigh. Rio had made sure they were out of operation for the time it took to get
Hamilton to his alley.
Ness had been adamant about a hospital, but they all knew
what it would mean. If they were under surveillance, and they would be as soon
as Hamilton recovered consciousness, they had to play this out—make it look as
though whatever inquiry had originally brought Luke Hamilton into this, was now
fixed in his head. Magnified, elaborated upon, and obviously confused by his
head injury. There couldn’t be anything to back him up.
Zeb gave a low groan as a stabbing pain shot through his
shoulder. He’d lost so much blood that Ness had had to transfuse him, but he
still felt as though he were walking underwater.
Underwater. He chuckled. Ness would appreciate
that...
Then, he chuckled again. It was so damn funny.
He sat, staring blankly at the wall for a minute, the loopy
grin still on his face. There was a distant whine in his ears. His vision was
blurring, doubling, beginning to overlap...
No! In a near-panic, he jumped, jolting pain through his
chest and gut. He shuddered, with fever and fear. "It" had always been triggered
by a specific location before—a cave, a river, a forest. Some location with
"vibes". Never in the lab, or any other place he frequented.
There were sensations associated with certain locations which
other people could sense as well. Haunted houses, sacred sites, forbidden
forests. He’d always wanted to consider himself a little more receptive than
they, that was all. Maybe an amplifier for what was already there. Not an
initiator.
The thought of that—of acting as anything other than a medium
for some existing spatial displacement—was terrifying. If he could initiate
contact anywhere, he’d never have any peace. He’d always be afraid that he’d be
triggered somehow.
I’d never feel safe again...
He tried to focus on his watch, but his head was aching and
his vision a blur. The digital numbers on his cellphone were larger, and he set
his alarm. A few minutes of sleep...
He’d be safer asleep than awake, if drowsy was going to send
him over the edge. He tipped his head back, against the side of the laminar flow
cabinet, and let the circulating air take some of the sweat from his face. When
he left here, he’d spend a few minutes in the lab, then head for the Men’s room.
Spent so much time in there already today, Ephron’s gonna be
wondering...
He shivered again, hating the way it tightened his aching
shoulder.
Got to hold on...to protect us all...
*
"He’s still in the Pour Room?" Ness asked impatiently.
It was the third time he’d called. Either Zeb was getting a hell of a lot of
work done, or he was passed out in there.
Or he’s not taking your calls...
Ness tuned in again, and he realised he’d blown it. His
repeated calls were about to backfire. Zeb must look bad, because now the other
guy in his lab—"Ephron", as he’d answered the phone—was going to leave him on
the line while he went to see what was taking so long.
"Don’t—!" Ness started to say, then realised he
couldn’t think of a single logical reason for Ephron not to check on a
co-worker. "No need," he babbled. "I’m meeting him for lunch, and I was trying
to convince him to make it a long one, so that I could show him this new club on
forty-second." He added brightly, "He’s probably trying to squeeze in as much as
he can so he can make it a short afternoon."
It sounded good, and Ness was priding himself on his
inventiveness, until he was greeted by Ephron’s silence. Then he recalled Zeb
mentioning his boss, Giles. Dickhead Giles, as Zeb preferred to call him, who
worked with plants because he had no people skills.
Giles Ephron.
Ness winced. No pay raise for Zeb this year...
Ephron cleared his throat, and answered brusquely, "Tell Zeb
Giles said to enjoy his lunch. Apparently, the tip’s on me."
In that moment, Ephron reminded Ness a lot of Randy. They
both tended to intersperse their conversation with growls.
*
Fifteen minutes later Ness was upstairs, looking for Zeb.
Ephron himself had cleared it with the security guard, but had merely suggested
he wait for Devery, "...the way we’ve all been waiting around for him
this morning." So, Ness had obligingly sat in the coffee room until Ephron had
left the room.
Obviously, Ephron thought he was taking Zeb somewhere sordid
for lunch. Apparently, the "club on forty-second" carried some connotations in
Ephron’s mind which Ness had never considered. The inference to Zeb’s
performance could only mean Ephron thought Zeb was on a bender last night. He
was hungover, and it was interfering with his work.
Not what Zeb might want, but he could undergo a miraculous
dry-off later. For the next few days, "hungover" would cover a lot of
sins.
Ness was still checking doors ten minutes later. Ephron had
called it the Pour Room, but that must be a nickname. Pouring what? Chemicals?
Agar?
Media.
There was a media prep room that Ness had passed earlier. He
pushed open the door. Walls of chemicals, sinks and benches, a microwave—and a
door on the far side. Ness walked quietly across and put his ear against the
door. Then, he punched in Zeb’s cellphone number.
"Greensleeves" began playing on the other side of the door,
but Zeb wasn’t answering. Ness reached for the handle, then froze.
The door was knocking; wobbling open and closed. There was a
thud and a thunk as something rammed the door, fell to the ground, then went
into motion again. The thud-thunk was interspersed with a pop-hiss.
Ness hadn’t heard that sound in over a year.
Shit!
He didn’t waste time. He punched in four for Ty’s number.
"Ho, Ty!" he said anxiously.
"Not exactly circumspect," Ty remarked.
"I’ve got a pop-hiss!" he whispered.
"Where?" Ty asked immediately.
"Zeb’s lab. Problem is, he’s in there with it," Ness said
worriedly.
Ty didn’t waste time, either. "I’m leaving now," he said.
"Find some way to get me in. If you can’t, I’ll find my own."
*
Ty was there in ten minutes, which meant he’d driven like a
maniac. Ness didn’t make any of his usual remarks about debriding festering
wounds from asphalt burns, and he didn’t even comment about Rio’s presence. He
was too busy pacing outside the door.
They’d all known it could come to this some day. They were
like a bunch of wreck divers, always after the next adventure, the next thrill,
the next piece of brass. No one blamed Zeb, though they could have. He’d been a
victim as much as any of them. Typhoid Mary to their group, spreading the
disease that had them hooked. Junkies, waiting for their next fix. It was what
Ness was thinking when Ty came through the door. Rio was at his back.
All of them pretended it was scientific, and they did their
best to catalogue each event. Truth was, they all got something out of it, but
they also knew how dangerous it was. They were playing with unknowns, as much as
any explorer who’d taken a step into a jungle. And Zeb might be the key, but he
was far from being in control.
And there wasn’t one of them who hadn’t, at one time or
another, set him up or conned him into "just one more trip". Zeb hadn’t become
what he was by choice, and of them all, he was the most susceptible to capture.
Because, when it came on him, he had an instinctive reaction. However he might
fight it, he couldn’t stop it, once it was underway. The only chance he had was
if he realised it at that first flicker. Then, he could walk. Since his reaction
seemed to be triggered by place rather than circumstance, most of the time he
didn’t have that choice. He was in the right place at the right time.
And, more often than not, one of them had brought him
there.
Randy was the worst. His books and classes were full of the
stuff he gleaned from their expeditions, and he did have an eye for detail. Shea
went on the guise of cataloguing, but she like to throw a little light on the
subject. Ty? Quantum theorist with a trigger fuse—or defuse, depending on his
"state". Plus, he liked to collect. God help them if the ISEA ever visited Ty’s
place. Like the divers who hoarded brass plates and fixings off sunken ships, Ty
had bits and pieces of hair and nail clippings and iron feathers and now, moth
dust. Mario? He was also into physics, and like to predict and plot their next
encounter. Photography was his passion—and profession—and Kirlian photography
his newest hobby. He got a charge out of it all—electrically speaking, that is.
What Ty couldn’t defuse, Rio could frequently counter. And, Ness thought,
in cases like this, Mario’s gift for countering electronic locks was
invaluable.
What about you? Ness thought guiltily.
Water. Anything water. Almost automatically, he went
over to the sink. Seeing nothing but flasks filled with questionable goo, he
stuck his head under the tap and drank heavily. Hydration was everything with
him. Then he went back outside the door and paced nervously, while Ty and Rio
squeezed inside.
"He can’t take any more blood loss," he warned to their
backs. Then, he just paced. He couldn’t help but think that without Zeb, none of
them would be like this.
Excited, unpredictable, tolerably insane, ridiculous
risktakers, both "gifted", yet reliant on each other. Dedicated to secrecy, and
to their next "trip". Friends, in the truest sense of the word, in a world where
friendship was frequently an anachronism.
Dammit! Ness fidgeted nervously.
Whatever happened now, they owed him. Because Zeb was smart,
and knew when he was being conned. Whatever risks they took, he took five times
over. None of us would be like this?
It suddenly seemed to Ness that if it weren’t for Zeb, they’d
all be nothing.
*
"...a pop-hiss."
Ness had called it. It was a "pop-hiss", all right, and one
of the worst kinds. A Hsigo. A winged monkey, but far from the cute little
spider monkeys Ty had seen in zoos. This kind had far more in common with the
spider than the monkey.
Furred, with wings that made its dexterity almost laughable.
Its squiggly legs were in constant motion, and its primate face looked downright
evil. Hsigos fed on carrion, but if there wasn’t any available, they made some.
Ness had been right, and Zeb was in real danger.
Ty glanced at him. Zeb was in real danger anyway. His face
was as white as his lab coat, and beaded with sweat. "One guess why the Hsigo
didn’t go for him," Ty whispered.
Rio nodded. "Tainted meat. I say we get him out the door to
Ness, before we do anything else."
Ty shook his head. "If It gets away—" he began.
"I’ll hold It off—"
"No!" Ty cut in sharply, pointing to some
liquid-filled containers holding forceps and needles. "Check it out. That’s
alcohol." He considered it. "Maybe you should leave, too."
"And let you blow up all by yourself? Uh-uh. And Zeb’s in no
shape to send It back."
Rio sounded almost excited, and Ty looked at him askance. "Do
I detect a bloodthirsty note?"
"Your collection extend to taxidermy?" Rio retorted.
"You’re a sick man."
"I’m not the one collecting toenails. Ooh, look," he mocked,
"a wad of mucous! Wouldn’t want to miss that!"
"Where?" Ty asked.
"And you say I’m sick." Mario thought about it for a moment,
then muttered, "I wonder how Hsigos do in the dark?"
"Fuck it, Rio! If you turn out the lights—!" Ty
squawked.
"Don’t worry," Rio assured him. He rested his hand on the
wall. "I’ll just give it a little flicker..."
"Wait! They’re fluorescent—!" Which meant they’d hum—and
buzz.
The Hsigo squawked, nearly as loudly as Ty had a moment
before. In the next second, it attacked.
*
Ness couldn’t stand it any more. He yanked at the door, just
as it was pushed open abruptly from the other side. He was rammed back, into the
lab bench.
It had been a loud one, and Ness figured the only reason they
hadn’t been caught out owed something to the lunch exodus, and the rest to the
radio playing in the next room. Music to grow fungus by...
Or something.
Ty was standing there, a yellow plastic bag clasped in his
hand. The bag was marked biological hazard, and was still smoking, but Ness knew
better than to ask. Mario’s hair was standing on end, and he looked a little the
worse for wear. Both his and Ty’s clothes were slightly singed.
As was Zeb’s lab coat. Ness took one look at him and with a
sweep of his arm, cleared the paraphernalia off the lab bench. "Up here!" he
ordered. He stripped off the lab coat and pulled back Zeb’s shirt, to check the
dressings. They smelled foul, and Ness felt a sinking in his gut. "How fast can
you get us to the hospital?" he asked Ty quietly.
"Eight minutes," Ty told him. This was Ness, who was always
complaining about the unfortunate likelihood of one day having to extricate Ty’s
bent body from his steering column. Ty’s eyes met Mario’s, and saw his own
concern mirrored there.
Ness nodded. "Let’s do it," he said.
*
Luke looked up as John Colton came into the room. Colton
slapped a folder onto the bed and commented, "Lab says they’ve never seen
anything like it before." He sat down in the chair. "Traces of it in your
clothes, and on your skin. They’re trying to break it down further."
"You want to know where I was."
Colton mused, "There were a few traces in the alley—a
surprising amount of it on the roof. Tracking says you were out of touch between
2113 and 2351 hours." He opened the folder to a map printout. "2113 here," he
said, pointing to what Luke recognised as the cave entrance, "and 2351 here, in
the alley. Miracles do occur," he said dryly. "You just suddenly reappeared,
only moments before the ambulance did."
Luke gave him a lopsided smile. "Did you check out the
cave?"
"Luminescent traces in the entry. No sign further in. Some of
your ‘dust’ scattered here and there. That the source?"
"Not exactly."
A flicker of impatience creased Colton’s brow.
Luke wouldn’t let Colton rush him. He said seriously, "I’ve
got some gleaning to do. I can’t tell it the way I remember it."
Colton told him, just as seriously, "I’ll send Matrisson in
later."
Luke managed to hide his irritation, but it wasn’t easy.
Matrisson was a psychiatrist.
Colton went on, "It’ll be his job to do the
‘gleaning’."
If Luke were to tell Matrisson the unabridged version, the
only kind of medical release he’d get would be to permanent disability,
especially if Matrisson realised how much of the episode Luke considered "real".
As Colton was leaving, he said more kindly, "Think of it this
way, Luke: it’ll give us somewhere to start."
*
The haves and have nots.
Again, Colton felt that surge of irritation at the requisite
connection with Hamilton Industries. James Hamilton was flexing his muscles, if
the document on his desk was any indication. Hamilton was objecting to the
latest government inquiry into his company’s research practices, and he actually
expected the ISEA to pull the plug on it. To "...circumvent the staid and
outdated political policies..." and "...embrace molecular technology,
with all its enormous potential." It went on to point out areas where
nanotechnology might give the ISEA the edge in weapons research, and remind them
how much Quantum Ethics (Hamilton’s quantum physics research branch) had already
contributed to the development of new construction materials. There was also a
reference to QE’s "donations" to the ISEA: their contribution to the
counterterrorist effort.
Colton sighed, then flung the file down on his desk,
disgusted. The entire document was open to misinterpretation, and one of those
"misguided bureaucrats" whom Hamilton had mentioned could well interpret it as
evidence of collusion, bribery, and internal corruption. The time to refute it
would be now, with an equally carefully-worded rebuttal. It wouldn’t put him or
his department entirely in the clear, but it might at least negate some
potential charges.
If he did as Hamilton had suggested—object, on his behalf, to
the government investigation—he’d be digging himself a hole. If he did nothing,
the newly-established cooperative network between Hamilton Industries and the
ISEA would probably show up on an inquiry anyway, and he’d still be in a hole.
It was what James Hamilton was counting on: that John Colton would act to save
his ass.
And, in doing so, would seal the deal.
Luke Hamilton was acting as a facilitator, whether he
realised it or not. Luke’s work with the ISEA had made him invaluable to his
father. Whatever he might lack as a son, he possessed in connections. James
Hamilton intended to take full advantage of them.
Colton suspected Hamilton was also in need of his "heir
apparent". Some of his deals required a degree of continuity, and only so much
trust and loyalty could be purchased. The remainder had to be earned. Whether or
not Luke agreed with everything Hamilton did, the familial bond would buy a
certain amount of commitment.
Colton pulled out the other folder—the one on Luke. He’d been
a valued agent for many years, but John had known for the last five that it
would probably come to this. He’d been preparing for that eventuality, and it
was no accident Luke’s ISEA work had links which would be of interest to his
father.
Things James Hamilton would want to use.
Again, John Colton felt a twinge of guilt. He was using Luke
to make inroads as much as James Hamilton was using his son to cement a
formidable business and legal connection. It was Luke who was being caught in
the middle, and he’d already begun to figure it out. Eventually, there’d be a
test of loyalties, but Luke was smart enough to jump off a sinking
ship...
I hope.
The most recent step in Colton’s long-waged campaign to punch
through Hamilton’s fortress walls had been what seemed like a relatively easy
assignment to Luke Hamilton: that of tracing some unusual activity which was
producing bizarre magnetic signatures on their satellite pictures. Preliminary
investigation had turned up equally bizarre traces of unrecognisable
compounds—among them crystals which held remarkable potential for the microchip
industry. Colton had hinted at weapons research, and suggested some new
development in quantum physics might be responsible for these anomalous
compounds—some rearrangement of molecular structure like the "Bucky Ball".
Luke Hamilton was enough his father’s son to show an interest
right away.
And John Colton had known James Hamilton, with his recently
reawakened interest in his son, wouldn’t be far behind. Especially since most of
the anomalies were on newly-purchased Quantum Ethics’ land. Colton didn’t know
whether QE was the source of the anomalies, or whether they also considered them
of sufficient interest to pursue. Whatever the reason, James Hamilton would no
doubt suspect that John Colton had tossed him a bone.
"The tie that binds..."
Not only was his son involved in the "case", but it was one
which could directly benefit Hamilton Industries, and any of its
"partners".
Luke would already realise there were Hamilton holdings in
this area, but the file he’d studied had omitted the connection between his
father’s company, and the anomalies. Colton had consoled his conscience with a
reminder that the land purchases were of recent origin. The files Luke had in
his possession were only a year old. He’d have no reason to suspect the land had
changed hands since then. After all, the anomalies had been on record for at
least two years.
Luke would have no reason to suspect he was actually working
for his father.
It was a tricky situation. John Colton was counting on Luke’s
loyalty to the ISEA, in order to hang Hamilton Industries. But if Luke were to
discover how Colton was using him, his loyalties would be torn.
And the last thing Colton wanted right now was for Luke to
walk away from them all.
*
Luke was standing at the window, staring a little blankly out
at the long shadows of late afternoon. Matrisson would be here before five,
which meant he didn’t have much time to develop a coherent story. For a moment
he was tempted to blurt all, and leave it for Matrisson to sort out, as Colton
had suggested. But something was holding him back. Something besides
self-interest.
It wasn’t guilt. He’d done the right thing: hinted at
Devery’s involvement, and inquired after his whereabouts. Colton had taken it
from there. But, either Devery was not as seriously injured as he’d seemed, or,
Luke thought, one hand pressed to his forehead, Zeb Devery was made of sterner
stuff than one Luke Hamilton. Apparently, Devery was back at work while he was
lounging around on paid leave.
Luke stumbled over and sat on the edge of his bed. He’d been
feeling so much better this morning that the headache had become more background
noise than the pulsing vice-grip it had been before. In the last hour or so,
though, the ache had returned, and brought with it a weird buzzing in his ears.
He didn’t know what was going on, but he guessed the bruises from his run-in
with the moth were finally catching up with him. Every scrape, every damn place
the moth’s wings had touched was stinging now, and his lungs felt full of the
lousy dust. His chest was hurting nearly as bad as his head.
He stared a little dully at the wall. Outside his room he
could see someone leaning against the wall—probably Brian Kirkegaard. Someone
else was coming now and his guard straightened up.
Must be Matrisson, he thought. He watched blearily as
the man entered, and his eyes widened at the core of heat emanating from the
man’s head and heart. His own heart started to pound, and he felt it thunder in
his head. "Saw you coming," he gasped in disbelief. He had a sudden vision of
the woman’s light show, bony legs dancing on his belly, and giant moths passing
through walls. "No!" he whispered.
Not me!
What the hell had they done to him?
Luke glanced at the wall, but found no reassurance there. The
hot water pipes were glowing red blurs and the wires were doing a fine-line
electrical dance. Beyond the wall, someone strolled past Kirkegaard and on up
the hall.
Luke panicked. It was one thing being among freaks, and quite
another being one yourself. Whatever they’d done to him, they’d better take it
back. He gripped the front of Matrisson’s jacket in his fist. "Make ’em take it
back!" he yelled. At least, he’d intended to yell it. It actually came out more
like a wheeze.
Matrisson was yelling now, too, but Luke could barely hear
him. He was dimly aware that Kirkegaard was on his other side, and Matrisson was
shoving an oxygen mask over his face. "Don’t need it," Luke tried to say, but
apparently, Matrisson didn’t agree.
By the time they’d replaced his IV, tubed him, and wheeled
him to ICU, Luke wasn’t in any shape to say anything.
*
Randy walked cautiously down the hospital corridor, then
veered off, at Zeb’s room. Silently, he pushed open the door and peered inside.
Ness was absorbed in reading Zeb’s chart, and oblivious to Randy’s arrival.
Randy couldn’t resist. He moved just as quietly across the
floor, then tapped Ness roughly on the shoulder.
The chart went flying, and all the bits and pieces—lab
results, referrals, comments, nurses’ notes—splayed across the floor. "You dumb
fuck!" Ness hissed, looking angrier than Randy had ever seen him. Randy smirked,
but hid it behind shuffling up the papers.
Ness was still angry. He began to pace. "Damn it all to hell,
Markington!" He stomped over to the sink and poured himself a glass of water.
Then another. As he gulped them down, he said something that sounded
suspiciously like a gargled "Never again."
"Any of your doctor friends ever ask why you drink so
much?"
Ness put his hands under the tap, then splashed water over
his face and neck. "If they knew you, they’d probably ask why I don’t drink
something stronger."
"No, seriously."
"I was being serious," Ness said.
"All I get are insults. And here, I brought you something."
Randy reached in his jacket pocket, pulled out a bottle of Perrier, and tossed
it his way. "Peace offering," he said, grinning.
Ness unscrewed the sipper and took a long gulp. A look of
bliss came over his face. "Thanks," he said. "But you’re still a dumb
fuck."
"So Shea says."
"Please, no details. I’ve been stuck in here for the last
forty-eight hours."
"Why?" Randy went over to the bed. He looked down at Zeb
worriedly. "I thought you said he was better!" The last came out with an angry
growl.
"He is, but he has to stay on the zanthogliomycin for at
least another twenty-four hours. It’s the only one that’s worked."
"So?"
"So, it’s setting him off. Whenever he dreams, things start
popping through the walls. Did you hear about the Hsigo at the lab?"
Randy grinned. "Yeah. Even saw it. Ty has it in his
freezer."
Ness looked long-suffering. "That was just the beginning. I
managed to shoo ’em back, but last night I had Gueranas in the room. It stunk
like hell."
Randy’s grin faded. "How’d you get them out of here?" He
sniffed the air. A trace, maybe, but that was all.
"Chased them back through." At the question in Randy’s eyes,
Ness shrugged. "Long dream."
Randy looked puzzled. "Not his usual locale, either."
Ness ran a nervous hand through his hair. "And he’s always
had to work at it before." Usually, Zeb’s efforts left him sweaty and
bleary-eyed.
"The lab was before the zanthoglio stuff," Randy pointed
out.
"Tell me something I don’t know," Ness said sarcastically.
"I’m putting that one down to fever."
Randy brightened. "Maybe they’re all fever. Maybe that’s the
trigger."
Ness shrugged. "Maybe. I think I’d rather believe we’re
seeing a drug reaction. He was on an antibiotic at the lab—just a
different one."
"He’s doing better, right?"
Ness nodded. "Yeah," he said, with a trace of relief.
"He’s not in any danger? No one’s been in asking
questions?"
"Nope."
Randy looked impatient. "Then what’re you so worried about?"
Ness appeared both exhausted—and wilted. Randy guessed he was dehydrated. If he
went down it’d be no joke—especially given their surroundings. "You remind me of
a jellyfish stuck on the beach. You know how floppy those things get?"
"Shut up—"
But Randy was already shoving him toward the door. "Go home,
drink some water, and have a swim."
Ness’ eyes brightened. He reached for the door handle, then
turned back. "What if—?" he began.
"—some of Zeb’s visitors come calling through the wall? Think
I can’t handle it?" Randy’s chuckle ended in a low howl. "Think again."
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I'm sitting here eating an apple with a big grin on my face. Last night, I
finished BoneSong!!! My 24th novel! Ecstatic doesn't begin to describe the
feeling...
It's been really difficult to keep up my enthusiasm lately. All writers have
down time, when you worry whether you're ever going to become a household name.
Whether your books will ever have a chance of being found in every library, and
every bookstore. For most of us, it's never going to happen.
Novice writers, and non-writers, generally have the wrong idea. They believe
that publication is everything! When you begin writing a novel, you never
realise that you're signing on to be a website designer, publicist, salesperson
- and many times - agent. The reality in today's world of independent publishers
is no money upfront, and minor moneys quarterly. Promotion is generally totally
via the Net, your book is one of thousands on Amazon, and availability does not
equate to sales. Good reviews and contest placements make little difference. If
you do get your book into a real bookstore, and your publisher isn't willing to
pay $10,000, to have your book in a front display, you'll be lucky if anyone
sees it.
An author who was published by one of my former publishers once said she
could count on 250 sales from family and friends. She wanted the publisher to
tell her where she should go from there, to make sales. Frankly, I wondered what
planet she came from! 250 sales??? Most of the time, my friends want to read my
books for free, and I haven't the heart to ask these financially tapped-out
creatures to buy a book. In fact, most relations/friends actually feel hurt if I
hint at such a thing. The reality (painful, yes), is that many of our publishers
don't offer us free copies - they make us buy them. My first publisher made us
buy 25 at a time, if we wanted any kind of discount! Needless to say, I didn't
see my first print books for years! I finally found them at a library, and stood
there goggling. It was an incredible moment, to hold my print books in hand!
Wonderful!
I suppose writing novels can be compared to purchasing a lotto ticket. During
that time your book is under consideration by a publisher, or out there,
awaiting sales, you have the potential for being a winner. The dream is alive
and well, and hope is ever-present. It is only times like this, when I'm tired
and slightly burnt-out, from finishing a book, that I question what I'm
doing.
Instead, I suppose, I should be grateful. I'm 18x published, and the people
who read my work, generally enjoy it.
And I have enough hope, and enough projects ahead, to keep going. I suppose,
if it comes down to it, I'm a writing junkie, with the next fix just around the
corner.
Tomorrow, in fact.
Talk to you soon.
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(Gilded Folly)
Oh, below is an excerpt (chapter two) from Trolls - to celebrate completion
of book#24!
Chapter Two
R andy slammed his fist
against the sofa back. "Dammit, Shea!" he complained.
"Keep your ‘dammits’ to yourself, Markington!" she said
impatiently. "You’re the one who wanted geological strata. I’ll have the
readouts in less than a minute." She muttered, "Though it’d’ve be better, in my
opinion, if you’d considered the water table instead."
"Always a whinger," Randy retorted. He knew how much it
irritated her. "You know how people relate their well-being to crystals—"
"New Age stupidity," she put in.
"—and how frequently peasant superstitions have been backed up
by—"
"— superstitious stupidity. Save
the lecture for your class, Randy. Zeb’s out there in the dark."
Randy’s voice rose. "And whose fault is that? I
ask for a readout, and she gives me the Periodic Table." He added sarcastically,
"Or maybe it’s the Richter Scale, A to Z." He considered that for a moment. "Any
unusual tremors in that area? Might give us an idea of—"
"Randy—" she cut in.
He raised an eyebrow.
"Shut up!" Without another word, she tugged the paper out of
the printer and headed for the door, Randy at her back. She reached for the knob
with one hand, and tossed Randy a pack of gum with the other.
But when she opened her mouth to say something further, Randy
beat her to it. He smiled with saccharine sweetness, then pulled a pair of
sunglasses out of his pocket. "I’m all ready for you." She barely heard his
added, "Even if you ain’t too bright." She was
grinning as she slid behind the wheel.
*
It wasn’t until he was already inside that he remembered the
snake he’d seen that afternoon. At the time he’d been "distracted". He had a
jumbled memory of wriggling reptile, inhaled dust, ancient lamps, and broken
bones—the present overlapping with the past.
At this moment, the most important part of his present was a
beady-eyed scaly slitherer with a forked tongue. That damned rattlesnake wasn’t
the kind of animal he’d come looking for.
He shone the light lingeringly into the dark recesses along his
way, and then, more cautiously, under the jumbled rocks. A glint of eye
refraction, and a slithering movement made him jump. He scrambled backwards,
toppled onto his rear, realised it made him more vulnerable, and leaped, fell
and rolled down the passageway.
He was still on his knees when the tremulous warble whispered
in the distance. As his flashlight spun and settled, its light painting shuddery
etchings across the uneven surface, the whistle grew in intensity. Zeb cocked
his head to listen, then crawled quickly along—forgetting all his resolutions
about waiting for the others.
Forgetting everything except The Whistler, and his need to get
there—before the music stopped.
*
Randy’s stomach sank as soon as he spotted Zeb’s car. "He’s
inside."
"Who’s that?" Shea was looking at a sleek sportscar, parked
just beyond Zeb’s.
Randy climbed out, and sniffed the air. "My business partner,"
he said. "Too curious for his own good."
"Is he inside with Zeb?"
"More or less."
She sighed. "So Zeb doesn’t know he’s there," she said.
Randy nodded. "That’s what I think."
" I think we better get to them
first. If we don’t, Zeb will’ve—"
"—started without us."
She turned to him a little desperately. "Did you bring a
flashlight?"
"No. Why would I?" he retorted, with a trace of sarcasm.
"Dammit."
"I’ll be careful," she promised, but there was that same hint
of excitement in her voice that had been in Zeb’s earlier.
"When are you two going to learn some restraint?" he
hissed.
"About the same time you and Ness do," she replied.
"I should have called Rio," Randy said worriedly.
"Think we’re gonna need him?" she asked seriously.
"He’s good at diffusing things."
"I notice you didn’t mention Ty. There’s restraint for you!"
she hissed.
"I prefer my stalactites on the ceiling, rather than sticking
out of my head—" he began.
They were at the cave entrance. Abruptly, she turned around,
grasped the front of his shirt and yanked him down for a giant kiss.
Tradition. "I love you," she whispered. The air around them
shimmered with a sudden frosty glint that brightened the stirred-up dust to
blinding sparkles.
He ran his hands over her, then sniffed longingly at her nape
and hair. "I know," he replied. He inhaled deeply, then coughed on the dust.
"Damn!" He coughed again, but this time, it sounded more like a growl.
She heard it. "Sly, aren’t we?" she muttered as he took over
the lead.
He chuckled, as he stared at the refracted sheen of crystals
along the roof. No doubt Luke would have a question or two about the source of
light. He shook his head and tightened his grip on her hand. "Absolutely
devious," he said.
*
Luke couldn’t figure out how Devery was doing it—or why. There
didn’t seem to be any point to the man’s movements—yet they were made with a
kind of desperate urgency. He was crawling, scrambling, and at times practically
running between the rocky layers.
At first Luke had thought he was aware of being pursued, and
that it had sent him into some kind of panic. Now, he’d decided the man was
largely oblivious to anything but his goal. He hadn’t slowed, nor had his speed
picked up when Luke had yelled his name.
Maybe he’s wearing a Discman?
Can’t hear a thing over his "sounds"?
Or maybe he just wants to throw me off his track—to lead me
away from what he’s really after.
From whatever he’d found in the
cave that afternoon. Happy accident, or had Markington’s bumbling concern led to
some secret cache? That Devery didn’t want anyone to know about?
There was another possibility: this may have been Markington’s
way of admitting some healthy competition. Maybe Devery was getting too greedy,
or too dictatorial. Maybe Markington felt the only way to protect his share was
to admit someone else to the mix.
What else were they hiding? This wasn’t Luke’s first pursuit,
but it was certainly his strangest. He’d been trained in lipreading, and the
conversation this afternoon hadn’t been difficult to interpret. There was
something here, and instinct told him it must tie in to his investigation. But,
now that he was God-knows-how-many feet under the ground, he knew he’d made a
mistake. He’d followed Devery too soon. Now, he could well have Markington on
his tail. Luke’s "divide and conquer" approach was beginning to feel more
foolish all the time.
But, he couldn’t forget his discomfort, when confronted by them
both. Markington had changed from "bumbling" to "dexterous" in the blink of an
eye. As much as Luke wanted to catch them in the act, he had very definite
qualms about confronting them together in a place like this. He had no desire to
make this his burial ground.
He had a choice: follow Devery further, and literally drive him
underground—or get out, before Markington turned up.
Get out...
He’d never liked caves, even if
this one was worth investigating. Catching Devery in the act suddenly didn’t
seem nearly as important as catching a breath of fresh air. He’d find a way to
track Devery’s path tomorrow, with a team for back-up.
Now, the big thing was to retrace his steps, before Markington
wiped out his trail. Luke slipped on the glasses and stared at the infrared
markings. A bright red beacon to
the exit...
He’d taken only a few steps when
the weirdly screeching screams sounded in his ears.
*
Zeb slammed his hands over his ears, then stood shaking. He was
drenched with sweat, weak and nauseated.
Displacement. The rock beneath
his feet was wobbly, and his eyes were seeing two places at once, both dressed
in shimmers of glimmery blue light. The scenes, so distinct in everything from
time of day to climate, were overlapping, and in those moments, he couldn’t
decide which was which, or where he belonged. As always, he was terrified at his
own confusion, but experience had taught him there was only one way to resolve
it. He forced his focus to narrow. Like a horse with blinders, he looked
straight ahead, ignoring the scene playing out beyond.
Nothing but rock. Coarse rock, of white limestone with
crystalline intrusions, weird fans and pointed stalactites, swirls and bubbles
and irregular holes. Rock with light and shadow; pools of unseen depths lying
just beyond the reach of his flashlight. It was all a puzzle, a maze.
He could hear them now. The crunch and tap of claws on rock.
Almost automatically, it seemed, his eyes sought the scrabbling creatures his
ears had promised.
They were small and unbelievably wary. At first, they were
indecipherable from the limestone, but he knew it was like a Magic Eye puzzle,
where a 3D image is hidden in plain sight. As Zeb’s eyes rested on the rock
surface, his vision blurred and his focus changed. The features—faces, feet,
claws—were suddenly there.
Now you see it, now you
don’t...
The wee things surfaced, arising
out of the blue-tainted rocky molecules, just as, at other times, in other
places, they sometimes lifted out of water or wood. Arising, taking shape,
becoming distinct, like multicoloured patches lifting from an irregular quilt.
Only a mirage, until they formed shadows.
Until they began to move. These were sparsely-haired, with
huge, saucerlike eyes, long beaked noses, and spindly arms. The arms were
gesturing wildly now, in his direction. Not angry, and not curious.
Frightened.
Uh-oh.
He had to make this quick. At any
moment they could scatter. And if he didn’t record what he was seeing, Randy
would never forgive him.
I should have
waited...
But he couldn’t, and Randy would
understand. His resistance this afternoon had been a first.
Maybe it fooled Randy as much
as it did me.
Which is why he’s taking
so damn long to get here... The
ignoble thought made Zeb feel like a prick. And it didn’t help—he still felt
guilty. He’d been too impatient, and hadn’t bothered to wait. There was no
getting around it: Randy would have wanted to see these beasties himself; to put
a name to them. Something to drop into a lecture, with a lively description that
would capture his students’ imaginations. The kind of legendary invention that
had earned Randy his reputation—and an overload of students.
Zeb smiled. And if by some chance these gnome-types were
unidentified—unknowns, by folktale standards—Shea would have wanted to list
their characteristics, and enter them in her database.
The least Zeb Devery could do was capture them on film. He
pulled the camcorder out of his pack, but each little movement seemed to set the
gnome-types off. They were skittish, uneasy, and something in their fearful
energies transferred itself to him. The click and scrape of their nails seemed
unnaturally loud, and he noticed the way they were peering around; those big
eyes squinting in the brightness of his flashlight. He watched as three
separated themselves from the others, and crawled, batlike, up the steep walls:
their bony limbs jutting at awkward angles as they clung to the rock face. They
were staring at the pooling greys and blacks, beyond the reach of Zeb’s
light—ears perked at an angle towards something he couldn’t hear.
A sibilant whisper cut the air, and gooseflesh danced down
Zeb’s arms. The gnomes were suddenly frozen in place, like barnacles to a rock.
Zeb realised the only thing still in motion in the cavern...was him.
Maybe
not. The sibilant sound came again,
and Zeb could have sworn it was closer.
They hadn’t come alone. There was a predator lurking—something
he hadn’t seen.
It wouldn’t be the first time. When the damned whistle came, it
set Zeb off—and he was out of control. Driven. The need to follow it through
became a compelling force, and he couldn’t let go. They all knew it—Randy, Shea,
Ty, Rio, Ness—so they mounted expeditions now, to document and catalogue. They’d
left the wild, slack, dive-in-with-the-sharks stuff behind. They let Zeb chum
the waters, but nobody went for a swim. They’d had too many injuries in the
early days, with too many unexplainable repercussions.
This afternoon was a first, and it had fooled them all. Zeb had
thought, for once, that he was doing things on his own terms. But it was no
different from before. He should have realised that once he’d been touched by
the whistle, he’d never be able to walk away. Not without seeing it
through...
He flushed. It had been years since he’d acted this
irresponsibly. He knew better than to go it alone.
Dammit if he hadn’t blown it again...
The background sibilance echoed briefly, then suddenly rose, to
a low-pitched, reverberating hum. It was all the gnomes needed. In a panic, they
dove off walls and leapt, in a scurryingly awkward frenzy, across the rocks.
Their screeching cries filled the cavern.
Send them back! Send them all
back!
Zeb fought to concentrate. He focussed on the rock wall;
focussed on that particular zone of deafness where the only sound was a
peculiarly sweet whistle...
He was nearly there. The displacement, the confusion, the
overlapping frames of movement...
He might be deaf, but he wasn’t blind. If anything, he was
seeing too much right now—on too many levels.
Something was coming at him. The hair lifted on the nape of his
neck, and his heart pounded with terror. His legs twitched with the need to
flee.
Sweat broke on his brow, but he stood his ground.
Overlap it with that other vision...the one that would lure it
away—that would make It as driven as he’d been moments since.
He had it. The wings fluttered irregularly as the predator
turned. The beast was so close he could feel the wind ruffle his hair—could
smell the rancid breath of the carnivore...
He’d done it, and the knot in his gut loosened. It was heading
back towards the rock face, and it was being chased by its small gnome-prey. For
an instant, Zeb felt a qualm of dismay. The gnomes, drawn just as the hunter
was, were unable to stop themselves. They’d be walking right into the predator’s
mouth—returning to certain death...
*
Luke ran. He’d never heard anything like it before, but he knew
it wasn’t bats. Some kind of animal, maybe, but he couldn’t take a chance. If it
was a human animal, the guy was in terrible pain.
He nearly outran his light, and twice he stumbled, and nearly
fell. By the time he made his way to Zeb’s hiding place, he was panting and
furious.
And more than a little sure he was being played for a fool.
*
A beam of light suddenly burst into the cavern—and right into
Zeb’s eyes. He lost it all—his vision, his qualms, his equilibrium, his focus.
His hearing was back—he knew, because an angry voice bellowed his name.
That’s not what he was listening for, though. There was
another, underlying wash of sound as a soft sibilance gave way to a vibrating
hum. The next moment it was all clouds of choking dust and gnashing teeth, yells
and screeching cries, skittering bony legs and arms, and yelps of human
disbelief. A heavy body slammed Zeb back, into the rock, and jagged claws pinned
him there. He opened his eyes, as unbelievably jagged teeth came down.
Tearing teeth...
He gagged at the stink of ordure,
kicked and squirmed, but the thing was sucking up its victory now, and draining
him dry.
Wizened Devery husk littering
the cave floor...
In the background there was a
furious howl.
It was the last thing Zeb remembered.
*
Jesus H. Christ!
He couldn’t take it in—couldn’t
assimilate the scene. All his training, all the scenarios, all the crime scenes,
all the test runs: nothing could have prepared him for this. In those other
times, those other places, there’d been evil, and premeditated wickedness,
passionate blood and butchery, and dispassionate termination. Dispatchers and
dispatched, killers, victims and would-be homicides, depravity and cold-blooded
amorality...but at least the
fuckin’ predators were human!
And then, he couldn’t think any
more. His world became a scrambling, screeching mass of bony arms and legs as
the gnomes latched on and climbed him like an overgrown stalagmite. They were
panicked and tiny, but in sheer numbers, their weight far surpassed his own.
Luke tried to shake them off but they clung to him, as they’d clung to the rock
only moments before. Clung to him and froze. His world was suddenly a place of
beak-nosed bald monsters with acetone breath and terror in saucer-shaped eyes.
In slow motion, Luke and his weighty burden toppled—landing in
a crunch of rock and squirming bodies. At the same moment, his gun went off,
resonating the roof with a horrendous blast. The gnomes—the ones that could,
anyway—that weren’t crunched beneath him—scattered. Luke was left lying there,
with the stink of gunfire strong in his nose.
A shudder of movement fixed his eyes on Sebastian Devery. The
man was still squirming weakly, but there was no way he was fighting his
adversary off alone. The monster— th-the Thing—had him pinned.
Luke knew he would never look at moths the same way again. This
one was enormous, with a heavy body, dusky brown wings that twitched
continuously, and enormous antennae. It had clawed feet, and a siphon tongue,
that was sucking the life out of the man—Luke was close enough to see the dark
pulsing through the tongue. As it fed, the antennae uncurled, then coiled up
again with each gulp. Luke had a sudden urge to gag.
He rolled over on to his stomach, and pushed himself up on his
knees. Devery wasn’t going to last long. He lurched to his feet.
It was the stuff of nightmares, but it wasn’t the first time
he’d tackled a killer. Don’t
think...
As he dove for one of those
enormous, jagged brown wings, he heard a horrible howl at his back.
Oh, shit!
Then it was all wing dust and
flapping and scraping, claws and slamming rock. He sucked in wheezing breaths,
of mingled moth dust and earthy air, but he hung on. The overgrown moth was
squirming and giving out some kind of shrill whistle, and the tongue was curling
over the thing’s head and trying to poke at his eyes now.
Luke was flopped from side to side. It was deliberately trying
to scrape him against the stalactites, he realised, and he froze. He’d never
expected it to be smart—never expected it to have more than a moth’s reasoning
power. The idea of a monster with a brain was so much worse than an animal
acting merely on instinct.
It’s not real, Hamilton. None
of this is real. You hit a pocket of bad air, or had one too many run-ins with
rock.
The moth whipped him around so fast, that he could barely cling
to the wings. Apparently, those clawed feet were a lot more manoeuvrable than he
would have ever guessed. It was trying to break him off now, in any way it
could.
Luke’s head whammed against the rock, and his world went
momentarily black. When he opened his eyes it was to a whirr of motion as a
man—Luke could swear it was Markington—hit the moth with a blow that send dust
and blood flying everywhere.
Luke lay there, staring a little blankly at the scene, as
Markington picked up the moth as though it weighed nothing, and flung it,
Frisbee-like, across the cavern.
Not
real, Luke thought distantly. He
pushed himself up on one elbow, and sought Devery’s body.
There was a woman with him, and they were surrounded by light.
Through aching eyes, Luke surveyed the rest of the room, and he wondered that he
hadn’t noticed the radiance before. If someone had brought in some fluorescents,
it wouldn’t have been any brighter.
The woman must have heard him, because she looked up, and met
his eyes across the distance. Luke could swear hers were glowing.
Hell of a dream
I’m having, he thought, stumbling to
his feet.
The world seemed to tilt and he latched onto a stalactite for
balance.
"Hold it, Hamilton," a voice said.
"Markington?" Luke muttered.
"The same. Sit down while I look at Zeb..."
Luke leaned against the rock. "Go—" he whispered, relieved. His
brain was assessing what he’d seen; putting it in terms John Colton could
accept. "...into rare
animals—maybe endangered exports. Some kind of bat, and a big
moth..." Smuggling endangered animals
was big money, but it also carried big fines.
The cave had developed a wobbliness he hadn’t noticed before.
He squinted against the pain in his head, and had a sudden feeling someone was
watching him. He turned, to find himself face-to-face with one of the little
"bats". Its eyes were squinted, too, but against the light.
It was squatting against the wall like the bat he’d claimed it
to be, but there was nothing batlike about its toothy grin. "Zshaylok," it said,
in a screechy voice.
"Aren’t you going to say hello?" came Markington’s sarcastic
voice, from the background.
It’s real.
Luke shuddered, and then suddenly,
he was sick, and the little bat shrieked and scuttled away across the rock. Luke
knew he was going down, and put out a hand to break his fall.
"Gotcha!" a voice growled near his ear, and there was a trace
of humour in it Luke couldn’t miss. "Damned ‘business partners’ are more trouble
than they’re worth."
*
"Zeb!"
Shea.
Zeb gave a weak grin. "Head tow’rd
th’ light?" he whispered.
"Not if I get there first."
Randy.
Zeb forced open his eyes. "Glad
you c’d make it."
"If that’s a comment on my dilatory arrival, save it." Despite
the sarcastic note, Randy sounded worried. "You really did it this time, Zeb."
He was applying pressure to Zeb’s shoulder, while Shea applied a makeshift
bandage. "If you were gonna run into a Mahr, you could have waited till we got
here."
Shea shook her head. "The med kit."
"If there’s no stopper," Randy told her softly, "get some
cobwebs—" The fear in his eyes belied the calmness of his voice.
Shea forced a smile, for Zeb’s sake. "Ness’ll have your hide
for this one, Zeb."
Randy asked her worriedly, "Can you find the way out?"
Shea’s eyes flicked to Luke and back, her expression grim.
" Somebody left a trail," she said.
"Don’t look at me," Zeb muttered.
"We all know what kind of trails you leave," Randy remarked,
sniffing distastefully.
"Slurs...s’all I get."
Shea grinned. Her wave was a sudden sparkling of light. The
next instant she was gone, racing back the way they’d come.
"Oww!" Zeb grunted to Randy. "Not so hard." It felt like he was
trying to push his shoulder through the rock.
"Wuss." But, Randy didn’t release the pressure. The Mahr must
have had an anticoagulant in its saliva, and Zeb was still bleeding heavily.
Randy’s hands were shaking, but it wouldn’t do for Zeb to know it. Luckily, the
cavern was dark now that Shea had left.
Except for the dull glimmer of Zeb’s blood. Randy had seen it
before, but it never failed to shock him anew.
"Where’s the Mahr?" A detached voice arose out of the
blackness.
"Uh-oh," Zeb whispered.
"Yes, you’re right," Randy told him calmly. "We’re
screwed."
"It’s dark in here," came the voice again.
"Observant, isn’t he?" Zeb whispered. "So astute."
Randy grinned, then said loudly, "The light will be back
shortly. Don’t move, Luke, before you damage yourself more. That was one hell of
a fall you took."
"Slick," Zeb hissed. "I’m impressed."
"How’s Devery?" Luke asked.
"Devery’s fine," Zeb replied, "considering you knocked me down
that hole." He grinned.
A
cover-up. They were actually going to
try to cover this up. Luke gave a snort of muffled laughter, then grunted as yet
another bony leg kneed him in the side. He thought about what John Colton would
say, if he could see him now, and gave another amused chuckle. Then, he just
coudn’t stop. He snorted, chuckled, grunted, "oww"ed, and laughed. It hurt like
hell, and he didn’t know which was making his eyes weep more, his hilarity or
the pain.
"What’s with him?" Randy asked disparagingly. Dammit if he’d
let Zeb bleed to death while he found out.
Zeb couldn’t take it. With trembling fingers, he fished the
lighter out of his pocket and flicked it.
Luke Hamilton was surrounded—piled high with gnomes, who’d
decided he was synonymous with safety. He was an island of bony arms and legs in
a sea of rock.
"Dammit," Randy sighed. "Nunus."
Luke’s head was still spinning, and he would forever blame his
next comment on his giddiness. "That’s Nunus to me," he said.
*
"I’ve got to send them back," Zeb said grimly.
"Damn right you do, but not till Ness gets here." Randy knew it
was a mistake, as soon as he’d said it.
"No!" Zeb gritted his teeth and tried to shove Randy away. "Get
off!"
"Nope." He tightened his grip. "You’re so fuckin’
prejudiced!"
If he’d hoped to get results with that one he was disappointed.
It was true that Zeb hated doctors—had a phobia about them almost as bad as his
fear of rattlesnakes. It didn’t help that Ness was one of his best friends. They
got along because neither of them mentioned it. The times Ness had been called
upon to patch up other members of their expeditions, Zeb had always made himself
scarce. "Is that what Shea’s doing? Waiting for Ness?"
"Quit squirming. We need Ness for dumbshit there—"
"Good! Haul him out to the entry, so I don’t have to watch!"
"I can’t," Randy told him practically. "He’ll have too much
company."
"Shut up and take your medicine like a man!" Luke said loudly,
then burst out laughing again.
Randy growled.
Zeb, meanwhile, was silent. He’d never tried to do this in the
dark, but there was always a first time. He stared in the general direction of
the rocks, where the Nunus had emerged.
"Zeb!" This time, the growl was directed at him.
The overlap came, but Zeb couldn’t hold onto it. His eyes were
aching, and he felt tireder than he ever had in his life. "Rand—" he
muttered.
Then, he was confused because it was daylight—no, it was Shea.
Someone else was swearing softly, and sticking a needle into his arm. "Go ’way,
Ness," Zeb muttered.
"Fuck you, too," Ness said, but he didn’t move. "You should
start to feel better in a minute, Zeb," he went on, checking the IV. "Stay with
him, Randy, while I check on the other guy."
"Megalomaniac," Zeb grouched to his back.
"Mediphobic. You’re right, though: just give me a white coat
and I can rule the world."
"His name’s Luke," Randy offered. "And those are Nunus."
Luke noticed that the man "Ness" didn’t seem in the least
surprised to see a load of Nunus on his chest. All he said was "Zeb, you’re an
idiot," before waving one hand to shoo them away. After a few minutes’
examination, he told Luke, "Hit your head pretty hard, did you?"
"Concussion?"
Ness nodded. "Hurt anywhere else?"
"No."
"Good," Ness said, and patted his shoulder. "Stay awake. We’ll
get you out of here soon."
In the background, Zeb was saying in a querulous tone, "They go
back!", and Shea was arguing, with obnoxiously saccharine sweetness, "We’ll see
what your ‘doctor’ says." Then came
Zeb’s weary "Shut up, Shea!", and Randy’s "Quit squirming, you dumbshit!", and
finally, just a growl.
Luke watched as Ness raised his eyes in a bid for patience,
before asking loudly, "Anyone have a drink bottle?"
There was instant silence. Ness grinned. "Gotcha."
Shea kicked him. "You moron!"
Randy was grinning
wolfishly, and even Zeb looked amused.
"Now, Sebastian," Ness said with a false smile, "let’s take
care of that other little problem, shall we?"
"‘We’ll’ just do that," Zeb retorted. He focussed on the wall.
It was a lot easier with the light. "Light helps," he commented.
"No excuses this time," Randy muttered.
Zeb smiled. He focussed, and the smile faded as he
concentrated. The whistle was starting up now, but he was shivering so hard he
was having trouble holding it.
Ness was watching him closely. "Not much time," he whispered to
Randy.
Randy nodded, and moved to the other side of the cavern where
the Mahr lay. He was nearly there when, with a whirring of wings, the seemingly
dead Mahr lifted from the rock.
Randy was taken by surprise. It grabbed at him with talon-like
claws, and—the wings whirring ferociously, started tugging him back across the
uneven floor.
A blaze of light entered Shea’s eyes. In a wave of fury, she
waved her hand, and a brilliant white flare exploded in the Mahr’s face.
The Mahr, temporarily blinded by the burst, dropped Randy like
a stone and flopped feebly, navigating now by sound. As the Nunus scurried
across the distance, the Mahr followed the sweet whistle toward the cavern wall.
Luke watched, stunned, as first the Nunus, and then the
man-eating moth, hit the wall. They seemed to cling, briefly, then were somehow
sucked into, and disappeared through, the solid rock.
What amazed him most was the way the others ignored it.
"Didn’t you see it?" he gasped, worrying
for the first time just how bad his head injury was.
Shea leaped over the uneven stalagmites and dropped to her
knees at Randy’s side. Randy, half-blinded still by the intensity of that last
light, grabbed her roughly and yanked her into his arms. "Help," he whispered.
His hands fumbled over her breasts then worked their way south. "Blinded by your
beauty," he explained.
She grinned.
Ness’ voice was long-sufferingly patient. "You okay,
Randy?"
"Better all the time..." At Ness’ silence, he added, "A few
scratches, and lots of—"
"—‘research for your next book’," Ness interrupted. "I need to
get Zeb out of here. You up to it?"
In answer, Randy stumbled over, and cautiously lifted Zeb up
off the ground. Zeb was limp, but Randy did his best to hold him steady. "Still
a little blind," he admitted seriously.
"Shea?" Ness asked.
Shea took Randy’s arm. Her expression held a trace of remorse.
"Sorry," she told him. To Ness she said, "Ready."
"What about him?" Randy asked, indicating Luke with a nod of
his head.
"I’ll get him." Ness was taking Zeb’s pulse. He didn’t look
happy. "Let’s hurry. The sooner we get him out of here, the better."
*
Luke lay there in the dark, the scent of stale urine strong in
his nostrils. He shifted his leg, and heard the rustle of plastic bag and the
tinkle of broken glass. They’d dumped him here in the alley, and hauled Zeb
Devery away, presumably to the hospital.
He would have been feeling pretty damned vulnerable right now
if he hadn’t overheard them talking. Somewhere nearby, Randy Markington was
lurking; standing guard until help arrived.
It was the oddest rescue Luke had ever been involved in. They’d
treated him well—brought him back to town to within three blocks of the
hospital. Brushed him down before stealing his phone and ID.
Buying time.
They’d also rung for an ambulance.
Now, it was a waiting game. Markington was marked with Devery’s glimmery blood
(glimmery?), so he’d put on Ness’ jacket, and was skulking out
of sight. He wasn’t about to abandon Luke Hamilton to the elements—human or
otherwise. He was waiting because he might be a thief and a Mahr-murderer, but
he had principles. The thought made Luke chuckle.
Which brought a shift of movement in the alley.
Not
Markington. This was another
scavenger, out for whatever he could get. He’d steal the jacket off Luke’s back,
the shoes off his feet, the belt off his pants—if he could get close enough. And
if Luke didn’t have enough to offer, the scavenger would make him pay in some
other way. Luke didn’t feel strong enough right now to rout a rat—of any kind.
He tensed, sickness in the pit of his stomach.
Until he heard a warning growl nearby. He could have sworn
Markington was watching from the roof—he didn’t know how he’d descended so fast.
It was, however, undoubtedly the man’s voice. "I wouldn’t touch him, if I were
you," he warned quietly. Another growl. "Back off."
Who the hell were these
people?
Luke was still wondering it the following morning, when he woke
up to John Colton’s unsmiling face.
Trolls (read it all!)
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I'm so close to finishing BoneSong, my latest WIP, that I'm
already listing in some places, "Author of 24...", but that's a bit of a cheat,
isn't it? As books go - mine, anyway - I could have another 5K - 10K - 20K -
words to go.
That's another thing -
I wrote my first several books in chapters, but then I realised
I was changing the locations of chapter endings, so it was all a little
artificial and fluid. It wasn't long before I began waiting until the end of a
book, dividing it into +/- 10-page sections, and putting in chapter headings at
breaks in the action. Oh, there are places which you can see are perfect for a
chapter ending, and every once in a while, I'll put in a notation for the "Later
Me", but the majority of the time, I can "chapterise" my finished novel within
10 minutes. Since my action goes up and down, I can always find peaks and dips
to address!
And I write in Ks...
I discipline myself to write in Ks=thousands of words=minimum
1000K/day ('course, I blow this all the time, but I try!).
Enough about writing methods! About BoneSong: think non-extinct
Neanderthals with a superiority complex...and difficulties in separating body
and soul. Think walking dead...and coercion beyond the grave.
All my published books are in print again (save Gilded Folly -
Cerridwen Press will bring the print version out in a few months) here in New
Zealand! And ELF and TROLLS are in print INTERNATIONALLY! woohoo!
It's summer here and I'm loving it - kids are home, and that's
the greatest! So much fantastic time together - the best thing in the world!
Cheers, and best wishes to y'all,
ND
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(Gilded Folly)
Oh, below is an excerpt from Trolls - to celebrate its new
print release!
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Prologue
dust devil whirled lazily in the heat, spinning in aimless
gyrations.
Devils without...devils within? He scuffed the dirt, watching
the dust motes drift across the cave mouth—bright bits of sunlight curtaining
the darkness...
Idly, he scuffed his way inside. Only a few steps, from there
to here, and his mother would never know. The dirt he’d stirred swirled around
him, and he blinked to clear his eyes.
He heard it before he saw it. Behind him, there came a whisper
in the dirt, and the first of the incessant rattles began. The dried husk rasp
was joined by another, and another.
The boy twisted slowly, his limbs unnaturally stiff. The day
was so hot...yet he’d never felt so frozen in his life. His heart started
pounding in racing thuds within his chest.
He wasn’t the only one who’d come inside to escape the heat.
Gooseflesh danced across his skin as the rattling tempo increased.
Snakes, and more snakes. He’d scuffed his way into a
nest...
The biggest snake was in the entrance now, blocking his way.
Two smaller ones slithered toward him, and one slid over his shoe. He stood
there, trying not to move...trying not to do anything. Outside, beyond the snake
guardian, another dust devil rose, swirled and died.
Like
me. Eleven-year-old immortality
vanished in an instant, as death rattled at his feet.
One was coiled up near his toes now. When he twitched, its
coils tightened, and the head lifted into strike position...
Reason fled. He leapt for a dark gap in the rock, slid in a
rain of snakes and dirt and ran for his life. Faster and faster, finding his way
by feel alone, panic nipping at his heels with the sharp-fanged tension of a
serpent’s bite.
Down, through the dark, away...
He was moving far too fast, and he should have anticipated
obstacles. But he was only a child, trying to outrun his monsters. When he
tripped over the lamp, he never expected to fall...and keep on falling.
There are things far worse than a serpent’s bite...
Chapter One
eb was only half-listening, and Randy knew it. When Zeb’s eyes
strayed back to his computer screen, and he absently shoved another chocolate
chip cookie in his mouth, Randy said darkly, "He deals in dirt."
Zeb choked on the cookie, coughed, swallowed, then looked at
him through narrowed eyes. Randy Markington’s words had conjured up all kinds of
nefarious dealings, from drug-trafficking to pornography.
Not Randy’s
style.
Then Zeb noticed his expression. I’ve been had...
He returned Randy’s amused look with a dubious frown, and
another mouthful of cookie. "I’m not into soil science."
Randy grinned. "Right on the money—and lots of it. You wouldn’t
believe how lucrative dirt can be. In many parts of the world, pica is a way of
life. People pay big for their exotic blends."
"Sounds illegal."
"It’s not the legalities, so much as the potential for
lawsuits. He needs you, Zeb. I’ve told him you freelance."
"Crock." Zeb turned several cookies over, searching for the one
with the most chocolate bits.
"If growing all that mould in your homemade incubator isn’t
freelancing, what is?" Randy argued. "All he wants is a guarantee, that his
‘mother-lode’ isn’t full of some weird fungus or bacteria. He doesn’t want to
kill his clients."
"How novel," Zeb said dryly. "A responsible scumbag." He held
out the bag. "Sure you don’t want one?"
Randy took a handful, but it didn’t stop him from scowling. "I
think you should trust my judgement. How the hell are we going to fund our
little research projects if we don’t take a risk?"
Zeb shook his head. "I said one, not ten. What’s in it for you,
anyway?"
"For us—and it’s ten percent."
"This ‘test’ was your idea, wasn’t it?" Zeb asked
suspiciously.
Randy looked pointedly at Zeb’s rundown living room. "Science
isn’t ‘pure’ any more, Sebastian. It’s okay to make
money at it."
"How would you
know? Been consulting your oracle
again?"
"Damned slander. You know it’s ‘Grimms Fairy Tales’ or
nothing." Randy grinned, and popped two cookies in his mouth. "Truth is, I don’t
know the first thing about ‘science’. That’s why we need you."
*
Zeb looked at the map once more, then up at the layered rock in
the highway cut. When Randy had enthused over the find yesterday, then plopped
the map on his coffee table with a dramatic, "It’s up to you, Zeb," he’d felt a
glimmer of excitement. By the time Randy had left, Zeb had been almost as
enthusiastic about this venture as Randy himself. He’d tried to hide it, but
Randy knew him too well. His whispered "I’ll tell him you’re ‘in’," hadn’t even
seemed melodramatic, any more than his "Let me know as soon as you get back. I
want to see it."
"You’re in for ten percent and you haven’t even seen your
‘product’?"
Randy had frowned. "I’m the idea man—" he began.
Zeb gave a rude snort and went back to studying the map.
"What’s this one?" he asked, holding up a second piece of paper.
"Detailed instructions. He figured you might have trouble with
‘X marks the spot’."
"Doesn’t ‘he’ have a name?"
Randy clapped a hand on Zeb’s shoulder. "’course he does," he
said kindly. Then, without another word, he sniggered and strolled out the
door.
Skulduggery. Pirates. Thieves. Zeb left the highway and
followed a dirt track for what seemed like miles. Hell, it was
miles. How had the man ever found his "motherlode" in the first place? A glance
in the rearview mirror revealed only dust. Clouds of dust trailing behind him as
far as he could see. How damned
discreet.
He pulled to a stone-crunching halt as he realised he’d nearly
overshot his mark. Once again, he studied the rocks overhead. Two big holes,
behind what could have been a vulture’s beak.
Charming. There was a comical
rendering of a vulture’s head on the print-out. At least Mr. X had a sense of
humour. This had to be the place.
Feeling a little foolish, Zeb started pacing off the distance.
He re-thought it, decided that he couldn’t afford to make a mistake at this
point, and retrieved the tape measure he’d tossed in the trunk.
He repeated his measurements five times, but there was no way
around it. Cautiously, he yanked the tumbleweed out of the way, and rolled a
mini boulder to one side. He peered into a gaping hole in the damned vulture’s
belly.
A cave. No one said anything about a cave.
Zeb rechecked the "detailed instructions" sheet.
Minor omission.
Don’t bother mentioning your "product" is underground.
If I were smart,
I’d turn around right now...
But of course he wouldn’t.
All I need now
is another complication. Their last
effort had nearly hung them all, and they were still trying to live down the
notoriety. They needed to let things sit for a while, and wait for the dust to
settle. How
appropriate, Zeb thought wryly,
wiping grit out of his eyes.
He squinted down at the map. "Non-involvement" might not be an
option, now that he’d seen the map. He didn’t know who the hell this Mr. X was,
but he might not take too kindly to having his mother-lode revealed, without
some kind of payback.
Dirt? Hardly seemed lucrative
enough to worry about. Zeb was having a little trouble swallowing Randy’s claims
about pica.
Maybe it’s
really uranium, Zeb thought.
Maybe Mr. X doesn’t want to do
the radioactive dirty work himself...
Excuses. If
there were a uranium deposit, someone would have picked it up on an assay a
while back.
Get your butt in there, scoop up some soil, and get out. Ten
feet in, ten feet out. Easy. No reason to go any further...
Zeb scuffed through the dirt and watched warily for snakes. He
hated the things. Years ago, when he was a kid, he’d been trapped in a cave,
much like this one. He hadn’t known he was visiting a snake den until he was
surrounded. Terrified, he’d headed for the hills—which, in that case, had been
synonymous with the bowels of the Earth.
It was a nearly forgotten memory: suppressed by time, delirium,
and the horrifying events which had followed. He had only a dim recollection of
that seventy-two-hour ordeal, and no memory at all of the rescue. All he knew
for certain was that it had changed him—one of those formative events after
which he could never be the same.
He’d been terrified of snakes ever since.
This little trek would have been easier with a flashlight. That
hadn’t been on his "detailed" instruction sheet, either.
He shook his head as he recalled Randy’s expression.
Bet he didn’t know it was a cave.
If he had, he would never have let me come alone...
Sending him out to
do some boring dirt collection was one thing—a thing good ol’ Randy no doubt
wanted to avoid.
He’ll casually "turn up", after I’m finished with the
nitty-gritty...
Zeb lifted his shirt over his nose, and sucked in a deep breath
of hot, filtered air. He held it as he ducked in under the crusty roof.
*
The visibility was poor. No flashlight, and way too much dust.
What hadn’t been stirred up by his car, and helped by the breeze, had been sent
flying by an incautious scrape of his shoulder against the dirt-caked entry. His
view was now disrupted by gritty, watery eyes, and dim lighting. He frowned in
frustration, and heard the nasty crunching of high-flying dirt between his
teeth. Supposedly, that’s what this deal was about: selling soil on the black
market to all those nearly fanatical soil ingesters around the world.
There were elite coffees, teas, and special waters;
connoisseurial repasts with unique ingredients. Why not specialty dirt? Try as
he would, though, he couldn’t get the definition of pica out of his head. A
craving for dirt and clay—and it was considered a disease. His conscience was
twanging now. Am I contributing to someone’s illness, the way tobacco companies
contribute to lung cancer? People with pica, who nibbled dirt for pleasure, were
frequently addicted to the habit. Was he about to become a supplier?
How
sick. He wiped his sweaty face on his
sleeve. And froze.
There was a weird sound—a kind of high-pitched whistling noise
that hummed, rose in fast tempo, then fell once more. Like the resonance of a particularly
sweet-throated bird...
It was a sound he’d heard many times before.
Zeb’s skin tingled with excitement, and he realised he was
smiling.
Dammit, Fool! Get out—while you still can...
The hell with
the dirt. He had bad feelings about
these soil samples anyway. There was something not quite right in the
transaction—somethi ng he couldn’t reconcile with his conscience. His
contribution might be as inconsequential as pouring a cup of coffee for a
caffeine addict, but he was opting out.
He could guess how Randy would react, and felt a momentary
qualm. Dammit if he wanted to disappoint his best friend, but it wouldn’t do
Randy’s rep any good if he were to get involved in something illegal.
Eyes enough focussed our way already...
He froze. There it was again: that warbling trill that left an
echo, like a pleasant aftertaste, in his ears. He closed his eyes, letting his
ears do the tracking.
Caution reared its ugly head, in the form of a hiss and rattle.
Zeb’s mouth went dry, and his muscles locked up. Snake.
Rattlesnake!
And I can’t see a damn thing...
Panic set his heart pounding, and a bead of sweat ran down his
sweat-streaked face. Where the
hell is it?!
Listen...
His panicky pant was drawing dirt into his throat and he
coughed and wheezed. He pulled his shirt up over his nose and mouth again and
fought for control.
It was coming. The sweet echo was there again, luring him on.
In that moment, the rasp of shivering rattle became a background noise. Zeb took
another step.
He shook his head, in an attempt to clear it.
Don’t do
this...
But his feet weren’t listening. He stumbled along, oblivious
now to the snake, until he’d left it far behind. He couldn’t see a bloody thing,
and the air was thick around him, but when the passage narrowed, he dropped to
his knees and crawled on.
Never
alone. They’d warned him, begged him,
pleaded with him, and in his head, whispered caution mingled with that trilling
warble.
Have to get there, before The Whistler gives up...
They’ll understand. Sweat streaked his face as compulsion warred with
guilt. They know what you
are...
He had to be there. Before the last of his marrow melded with
the soil. While there was still enough of him remaining within to summon from
without.
Zeb was nearly there. The sound in his ears was deafening now,
but there was suddenly no sweetness to it. No whistling lure—only a hideous
scream of human agony.
One loud crack, and then another. Snapping bone...
There was a harsh yelp, the scrape of gravel, and a thud as the
body was tossed into a hole. Tossed away like refuse and left to rot. Zeb
covered his ears. Now, he covered his nose. Rotting flesh. Rotting carcass.
Fuckin’ hell!
Zeb struggled to his feet—and took a hasty step. The next
second he tripped and went sprawling.
Must be the
lantern... He remembered how they’d
left it burning, so he could watch himself die...
Shit!
He shivered, and scrunched his eyes closed—suddenly terrified
his eyes would get as much feedback as his ears and nose. Afraid that the
visions flickering behind his eyes would somehow gain substance.
It was one of the worst. He hadn’t had an episode like this in
years.
Get out...now!
Before it’s too late.
His heart thumped. Run!
He did. Arms outstretched to deflect obstacles, he turned back
determinedly the way he’d come.
*
"It’s his damned odometer," Randy explained, glaring
disgustedly at Bertha’s dusty rusty hood. "I told him he should get it fixed. He
went too far." He slapped his hand angrily against the top, and a wave of dust
flew skyward. "Zeb!" he bellowed.
But Luke Hamilton was looking at the footprints in the dirt. He
followed them, noting how Devery had walked back on his own trail repeatedly,
before a singular set of prints entered the dark hole ahead. He pictured his
instruction sheet, and saw how the mistake had been made. He glanced up. No
doubt about it—from this angle, the rock made a better bird head than the one
half a mile back.
He squatted at the entrance to the cave and peered warily
within. "Devery!" he yelled.
Only a whisper of sliding gravel answered him.
Randy came running. "You think he’s in there?" he asked, a
resigned note in his voice.
"Know anything about spelunking?" Luke retorted, annoyed. "Get
the flashlight and rope out of my trunk," he ordered harshly. When Randy
returned, Hamilton reluctantly handed him his phone.
"I’ve got my own—" Randy argued.
Luke sighed, and looked at the long shadows etched in the rock
face. "I have an appointment later," he admitted. "If I’m not out by seven,
punch in ‘one’. Someone’ll pick it up."
Randy shook his head. "I’m going in after him! You handle your
own damn phone!"
Luke gripped the front of his shirt so tightly he was choking.
Randy swung at him. The next thing he knew, he was flat on his back, and Luke
was peering down at him, a glint of amusement in his eyes. He said calmly, "Tell
them I’m in a cave, and that there may be a ‘situation’."
Randy frowned, and his eyes narrowed. "And if I don’t?"
Luke shrugged. "They’ll turn up anyway, but it’ll take ’em
longer." He grinned. "At least this way, they’ll come prepared."
Randy gave him a five-minute head start. There was no way he
was going to let Luke Hamilton find Zeb first. A little reluctantly, he punched
"one" on Luke’s phone, spat out "there’s a situation in a cave", and propped the
phone at the entrance. Satisfied, he grabbed the other flashlight, and followed
the dusty footprints into the cave. If he were lucky, he’d have Zeb out of here
long before Hamilton’s friends ever turned up.
*
The trail tapered off on hard rock, and Luke didn’t dare take
it any farther. He turned back, disturbed and more than a little confused. What
the hell was Devery doing? Was he so ignorant of cave exploration that he’d take
off on his own? Even a novice should know the hazards...
Stupid. Ignorant. Panicked.
None of it felt right. He had a dossier on Sebastian Devery,
and he’d read it thoroughly—hell, half a dozen people, from psychologists to
statisticians had read it thoroughly—before they’d arranged this contact. The
man was neither stupid, nor prone to panic attacks. Maybe he suffers from some kind of
claustrophobia.
No wonder. This wasn’t Devery’s first cave exploration. He’d
visited many of the caves in this area, until he’d been lost in one as a kid. It
was the only record in Luke’s carefully-acquired dossier with any indication of
instability. Devery had been brought out, semi-delirious, on a stretcher. He’d
raved on about weird whistles and broken bones. Imagination gone wild in the
confines of a narrow crevasse. Understandable, considering the kid had been in
there three days.
Now, the man claimed to hate both snakes, and the holes in the
ground that harboured them.
How the hell had he coaxed himself into this one? Luke watched
the light throw the hard rock into eerie relief. Devery must be more greedy than
any of them had thought.
There was a sound behind him, and Luke jumped. He realised he’d
let his mind wander. "Devery!" he called out.
It wasn’t Devery. That irritatingly loud gum-chewing couldn’t
belong to anybody but Randolph Markington. Nervous habit, purported to be worse
since his recent divorce.
The man was ill-equipped to deal with this kind of situation.
Hell, he taught "cryptozoology", and wrote books about fairy tales. Too damn
trusting for his own good. He’d allowed himself to be suckered into this soil
scheme for a quick buck.
A whiff of raspberry bubblegum confirmed the man’s identity,
and Luke flicked the light his way—hiding his derision behind the beam.
Snap. Pop. Chew. Crack.
Hope there’s
grit in it... The man had talked
non-stop all the way out here, and just about driven him nuts. At this point,
Luke was thinking of him as a weak link: loquacious, difficult, and definitely
open to bribery. He sniffed the overly sweet scent again. A very weak link.
But, he’d come in after Devery.
Or maybe, he just didn’t want to be left alone...
Luke knew he was sneering, and he deliberately relaxed his
facial muscles. Markington was weak—not stupid.
"Randy!" he called out.
"Any sign of him?" Randy asked.
"Not yet." Luke could resist adding, "If you’d keep the noise
level down a little, I might have more—"
It was as far as he got. Something in Markington’s expression
stopped him. The man had tilted his head and was now sniffing at the air. A
glint in his eyes, and a tensing of muscle, and he was gone. Luke was left there
alone, his flashlight aimed at a rock wall.
He shook his head, and took off after Markington.
Caves, he thought. Never again...
*
"It was the fuckin’ whistling, wasn’t it?" The hollow echo of
their conversation hit Luke’s ears. "Must have been bad if you left your brains
back at the entrance." The last was said derisively, in a rumble that was almost
a growl.
"Bad, but in case you hadn’t noticed, I was on my way back."
Devery’s voice became enthusiastic as he added, "It’s a good one, Randy. Really
promising."
Markington groaned. "So? You were supposed to be digging up
dirt— only. Of the soil kind."
Zeb chuckled. "We all have our weaknesses." There was a pause.
"At least I don’t chew gum to hide mine—"
"No—you just go wandering into ca-" His voice stopped abruptly.
"Company."
Luke hadn’t moved a muscle. He’d been standing there,
shamelessly eavesdropping. How
could he know? Hell, I’m downwind...
Even as he thought it, gooseflesh lifted on his arms. The
dossiers had always been fairly accurate before, from physical habits to
psychological profile. With all that information, Luke should have been able to
predict everything from their reactions to their next bowel movements. Instead,
he was left uncomfortably aware that he was here, in the near-dark, with two
unknowns.
And he was suddenly very glad help would be waiting
outside.
That’s if
Markington followed instructions...
Sweat chased the gooseflesh across his skin.
He was still standing there, wondering what to do when Randy
Markington’s voice rang out. "Come on out, Hamilton," he bellowed
cheerfully.
There was a pause, and then Devery’s voice followed. "Yeah,
Hamilton," he said, with a trace of amusement. "We won’t bite."
*
Luke moved quietly along the passage, and climbed through a
narrow hole. As he reached through, their hands yanked him up and out. It
surprised him to feel how hot they both were. His own fingers and toes felt like
ice.
He was still finding his balance when Devery grinned. "Zeb
Devery," he said.
"Luke Hamilton," he said abruptly. He cursed himself for his
clumsiness. Devery hadn’t missed the harsh note. The man was looking at him
strangely.
He had a sudden feeling the time for subterfuge was past. If he
wanted their cooperation, he’d have to buy it—with honesty. Devery would never
believe the story he’d given Markington.
He heard a snigger from that direction. Apparently, Markington
didn’t believe it, either. Luke had been considering him a fool, but now he
realised Markington had actually been playing him for one. "You seem to have
taken to spelunking rather well," he told him acerbically.
"Not my first cave," Randy admitted.
Zeb Devery looked from one to the other. "Did you come in after
me?" He sounded surprised.
"What did you think?" Randy retorted. "You
blew it, Zeb. This isn’t where you’re supposed to be."
Zeb shrugged. "Oops."
"Yeah," Randy said caustically. "For all we knew, you could
have lost your way, or been lured underground by some weird sounds." He smirked.
"Strange places, caves."
Zeb’s eyes glinted. "Trick the eyes—and ears. A man might even
think he overheard something he didn’t." He looked at Luke. "Echoes, you
know."
The warning was clear, and a trickle of fear went down Luke’s
spine. "Let’s move," he said brusquely. "We can talk outside." He took a few
steps in what he thought was the right direction. When he turned around,
Markington and Devery were still standing there, looking amused. "Well?" he
asked.
"Wrong way," Markington told him.
Luke frowned and waited.
Devery listened, then told Luke, "Better hurry, before your
‘help’ stomps down here to help us out."
Luke looked startled, but Zeb’s grin was a flash of white in
the dim light. "Randy told me you’d called out the troops."
No, he didn’t.
If he had, you wouldn’t have been surprised we were searching...
The man hadn’t been startled by Markington’s appearance—merely
at the reasons for it.
Luke trailed along behind them, back through the narrow
passages, listening to... nothing. He couldn’t hear a thing—no distant
footfalls, no shuffling, no voices to warn of rescue. The weight of rock around
him seemed increasingly threatening—heavy and sombre. So were his thoughts. He
realised that somehow, and for some reason, he’d been out-manoeuvred.
*
They emerged into a cloud of dirt. The whup-whup of the
helicopter’s engine died away, but the dust stayed a while. Somehow, during
those last few feet, their roles had become reversed. Luke was now leading the
way.
The faces greeting him were both concerned and relieved.
Apparently, the man was well-liked. It wasn’t until the third inquiry about
Hamilton’s health that Zeb was able to put it together, though. "Hamilton", AKA
"Mr. X", was The Hamilton. He was either the founder, the owner, or
the heir to the company.
Maybe some of
his popularity is gold-plated, Zeb
thought, a little cynically.
Hamilton was being beckoned to one side now and Zeb saw him
nodding reassurances to the helicopter pilot. Apparently, someone was on the
radio who wanted confirmation from the man himself.
The heir. He’s
definitely the heir. Zeb found it
amusing. It was even more amusing to see how Hamilton took all this—from the
equipment, to the personnel—in his stride.
All in a day’s
profiteering...
Whatever Hamilton was saying on the radio included a few
gestures in their direction, and Zeb dawned his best mea culpa look. He managed to convey fear mixed with
embarrassment—just enough to dissuade Hamilton from revealing his
suspicions.
Hamilton had a hint of anger in his expression now. He knew,
just as Zeb did, that if he were to mention the conversation he’d overheard,
he’d look like a fool.
Zeb glanced at Randy to see how he was taking all the
notoriety. He was smiling a little grimly—still chewing gum that by now must be
both flavourless and gritty. And when his eyes flickered in Zeb’s direction for
the third time, Zeb forced a smile.
Randy wasn’t fooled. Zeb was still pale. It must’ve been a bad one. "Worse than usual?" he asked quietly.
Zeb nodded.
"Nasty places, caves," he replied.
"I want to go back."
Randy didn’t look surprised. "When?"
"If you’re not too busy making millions," Zeb said, that glint
in his eyes, "how about tonight?"
Randy sighed. "Ever eager, aren’t we?" he hissed.
"Tourists will have left by then," Zeb muttered.
Randy gave a small nod. "I’ll bring the light."
At that, Zeb gave a rude snort. "I’ll bet you will." he
replied.
*
Unfounded
suspicion. It would take him a while
to word his report—to offer a hint of some deeper involvement by Markington and
Devery, so that once he had the facts, the suggestions of duplicity would be
there.
Luke had seen the look in Devery’s eyes. It was the same one
he’d seen a dozen times before, as people made the connection between his
surname and the logo on the helicopter. His predecessors were neither
excessively modest nor particularly subtle. His grandfather might be pushing
ninety, but he still insisted on displaying his "crest" on everything he
owned.
It was one of the reasons Luke had left it all behind. For ten
years, he’d worked with the sordid and corrupt while his family had labelled him
temporarily depraved. It was only six months ago, when he’d taken two bullets in
the gut, that he’d been forcibly brought back into the fold. For weeks he’d been
too ill to argue, and the department had been happy to limit their fiscal
responsibility for his recovery, while his family put him in the hands of
specialists.
Now that Luke was back at work, John Colton was using his
corporate ties to provide a cover. It made sense to utilise the connection to
his—and the ISEA’s—advant age. Luke, for his part, was forced to comply, but he’d
added a codicil: neither his ties to, nor his activities on behalf of, the ISEA
could be allowed to unfavourably influence the firm’s standing—nor could any
intimate knowledge of Hamilton Industries be used to drag the corporation down.
Now that he was fully recovered, Luke found he was chafing at
the constraints. Maintaining a pose at Hamilton might make sense, but it damn
well limited his usefulness. One identity could only go so far, and the more
notoriety, the less he’d be able to function undercover.
During his recuperation, in those weak moments when he’d
thought he’d never regain his strength and endurance, he’d sometimes wondered
whether his father and Colton had struck a deal. James Hamilton was no fool, and
he knew Luke was playing both sides of the fence. There might be merit in his
son’s accomplishments, but he couldn’t see why the hazardous tasks of following
through on an investigation couldn’t be performed by someone else. Someone with
less to lose.
But, Luke was his own man, and had seen too much of both
coercion and extortion to be susceptible to his father’s manipulations. The best
way of accomplishing James’ goals was to get his son involved. From James’ point
of view, as long as Luke kept his hand in, the day would come when tracking down
felons would become secondary. A mental exercise only, which could eventually be
turned over to Colton and others like him, while the real "players" manipulated
currency and commodities.
Luke nodded to his escort, then—at a thumbs up from
Markington—climbed into the helicopter. He was irritated because he’d informed
Colton about the cave situation, yet Hamilton Industries had responded. Oh,
there were a few ISEA people around, but, by and large, this was his father’s
show. If he’d needed any further evidence of duplicity, it had just been shoved
in his face.
And it was the first time in years he could recall feeling any
embarrassment over the trappings of wealth that surrounded him, and the
apparently store-bought concern of his "employees". It was as though he’d
punched "911", and the Queen’s Royal Guard had responded. He felt like a
fool.
Markington and Devery know nothing about you...
And it wasn’t necessary for them to approve of his fiscal
arrangements or business concerns. His eyes narrowed, and he focused on the
investigation. The proposition to Markington and Devery had been much simpler
than that: they were either in, or out.
What bothered him now was how little he really knew about them.
It was the first time he could ever recall being so misled by someone’s dossier.
The facts might be there, but the interpretation was entirely wrong.
An unreasonable solution would be to have both of them tailed.
Surveillance was expensive, and he’d have to justify it to Colton. Unless he
funded it directly from his own pockets. Colton would never agree to funding for
something so impractical—and there was hardly a rationale for such a precipitate
move.
Except his suspicions, unfounded as they were, that Markington
and Devery were hiding something. Something very important, that might, in the
end, prove nearly as valuable as underground sources for unusual crystals.
Luke’s eyes glinted. Maybe Colton’s arrangements had nothing to
do with a golden handshake between the ISEA’s strained finances, and Hamilton
Industries’ overflowing ones. Maybe it was much more simple than that. John
Colton had always encouraged his agents to act justly, reasonably, and
intelligently within the budget.
It could be this is what he’d intended all along. Luke
Hamilton’s budget constraints had just been lifted.
*
The moon perched, half-full, just above the mountains. The
jagged silhouettes were etched in a faint orange glow from the city beyond. Now
that the dust had cleared, he could see the sharp crystalline glints of stars,
and the milky streaks of galactic turbulence. Hot day, but chilly night. It ate
through his thin jacket.
Unprepared
again, Zeb? He couldn’t afford to
be—not tonight. Tension knotted his stomach. The afternoon’s experience was
still too fresh—and too familiar—to dismiss.
Relax. He perched on the
bumper, then scooted back onto Bertha’s hood. The metal gave an unpleasant
metallic thunk, but it didn’t faze him—his car was riddled with rust, dents and
creases. One more wouldn’t matter, and it was a small price for the engine
warmth, and satisfied any anticipatory nigglings of claustrophobia. Every time
he thought "cave" he admitted to nervous trepidation at the memories of confined
space. It was the greatest of his spelunking fears, and the one he guessed would
always be hardest for him to overcome.
For now, it was enough to soak up some residual engine heat,
lean back against the windscreen, and watch for low-flying bats, night birds,
and pollinating moths.
And headlights. He’d never been one for patience—not since he’d
been trapped in a hole with bones and blood. No, patience had never been his
strong point. Waiting merely made anticipation worse.
Get it over with...
Damn, it was tempting! He picked at a bug splat on his
windshield. Randy would find him—no doubt about it. He glanced at his watch,
gave the hood an impatient thud, then slid to the ground. He had work in the
morning, and there was no telling how long this would take. He picked up his
flashlight, a rope, and a bag of Snickers, then headed back into the
cave.
*If you'd like me to post a few more chapters, drop me an email to tell
me (sfnovels@gmail.com)!
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